[TOEFL 4—6月Dark_Tournament写作小组 babff 第十二次作业]

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Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.




Along with the rapidly change of the whole world,we need to learn more knowledge than before.And from the point of my view, getting knowledge from the teachers is the most efficient way.Because the teachers can tell you how to learn is easier and more efficient,and also if you finish the teacher's assignment,you can get the knowledge better and quicker than that you learn it by yourself.And no doubt that the daily is the most important bridge between teachers and students.So I agree with statement that teachers should have to assign homework to students every day.The reasons for my view go as follows.

First,the main reason for my perspective is that everyone was born with an inert,so the students would not to revise the daily knowledge if their teachers do not assign homework to them.As we know,everybody like the interesting entertainment such as watching television,playing computer games or doing sports,to mention just a few.Taking me for an instance,I do not like to do my homework,not only because it will takes me a lot of time,but also I have to go over the intraday notes and what my tell me in intraday class.And I can just finish my homework after I comprehend all intraday knowledge absolutely.So I think homework is a means that it will make students review the intraday knowledge what they learn in class.

Another reason why I agree with the statement in title is that teachers can know which knowledge the students have been understood and they can also find the problems which the students have.For example, some students are too shy to ask teachers questions.So if they have some problems during their study and they do not want to ask other to help them,they may let them go.But these problems are probably exposed in homework and teachers can help them solving them in time.So the daily homework is necessary for teachers to know the students problems.


Furthermore,a strong reason to agree with the statement is that students will have a ability that how to manage his time efficiently.Because the students spend the time more efficient if they want to get more entertain time.So this ability will benefit them all their lives.Because they may deal with a lot of complex work in a short during their career.

In a nutshell,maybe some people think that teachers should not give students a huge pressure by assigning homework to students every day.But in my opinion,this measure is not only good for students' study but also good for their all lives.

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Along with the rapidly change of the whole world,we need to learn more knowledge than before.And from the point of my view, getting knowledge from the teachers is the most efficient way.(这里上下应该是一句话，BECAUSE不用大写）Because the teachers can tell you how to learn is easier and more efficient（the teacher can give you more efficient learning motherd),(觉得这里应该另起一句）and also if you finish the teacher's assignment,you can get the knowledge better and quicker than that you learn it by yourself(than learning by yourself).And （There is)no doubt that the (去掉）daily is the most important bridge between teachers and students.So I agree with statement that teachers should have to assign homework to students every day.The reasons for my view go as follows.

First,the main reason for my perspective is that everyone was born with an inert（用这个词？）,so the students would not to revise the daily knowledge if their teachers do not assign homework to them.As we know,everybody like the interesting entertainment such as watching television,playing computer games or doing sports,to mention just a few(感觉这句是在说论点，但是没把论点讲完，应该是everybody likes playing,like...,but we should learn knowledge and skills to help us living in the world and doing something worthily).Taking me for an instance,I do not like to do my homework,not only because it will takes me a lot of time,but also I have to go over the intraday notes and what my teacher tell me in intraday class.And I can just finish my homework after I comprehend all intraday knowledge absolutely.So I think homework is a means that it will make students review the intraday knowledge what they learn in class(或者这句是你的论点？）.(还是应该在首句把论点阐释清楚，这样文章逻辑明晰，条理性更好）

Another reason why I agree with the statement in title is that teachers can know which knowledge the students have been understood and they can also find the problems which the students have（这句的表达怎么觉得怪怪的？）.For example, some students are too shy to ask teachers questions.So if they have some problems during their study and they do not want to ask other to help them,they may let them go.But these problems are probably exposed in homework and teachers can help them solving them in time.So the daily homework is necessary for teachers to know the students' problems.(本段的这个论点很有说服力，论证也充分，挺好的）
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Furthermore,a strong reason to agree with the statement is that students will have a ability that how to manage his time efficiently.Because the students spend the time more efficient if they want to get more entertain time.So this ability will benefit them all their lives.Because they may deal with a lot of complex work in a short during their career（有DAILY MOREWORK 就能帮助管理时间安排日程吗，感觉说服力不太够）.' t. l'（ Z: M) O（经典哦时间

In a nutshell,maybe some people think that teachers should not give students a huge pressure by assigning homework to students every day.But in my opinion,this measure is not only good for students' study but also good for their all lives.

