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发表于 2008-2-25 22:34:50 |显示全部楼层
TOPIC: ISSUE59 - "Too much emphasis isplaced on role models. Instead of copying others, people should learn to thinkand act independently and thus make the choices that are best for them."
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Should we follow role models like religiousmasters, financial elites, war heroes or sports stars? I basically agree withthe speaker's assertion that people should develop his own way of thinking.However, I concede that role models are important to human, as they serve aspositive example and standard of behavior. By imitating them, one is morelikely to prove his personality and character.

To begin with, almost of us have rolemodels in our life and they affect us in a positive way. In most cases, theirstory and experience inspire us and encourage us to become what we appreciateto be. Role models are conductive to pay regardless gain, to devote their liveto the people who need help. Take Mother Teresa for instance, she spent most ofher time helping and saving the shirtless and barefoot children in India. Justreading her story has already help people reconsider about live, peach, and themission of nations. Thousands of thousands people were touched by her effort,thousands of volunteers join her action, the rich patronize her organizationand the congress awarded her the most pre prize, the Nobel Peace Prize. Aspeople said, she gave the honor to the price. Form the Mother Teresa, we learnthat to what extend a role model could affect and improve other people.

A function of promoting role models is tounite the whole society and thus provide benefits to every individual.Nowadays, the younger generation tends to be ego centric and be different tohis family, his community and the whole society. Some of them lose themselvesin due to lacking faith and destiny in his mind. It is the obligation of governorsto identify, award and promote people who has the qualities as a role model,just as they do with Martin Luther King, Mother Teresa, and President Lincoln.Only when one realizes his duty and potential capability to gain success andthereby help others, he tends to progress and keep away from bad things like dragsor marijuana.

However, following the way of role modelsis not simply copying their action. Some youngsters view a particular athletestar or movie star as their role models. They purchase what his use and ware thesame clothing. Nevertheless, all these superficial behavior contribute to onlya waste of money. It is essential to analyze the reason and motion inside the models.By the learning value system, he can be more conductive to perform better.

Admittedly, role models are first mortalsand they make mistakes we do. Therefore, it is not wise for one to imitateevery thing of them without fully comprehending the motion behind them. Consider.Some sports star are accuse for taking drags and other scandles, it isessencial for us to understand that no matter how well her perform in bootballfield and tennis counts, his way of ling is another matter.

In sum, both individual and a society need rolemodels. We should emphasis on the merits of role models and learn from them todevelop our own way of being good and beneficial to others.

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发表于 2008-2-26 21:14:54 |显示全部楼层

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Should we follow role models like religious masters, financial elites, war heroes or sports stars? I basically agree with the speaker's assertion that people should develop his own way of thinking. However, I concede that role models are important to human, as they serve appositive example and standard of behavior. By imitating them, one is more likely to prove his personality and character.

To begin with, almost (all) of us have role models in our life and they affect us in a positive way. In most cases, their story and experience inspire us and encourage us to become what we appreciate to be. Role models are conductive to pay regardless gain, to devote their live to the people who need help. Take Mother Teresa for instance, she spent most other time helping and saving the shirtless and barefoot children in India. Just reading her story has already help people reconsider about live, peach, and the mission of nations. Thousands of thousands people were touched by her effort, thousands of volunteers join her action, the rich patronize her organization and the congress awarded her the most pre prize, the Nobel Peace Prize. As people said, she gave the honor to the price. Form the Mother Teresa, we learn that to what extend a role model could affect and improve other people.

A function of promoting role models is to unite the whole society and thus provide benefits to every individual. Nowadays, the younger generation tends to be ego centric and be different this family, his community and the whole society. Some of them lose themselves in due to lacking faith and destiny in his mind. It is the obligation of governors to identify, award and promote people who has the qualities as a role model, just as they do with Martin Luther King, Mother Teresa, and President Lincoln. Only when one realizes his duty and potential capability to gain success and thereby help others, he tends to progress and keep away from bad things like drags or marijuana.

However, following the way of role models is not simply copying their action. Some youngsters view a particular athlete star or movie star as their role models. They purchase what his use and ware the same clothing. Nevertheless, all these superficial behavior contribute to only waste of money. It is essential to analyze the reason and motion inside the models. By the learning value system, he ??can be more conductive to perform better.

Admittedly, role models are first mortals and they make mistakes we do. Therefore, it is not wise for one to imitate every thing of them without fully comprehending the motion behind them. Consider some sports star are accuse for taking drags and other scandals,(这种句式我喜欢用现在分词的形式 considering some sports star being accused for taking drugs and other scandals) it is essential for us to understand that no matter how well her perform in football field and tennis counts; his way of ling is another matter.

In sum, both individual and a society need role models. We should emphasis on the merits of role models and learn from them to develop our own way of being good and beneficial to others.

注意打字要空格.还有就是文章中用one来泛指某个人.

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