HERCTIC作文小组------jackallen0714 12.3日作文

jackallen0714UID: 2510951

好难写，想不出例子！郁闷…………:confused:

Although fascinating sincere friendship seems, it by no means is a relationship easily to maintain since it take place between two familiar yet distinctive person. When a mistake is going to be made by friends, sometimes people just ignore it and say nothing. The reason they do so is quite straightforward: there is high possibility that the friendship will be destroyed by their advices. As far as I am concerned, remaining silent all the time should not be considered as an advisable behavior in terms of dealing with relationship between friends.

Minor mistakes especially those do not have far-reaching impact on people's life are indispensable for everyone. Because only through making these errors can one accumulates experience and gradually becomes mature. Even if you help your friends out this time, you cannot ensure that they will avoid making such mistakes the next time. After all, you awareness of the doomed failure is far from their own recognition of the mistake. Therefore, I believe it it better that people do not point out these mistakes in advance even the people concerned is your best friend.

When it comes to mistakes that could have considerable influence on one's life, I deem that it is better to inform your friends of the situation and the potential outcomes beforehand. After all, the miserable consequence of living with the mistake throughout their life is not we expected to see. When your friend decide to cheat in the examination, your should give warning in the first place since the he/she may be caught and forced to quit school. As a friend, you have the responsibility to prevent friends of you making such a mistake. And understanding can easily achieved since your frankly remarks are all on their behalf. In such a manner, friendship is promoted rather than spoiled.

In a word, allowing mistakes or preventing them from happening, to some extend, are both necessary to an authentic friendship. The thing that matters is that what your do are rooted in making your friends a complete and better person.

闹闹喵UID: 2500331

Although fascinating sincere friendship seems, it by no means is 这样的表达没见过，感觉和都前面的句子连在一起很奇怪 a relationship easily to maintain since it take place between two familiar yet distinctive person. When a mistake is going to be made by friends, sometimes people just ignore it and say nothing. The reason they do so is quite straightforward: there is high possibility that the friendship will be destroyed by their advices. As far as I am concerned, remaining silent all the time should not be considered as an advisable behavior in terms of dealing with relationship between friends.

Minor mistakes especially those do not have far-reaching impact on people's life are indispensable for everyone. Because only through making these errors can one accumulates experience and gradually becomes mature. Even if you help your friends out this time, you cannot ensure that they will avoid making such mistakes the next time. After all, you（your） awareness of the doomed failure is far from their own recognition of the mistake. Therefore, I believe it it（is） better that people do not point out these mistakes in advance even the people concerned is your best friend.


When it comes to mistakes that could have considerable influence on one's life, I deem that it is better to inform your friends of the situation and the potential outcomes beforehand. After all, the miserable consequence of living with the mistake throughout their life is not we expected to see. When your friend decide to cheat in the examination, your should give warning in the first place since the he/she may be caught and forced to quit school. As a friend, you have the responsibility to prevent friends of you making such a mistake. And understanding can easily achieved since your frankly remarks are all on their behalf. In such a manner, friendship is promoted rather than spoiled.

In a word, allowing mistakes or preventing them from happening, to some extend, are both necessary to an authentic friendship. The thing that matters is that what your do are rooted in making your friends a complete and better person.
这篇文章重点是想说明对于小错误，我们没有必要对朋友指出，但是对于会影响他一生的决定，我们就要万死不辞，听上去很在理，但是缺乏可靠的佐证，具体事例基本没有，没什么说服力哟;)

niuniu_dragonUID: 2134273

HERCTIC作文小组------jackallen0714 12.3日作文

Although fascinating sincere friendship seems （seems what？？）, it by no means is a relationship easily to maintain since it takes place between two familiar yet distinctive person. When a mistake is going to be made by friends(注意名词单复数 多个朋友犯下同一个错误？应该改一下 建议改后面friend), sometimes people just ignore it and say nothing. The reason they do so is quite straightforward: there is high possibility that the friendship will be destroyed by their advices. As far as I am concerned, remaining silent all the time should not be considered as an advisable behavior in terms of dealing with relationship between friends


Minor mistakes especially those do not have far-reaching impact on people's life are indispensable (我想lz是想说不可避免而不是不可缺少吧…)for everyone. Because only through making these errors can one accumulates experience and gradually becomes mature.（所以这里也就不要说是因为什么什么了 建议说是 通过这些错误可以什么什么） Even if you help your friends out this time, you cannot ensure that they will avoid making such mistakes the next time. After all, you awareness of the doomed failure is far from their own recognition of the mistake. Therefore, I believe it it better that people do not point out these mistakes in advance even the people concerned is your best friend.


When it comes to mistakes that could have considerable influence on one's life, I deem that it is better to inform your friends of the situation and the potential outcomes beforehand（漂亮！）. After all, the miserable consequence of living with the mistake throughout their life is not we expected to see. When your friend decide to cheat in the examination, your should give warning in the first place since the he/she may be caught and forced to quit school. As a friend, you have the responsibility to prevent friends of you making such a mistake. And understanding can easily achieved since your frankly remarks are all on their behalf. In such a manner, friendship is promoted rather than spoiled.

In a word, allowing mistakes or preventing them from happening, to some extend, are both necessary to an authentic friendship. The thing that matters is that what your do are rooted in making your friends a complete and better person.
（整体不错了 就是这3篇作文的同一个缺点 结尾不够有力）