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Issue208."The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."  人们的眼神、衣着和行动表现了他们的态度和兴趣。你可以通过观察人们的外表和行为来获知这个社会的想法和价值
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类别：社会类（9次在0603）
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提纲Issue208 "The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."

翻译：人们的眼神、穿着和动作都揭示了他们的态度和兴趣。你可以透过观察一个社会中人们的外貌和举止来认识该社会的理念和价值观
提纲
（1）人的外貌就是外表和穿着，人的举止就是动作，这些都能揭示人的态度和兴趣，同时也能反映社会的理念和价值观。
（2）从人的外貌来看，外貌是了解一个人或社会最直接途径。1。人的第一印象来自于他的外表，比如：爱好不同穿着不同 例子，登山者，和摇滚歌手。（Columbia mountaineering bizarre clothes）2。人的外表能展现社会的某些方面。例子阿拉伯国家的女人不能露脸face glimpsed by people，说明这些社会的女人地位底；appendixes 法国人穿着随便休闲，说明他们很浪漫。3，外貌还能体现一个社会的变化，比如：几十年前在中国穿牛仔裤的人甚至被认为是坏人，说明那时候的人想法很偏激传统，但现在这种想法已经消失了，任何人都可以穿，甚至被认为是时尚。
（3）但是我们不得不承认有时“我们的眼睛会欺骗我们”，根据一个人的外貌可能会产生某些错误认识。比如人们常常认为穿着好的人就是成功的人，反而不愿意和穿着不好的人交往，其实这是有偏见的。但是举止却是人的内心的真实反映。比如人们尊老爱幼、彬彬有礼，可以反映出人们的人品，等等。人的行为反映出社会的观念，例子中美两国人们消费观念不同。
（4）因此观察一个人、一个社会都要结合外貌和举止两方面来看。
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正文
As is know to everyone, people's appearance that is look and dress and People's behavior that is action both can reveal their attitudes and interests. we can find that these facets can also reveal a society's ideas and values. as I talk below。


On the one hand, appearance is the most direct way for people to learn a person or a society.  Firstly, we often get the first impressions of a person from his appearance.  Just as people in different habits dress differently.  When someone dresses in the cloth, which is marked of Columbia (a band of climbing things) , we will think he must be very interesting in mountaineering.  When someone dresses himself with nails and rings and bizarre clothes, we are easy to treat him as a rock and roll singer. Secondly, the appearance also can reveal some characters of a society. For example, the women of Arab countries should not let their face glimpsed by people except their husbands, and this custom shows that the women in these countries have very low social position and are considered as their husbands' appendixes. For another example, Frenchmen always dress as they like, and the phenomenon tells us that they are very romantic. Thirdly, we can find the change of a society from its people's appearance variety. Take China as an example, several years ago, dressing jeans was thought as a crazy action and children who wanted to dress jeans would be blamed strictly by their parents because the parents thought the action is the symptom of their children to get worse. In fact the ideas of those people are totally absurd and very traditional. Now those ideas have disappeared and everyone can put on jeans freely, indeed, the jeans are even considered as fashion. From the great differences, we can know that the ideas and values of China have changed dramatically during these years.


On the other hand, we have to admit that sometimes our eyes will cheat us, in other words, to judge a person only by his appearance maybe make some mistakes. In fact, it is bias that thinking a person dressed well as a successful one and being reluctant to communicate with people with poor clothes.  Behavior is the real reaction of one's heart and more suitable for learning a person’s essence. For instance, when a person is very polite and personable, we can directly conclude that he has good bearing. If most people of a society perform like this, we will learn that the society's vogue is considerable good. Similarly, a society's ideas and values can be reflected by people’s behavior. For example, there are great differences on treating with money between American and Chinese. American prefer to spend all their money and even borrow money from bank to purchase something they like, however, Chinese more like to save their money to banks and most of them will not choose the consumption mode that first consume and refund later. From this facet, the distinction of values between American and Chinese can be observed.


To sum up, it is true that we can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people, however, we should consider both facets at the same time, especially cannot overlook the behavior.


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字数：550 words
时间：文章主体来自AMY208 进行了修改。用时1小时20分钟。

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觉得这样的写法还是可以的。类似于散文了。每段的中心很大分几个小的主题句来论述。很丰满，而且好写！对于一些很难写的文章，只有几个例子能想到，而且还连系不到一起，用个很含糊的段落T。S照一下。后面各写各的应该也可以吧？而且把2个分观点用一句话联系一下感觉特别好一点也不生硬，比如：倒数第2段的we will learn that the society's vogue is considerable good. Similarly, a society's ideas and values can be reflected by people’s behavior.相反更贴现了论证的完整与合理大家觉得呢？回下你的观点。。终于感觉到视野宽阔了。。。