Issue88 【09GRE作文冲刺组】swbai3月2日作文

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题目：ISSUE88 - "Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
字数：544          用时：0:45:00          日期：2009-3-2
Technologies as the unique ability they have, caused many people to think about it. The development of technologies is often found by the government and used by the army, therefore some people have bad opinions on it. The Hollywood films always have the bad opinion on technologies, they think technologies can make the corruption of personal value and even finally destroyed human beings. Surrounded by the ease of new technologies, people also cannot help to thank the development the technology. So the question rises, what the technologies they can be?

Technologies influence the daily life of ordinary people. As we wake up, there are many things that we use, because of modern technology. Cell phones are one example. Without cell phone, people have to meet people face to face to make discussions, which is usual thing in the old days. And the internet basically changed the way that people deals with others. People can chat with anyone else in the world, as both of them have internet, and what is more important, is the net is almost free when compared to other kinds of communications. Then people do not have to go outside to meet friends, and a new group of society has come out, and they are usually called the always-stay-in-house men.

Technologies are developed on the purpose of convenient people. With the ambition and devotion of comforting human beings more than ever, scientists and technologies work hard day and night to develop new technologies. And in this purpose, nowadays we have made new things more than ever, especially in recent decades. Traveling in old days is a great problem, for the men have to walk on feet because of lack of expensive horses. For that, a country may be large enough for a man to spend months pass by, which could be just hours for the plane of modern technologies. And what should we do without lamp? Because of it, the light life of human beings can be so flourish.

However, in some aspects, technologies have bad effects on people's lives. The internet, which brings great benefits and convenient to people, also have its deadly bad effects. The internet game, which has made huge interests, is one example. There are always some guys that are immersed in playing games, yet it is not a big deal without internet. Internet, which has a strong ability for one to connect another, can call the game-players to make a team so they can make a suspicion of each other. That is to say, if one feel tired and do not want to play any more, his/her teammate may urge him/her to complete the target of game in order to help them. It can truly make one feel valuable in the game, while make a strong contrast to the real life he/she is in, and caused the men hate the real world.

In conclusion, technologies not only bring convenience to human race, but also nightmares. It can influence social customs and ethics, yet through a random way. But we are human beings, and the technologies are finally controlled by us. Only through carefully thinking on ourselves, can we finally make the better use of technologies, and make our social customs and ethics to a higher level.

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Technologies as the unique ability they have, caused many people to think about it. The development of technologies is often found by the government and used by the army, therefore some people have bad opinions on it. The Hollywood films always have the bad opinion on technologies, they think technologies can make the corruption of personal value and even finally destroyed human beings. Surrounded by the ease of new technologies, people also cannot help to thank the development the technology. So the question rises, what the technologies they can be?（儘量用回一般現在時會比較不容易錯和混亂，，忘了那個老師說的）

Technologies influence the daily life of ordinary people. As we wake up, there are many things that we use, because of modern technology.（這句話很怪，可以變成From the time we wake up, we begin to deal with many technological product） Cell phones are one example. Without cell phone, people have to meet people face to face to make discussions, which is usual thing in the old days. And the internet basically changed the way that people deals with others. People can chat with anyone else in the world, as both of them have internet, and what is more important, is (that) the net is almost free when compared to other kinds of communications. Then people do not have to go outside to meet friends, and a new group of society has come out, and they are usually called the always-stay-in-house men.(不要一直疊加and吶，轉成從句或者cut成幾句話吧)

Technologies are developed on the purpose of convenient people(convenience). With the ambition and devotion of comforting human beings more than ever, scientists and technologies(他們怎么并列了) work hard day and night to develop(create) new technologies. And in this purpose, nowadays we have made new things more than ever, especially in recent decades. Traveling in old days is a great problem, for the men have to walk on feet because of lack of expensive horses. For that, a country may be large enough for a man to spend months pass by, which could be just hours for the plane of modern technologies. And what should we do without lamp? Because of(Thanks to) it, the light life of human beings can be so flourish(flourishing).

However, in some aspects, technologies have bad effects on people's lives. The internet, which brings great benefits and convenient(convenience) to people, also have its deadly bad effects. The internet game, which has made huge interests, is one example. There are always some guys that are immersed in playing games, yet it is not a big deal without internet. Internet, which has a strong ability for one to connect another, can call the game-players to make a team so they can make a suspicion of each other. That is to say, if one feel tired and do not want to play any more, his/her teammate may urge him/her to complete the target of game in order to help them. It can truly make one feel valuable in the game, while make a strong contrast to the real life he/she is in, and caused the men hate the real world.

In conclusion, technologies not only bring convenience to human race, but also nightmares(bring not only…but also… to…). It can influence social customs and ethics, yet through a random way. But we are human beings, and the technologies are finally controlled by us. Only through carefully thinking on ourselves, can we finally make the better use of technologies, and make our social customs and ethics to a higher level.