Technology made children less creative than past?（周四作业）

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Has Technology made children less creative than they were in the past?（周四作业）

When it comes to the creativities of children nowadays, quite a few people would claim that technology makes children become (more) lazier than ever before; according to my rule of thumb, however, children's creativities are benefit considerably from modern technology.

First of all, computers and the Internet inspire the intelligence of children, encouraging them to think and act creatively. The Internet provides a huge amount of information that is related to the development of children growth - either physically or mentally. That allows children access to a wealth of knowledge they are interested in. For example, those children who like to invent new games could gain much knowledge from the Internet, inspiring their creativity. In contrast, children lived in the past had a limited opportunity to gain the newest knowledge they interested in.

In addition, modern technology creates a sense of connection, contributing to the exchange of ideas among people all over the world - including children. The previously unavailable communication - such as telephones, e-mails, and the Internet - makes children have to deal with various relationships among their peers with different backgrounds. This helps children hone their social skills creatively. Confronted with the complex communication, children have to explore various new ways to deal with the relationship. In the process, children are gradually learning about how to make new friends, and how to forge old friendship.

Last but not least, there are more methods and mediums for children to improve their ability to behavior creatively. Plenty of online games, for example, are specialized for the development of children's creativity, and help children improve their imagination and creativity while playing. Numerous books and magazines are published specialized in mental growth of children. Researchers are now exploring (more) better ways for parents who want to improve their children's creativity.

By and large, although technology simplifies humans’ life, it enhances greatly the creativity of children by offering knowledge, methods and communication medium.

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Has Technology made children less creative than they were in the past?（周四作业）

When it comes to the creativities [creativity不可数？] of children nowadays, quite a few [some吧] people would claim that technology makes children become (more) lazier [less creative, lazier和creative不是一个很直线的联系] than ever before; according to my rule of thumb, however, children's creativities are benefit considerably from modern technology.

First of all, computers and the Internet inspire the intelligence of children, encouraging them to think and act creatively. The Internet provides a huge amount of information that is related to the development of children growth - either physically or mentally. That allows children access to a wealth of knowledge they are interested in. For example, those children who like to invent new games could gain much knowledge from the Internet, inspiring their creativity. In contrast, children lived in the past had a limited opportunity to gain the newest knowledge they interested in.

In addition, modern technology creates a sense of connection, contributing to the exchange of ideas among people all over the world - including children. The previously unavailable communication - such as telephones, e-mails, and the Internet - makes children have to deal with various relationships among their peers with different backgrounds. This helps children hone their social skills creatively. Confronted with the complex communication, children have to explore various new ways to deal with the relationship. In the process, children are gradually learning about how to make new friends, and how to forge old friendship.

Last but not least, there are more methods and mediums for children to improve their ability to behavior creatively. Plenty of online games, for example, are specialized for the development of children's creativity, and help children improve their imagination and creativity while playing. Numerous books and magazines are published specialized in mental growth of children. Researchers are now exploring (more) better ways for parents who want to improve their children's creativity.

By and large, although technology simplifies humans’ life, it enhances greatly the creativity of children by offering knowledge, methods and communication medium.

写的很好，很流畅！观点比我的好很多，学习啦。写这个的时候，我感觉有些理不清楚头绪。

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