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Along with the rapidly change of the whole world,we need to learn more knowledge than before.And from the point of my view, getting knowledge from the teachers is the most efficient way(我觉得第一句的介绍不大好，难道学知识一定得靠老师的传授么？可能让老美看后，会很难接受你的这个说法，第一印象会不大--当然只是我的感觉）.Because the teachers can tell you how to learn is easier and more efficient,and also if you finish the teacher's assignment,you can get the knowledge better and quicker than that you learn it by yourself.And no doubt that the daily is the most important bridge between teachers and students.So I agree with statement that teachers should have to assign homework to students every day.The reasons for my view go as follows.4 Z% E: U" I1 K5 h$ S/ c  |) ]! z  K

First,the main reason for my perspective is that everyone was born with an inert（a lazy nature),so the students would not to revise the daily knowledge if their teachers do not assign homework to them.As we know,everybody like the interesting entertainment such as watching television,playing computer games or doing sports,to mention just a few.Taking me for an instance,I do not like to do my homework,not only because it will takes me a lot of time,but also I have to go over the intraday notes and what my tell me in intraday class.And（and让我很困惑，没看懂你的例子到底是想证明什么。到底homework好还是不好，你支持哪个我没看懂） I can just finish my homework after I comprehend all intraday knowledge absolutely.So I think homework is a means that it will make students review the intraday knowledge what they learn in class（总感觉这一段逻辑有点混乱，论证有点问题）.8 Q7 F; - `1 R* g  p2 I% Y


Another reason why I agree with the statement in title is that teachers can know which knowledge the students have been understood and they can also find the problems which the students have.For example, some students are too shy to ask teachers questions.So if they have some problems during their study and they do not want to ask other to help them,they may let them go.But these problems are probably exposed in homework and teachers can help them solving them in time.So the daily homework is necessary for teachers to know the students’ problems（这段非常好，观点和理由都值得学习和借鉴！！）.

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Furthermore,a strong reason to agree with the statement is that students will have a(an) ability that how to manage his(their,指代一致） time efficiently.Because the students spend the time more efficient if they want to get more entertain(entertainment,leisure,time for break/rest, time for refreshment, recreation time) time.So this ability will benefit them all their lives.Because they may deal with a lot of complex work in a short during their career（说理很不够，展开不充分，没看明白manage time 和homework到底有什么因果关系，事例不具体，很难让我信服）.

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In a nutshell,maybe some people think that teachers should not give students a huge pressure by assigning homework to students every day.But in my opinion,this measure is not only good for students' study but also good(good去掉） for their all(whole) lives.

不好意思，评晚了。 前两天有事情耽误了，今天才有时间上网。先说声抱歉啊
我想补充下你的第三点，估计你是想说students can develop the ability of making full of their time by doing daily assignments, which would be made into a good habit of manaing working time effieciently when they start careers in the future. But the problem is that you fail to interprete the inner assioation between the two factors. You can say, for examply, daily homework help students have a good sense of time planning. They are trained at young ages to balance the time of studying and playing. They are pretty active to make plans. They determine for themselves at which time to study and at which time to have a rest. In a long term, these kids who can make good schedules when they are young can better adapt into the quick and intense wroking condition when they grow up.Maybe in this way, the rators can have a better understanding of your reasoning and logic thoughts. By writting more detailed examples or deduction, you can earn more scorns and good comments. Oh, sure, it is just what I think is.
Overally, you have good command of English and you essay does have a good structure which help get high quality of writting. Also, I think a paper with good structure is basic for preparing the toefl writting test.