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51。Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student.




Education is the most important part of the country. Its effectiveness not only establishes the foundation of individuals and the state but also continually determines the future of individuals and the state. There is a long controversial magnitude problem for the issue and cannot be solved in common because of there many obstacles and limits which is exists in the real world. As far as I concerned, I agree with the statement that education can be truly effective when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student but we the society has the trouble attaining such a goal because of many limits of socioeconomic conditions and maybe there are some other ways to get the effective education.

What is the target of education? “Learning to know, learning to do, learning to be and learning to get together.” UNESCO defines it at the Congress of Paris in 1996.

First, interest is the best teacher all over the world. So, student does well in the subject which is interesting in his opinion usually and get a high score to show off in the class for satisfying their vanity and establishing their self-confident which is the foundation of the future. It is learning to know.

Second, when one does what he likes, perhaps he will never have the passive feelings such as tired, bored and constrained. One gets the most prodigious development of his intelligence in his favorite field. Tomas Edison, with only three months of formal education, became one of the greatest inventors and industrial leaders in history. He believes that interest is the source of invention. It is learning to do.

However, although education regards individual needs as its start and future’s direction, on the whole, it can never absolutely meet individual needs and interests but relatively meet some needs and interests from individuals. As we know, there are much knowledge and many skills which are necessary. Students must learn some skills about how to survive solely, realize and bring out perspective of value and philosophy of life. If not, maybe they will pay much for it in their rest life. Therefore, learning to be a qualified people does not lean on individual needs or interests. In some aspects, moral education is the core business in studying.

Furthermore, education attains such a goal to learn not only some knowledge or skills but also to cooperate with others. There are always limits in material, time and space and other restraints about economy, history and culture. This condition has been existed all the time. Consequently, students need to learn to get together although from such different backgrounds. If one only does care about him, how can he learn the interpersonal skills.

The traditional teacher-oriented education often neglects the individual needs and interests of each student, which proves counterproductive. And the student-oriented education is the most effective way to help students learn. In summery, truly effective education is hard to reach unless the educator gets a good balance in above factors.

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51。Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student.




Education is the most important part of the country.(能不能改成 Education is one of the most important parts of the country.) Its effectiveness not only establishes the foundation of individuals and the state but also continually determines the future of individuals and the state. There is a long controversial magnitude problem for the issue and cannot be solved in common because of there are many obstacles and limits which is exists in the real world.(many 和后面的 is exists 貌似不搭配) As far as I concerned, I agree with the statement that education can be truly effective when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student but we the society has the trouble attaining such a goal because of many limits of socioeconomic conditions and maybe there are some other ways to get the effective education.

What is the target of education? “Learning to know, learning to do, learning to be and learning to get together.” UNESCO defines it at the Congress of Paris in 1996.（这段能不能加进第一段或者加在你的正文里，在这里我觉得有点唐突，加在正文段可以作为你的论据）

First, interest is the best teacher all over the world. So, student does well in the subject which is interesting in his opinion usually and get a high score to show off in the class for satisfying their vanity and establishing their self-confident which is the foundation of the future. It is learning to know.

Second, when one does what he likes, perhaps he will never have the passive feelings such as tired, bored and constrained. One gets the most prodigious development of his intelligence in his favorite field. Tomas Edison, with only three months of formal education, became one of the greatest inventors and industrial leaders in history. He believes that interest is the source of invention. It is learning to do.

However, although education regards individual needs as its start and future’s direction, on the whole, it can never absolutely meet individual needs and interests but relatively meet some needs and interests from individuals. As we know, there are much knowledge and many skills which are necessary. Students must learn some skills about how to survive solely, realize and bring out perspective of value and philosophy of life. If not, maybe they will pay much for it in their rest life. Therefore, learning to be a qualified people does not lean on individual needs or interests. In some aspects, moral education is the core business in studying.

Furthermore, education attains such a goal to learn not only some knowledge or skills but also to cooperate with others. There are always limits in material, time and space and other restraints about economy, history and culture. This condition has been existed all the time. Consequently, students need to learn to get together although from such different backgrounds. If one only does care about him, how can he learn the interpersonal skills.

The traditional teacher-oriented education often neglects the individual needs and interests of each student, which proves counterproductive. And the student-oriented education is the most effective way to help students learn. In summery, truly effective education is hard to reach unless the educator gets a good balance in above factors.


整体评价：论证过程展开的不足，尤其是FIRST AND SECOND 两段，字数有点少了，不管怎么说，字数在某种程度上能体现你的语言运用能力，字数不够自然说明在论证上有所缺陷，以后多注意下。应该多用例子，名人名言等，这样字数也就提高上去了

我在这方面也欠缺得很 呵呵 我们一起努力，后面就没有为你细看了，我觉得我们应该多看看范文，谢谢。

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147.The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine.

"Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past
two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales
trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what
features they thought were most important in a video game. According to
the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which
require the most up-to-date computers. Whirlwind has just introduced
several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at
people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games.
It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to
increase dramatically in the next few months."
a.调查对象不在10－25年龄层
b.只满足一个最喜欢的因素，远远不够
c.别的游戏，未必不精彩，或许在任何一个方面都比W公司的做的出色
d.或许，此类游戏，对10－25岁年龄层的人没多大的吸引力，宣传的群体选择错误
e.或许，能符和高级电脑配置的人群不多，且不喜欢玩此类游戏


17.The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Walnut Grove
town newspaper.

"Walnut Grove's town council has advocated switching from EZ Disposal
(which has had the contract for trash collection services in Walnut Grove
for the past ten years) to ABC Waste, because EZ recently raised its
monthly fee from $2,000 to $2,500 a month, whereas ABC's fee is still
$2,000. But the town council is mistaken; we should continue using EZ. EZ
collects trash twice a week, while ABC collects only once. Moreover,
EZ-which, like ABC, currently has a fleet of 20 trucks-has ordered
additional trucks. Finally, EZ provides exceptional service: 80 percent of
respondents to last year's town survey agreed that they were 'satisfied'
with EZ's performance."
a.ABC的价钱比EZ优惠
b.EZ做两次的事情ABC一次就能做好
c.EZ20两车还不够，而ABC已经足够了
d.对EZ不满意的，当然20％是少数，但对服务性行业来说，有5分之一的人们不满意，实在不能称之为优秀
e.EZ虽然有80％的满意度，但也许ABC更高