六月IELTS 七分保底小组 (A类)computervision第三次作业(完成2/5)

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The chart describes the main steps of how to write a formal academic essay. As can be seen, the entire process mainly involves six steps

Starting writing, your primary task is to select a proper essay topic that you are interested in. This can be achieved by discussing with your private tutor, who will guide you and give you a list of reference books. After that, you should borrow relative books from libraries in term of the reference list. A large amount of reading is not avoided, but it will help you to make some questionnaires which you will adopt in the next field work to conduct interviews and complete your surveys. What is next is organize your essay content based on your collected data, and first draft will have a brief outline. In this step, you must take care of your written English. Formal written style and language checking is essential.

After finishing your first drift, you can discuss it with your second private tutors or with your classmates in the study group. Ask them for some advice and suggestions, which will benefit you in the next step----second draft. In the second draft step, the resource material will be read twice, then first draft should be revised and a more detailed checking process should be implemented including absorbing some positive suggestions and correcting quotations. However, this is not the final version of your essay. It will be completely finished until you do the final rewrite, check your spell, plus compile bibliography and add title page in the final draft step. Now, submit your essay by deadline.
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The table demonstrates citizen favorite styles for automatic washing machines in UK, Germany, France and Sweden.

The residents in UK and Sweden have some common points, when they buy their washing machines. Both of them love 34'' and wide shell dimension style, front loading, stainless steel drum material, the 6 kilos capacity and tumble washing action. But, as for the spin speed of the machines, 850rps is British favorite, while 800 rpm is more preferable in Sweden. Meanwhile, British hope there is water heating systems and the styling feature is indestructible appearance, while people living in Sweden like strong appearance style and water heating system is useless for them.

On the other side, 34'' and narrow shell dimension, Enamel drum material, 5 kilos capacity and agitator washing action washing machine are prevalent in France and Germany. But, for German consumers, their favorite loading is top style, the only country loving this style. Their prefer spin speeds are also distinctive, 700rpm for German and 600rpm for French respectively. Lastly, washing machines with inconspicuous appearance and no water heating system are sold better in Germany, while elegant appearance and configured with water heating system washing machines are popular.

From the analysis above, I recommend that, in oder to satisfy different demands, washing machines factories should configure their goods according to preferences of different country users.