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Issue180   “Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal  system because moral behavior cannot be legislated.”   提纲： 提出论点：道德标准和法律，虽然有着形式的差别，但作为一种约束，他们有很多地方是可以相互融合的。道德问题，虽然存在一部分不能，或者暂时不能被法律解决，但是还是有很多可以考法律来规范和约束的。   Although moral standard, as we know, formally differentiate with laws, both of them are actually quite accordant on  restricting behaviors of individuals and groups so that it may be not correct  to say that all moral behaviors can not to be legislated as the statement  asserts. It is true that there are indeed many moral problems which  can not, for the moment or possibly even in the  future, be solved by laws and legal systems. However, we can not blind  to acknowledge that a majority part will be.   开头很棒！句式很好，意思也都表达得很清楚。      First, in my view, behaviors which violate the  moral standard recognized by publics can be generally classified in two  parts. One is that the action such as  murdering, robbing, stealing, etc., which makes injuries to others and even  will threaten victim’s life, violated the moral standard which has been  acknowledged by majority part of public. To prevent people from doing  so and be hurting by these behaviors, government has made various laws which  have the sovereign power on restriction and sanction. Like before, whether  this kind of behaviors appears now or in future, there is no doubt to depend  on legislation to solve them, which will obtain the same goals with modal moral standard. For example, when Internet  World Wide Web as a communicational tool and mass media was invented by Tim  Berners-Lee, people are not so familiar with it, let alone some laws about  it. As it used by more and more people to now such popularity, public became to find the fact that more deceptive or even grisly  things happened on the Internet frequently and the environment of it turned  poor. According to this situation, each government of the world began to  legislate and attempt to take some measures. At present, the laws and legal  systems about Internet in many governments, involved America, Japan, have  already completed basically, which lead to the well development of Internet  World Wide Web in these countries. Although there is still the large number  of problems on Internet in the world on account of many factors, we can  believe that most of them will eventually be solved by legislation, so do  other problems like this.我感觉此处的Internet例子 还可以用在法律是不是应该随着时间和环境变化的那个考题里边。      The other behaviors are which full of disputation  in morality, due to the diversity of cultures from different races,  histories, or values. Like abortion, different people may treat this in  different aspect. Some American may strongly against it because they  believe that the fetus is still a living, while some Asian will be  indifferent. The same to cloning, on which some experts are making  experiments all the time in order to clone human being but more experts set  themselves against. When we face such problems, we find that we are unable to  assert which statement is correct on earth. It is the diversities that  complicate the things so that there is not any uniform moral standard to  judge. As a result, if we can not make the incontrovertible  morality 是不是换一下会好一些？morality incontrovertible, it is hard to enact laws at all. Only way to solve these problems is  time, which can make the balance on all culture diversity. It is clear to  show us in the example of homosexuality. When the great logician Alan Turing  had been discovered as a gay, he was so oppress depressed   and anguished for the discrimination from public about  homosexuality at that time that become warped  and eccentric. For many years, with the society developed, the values of  people have become more and more comprehensive? tolerent,  so that homosexuality has been legal now in several countries.        In sum, it is so pessimistic for us to assert that moral behaviors can not be  solved by legislated, and to the contrary, there are many problems which  violate against moral standard can and must be settled through legislation.  As for the controversial ones, we may just for the balance of diversity 个人感觉作者写得太好了。其实跟我的思路一样。但是我明显没有你表达的这么清楚！逻辑很是清楚，句式也很棒！例子也是亮点！里边的很多例子，都可以在其它Issue里边通用！这篇文章收藏了！