issue154 [awer]小组第5次作业,求砖头

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Issue154  "Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators."
家长和社会都应该参与到当地的学校中来。教育太重要了，不能把教育单独交给一群专业的老师。

提纲（同意）
1.     肯定学校教育的核心地位和重要性
2.     论述父母参与到学校教育中的必要性和重要性
3.     论述社会参与到学校教育中的必要性和重要性
4.     再次明确，父母和社会支起辅助作用，学校教育才是中心


Education is one of the key issues of our era. Convinced of the importance of education, many children go to schools to get education. Therefore, I agree with the statement that education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators. Only depending on local schooling is not enough to instruct students well, both parents and communties should involve in the children’s education.

Admittedly, local school is an basal element in education, and professional educaters also play a vital role in schooling. Firstly, learning the uniform curriculum decided by government could help to the all-around development of students. At school students study all the courses, weather they like them or not. But, for the majority of children, they often interested in some subjects and dislike others. If without schooling, they may study what they like only and will not get well-round education. The result may be some children only know how to write an good article but can not calculate the price of one kilogramme of eggs. T The systemic schooling could avoid limiting students to a narrow scope of knowledge too early. Secondly, students will meet many age peers. People in the same age could communicate better with each other. It is play an important part in the grow-up process of students. Children who lake touch with age peers easily immerse themselves in loneliness and autism. Children need to study ang play with other children, and schools are good place. Thirdly, teachers are professional educators, they know how to instruct knowledges better. Educators could tell students how to study, to study what and further help students to know study for what.

Nevertheless, the capability of schools and professional educators are limited. Both parents and communities should take part in the local schools. On the one hand, parents have great influence on the children’s character and mentality. Children would study their parents’ action and what they say unconscious. Weather parents concern the education of their chidren is very important to children. If parents often go to school to communicate with teachers in time. They could know the situation about study of their children and assistate teachers better. Teachers have to face many students at school, it is hard for them to care for every student. But parents could fulfill this, for a parent, they only need to educate their chileren. Meanwhile, parents know their children better, combine with schooling, they could help to reniforce and perfect education.

On the other hand, communities impose an significant impact on every individual’s value system. Involving in school, communities could provide a value system and a set of ideas to students. Community is a larger stage for students, they can learn practical experiments and make sure the goal of their majors, jobs and lives.

Finally, parents and communities should join efferts to schooling. But we should never look down upon the importance of school education. And parents and communities can not instead of schools to be the core element of education. What they need to do is assist only.

In sum, education is so important that both parents and communities should join in and make contribution to school education. Then with corporation of parents, communities and schools, school education would accomplish its magnificent mission.

[ 本帖最后由 zhuzz05 于 2008-2-1 13:20 编辑 ]

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修改的真详细 啊
改的这么好，我都不好意思去改你的了