〓DIES IN FLAMS〓 Issue7 by 小北

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Nowadays, with the development of technology, the video camera has become more and more popular among people, and it seems to be the first choice when doing recording. However, the written records should not be neglected during the process.这个观点，稍微改一下，因为事实陈述问题用should来谈很不妥 The video camera, as a result from the fruit of the digital technology, makes documents accurate and convincing about contemporary life of people in society. First and foremost, the video camera provides a convenient way for us to take pictures of what has happened around us immediately, written records, by contrast, will cost us a lot of time. In addition, during this process, direct and vivid impression is presented by the video documents rather than we have to read the details about what is going on. Last but not least, the video files could be understood by almost everyone regardless of whether he or she is literate, on the country, the record words may never be grasped by those who are illiterate. Nevertheless, the disadvantages of this advanced stuff are also obviously. For example, these documents recorded by video camera are fail to express the deep connotation while the writers could use theirs skills and standpoints to realize that. 论证逻辑比较清楚 When it comes to the written records, as a traditional method, bring us to a new world that is created by the writers' creativity and inspiration which the video files never reached. Take some biographies for example. To characterize a famous person who comes from his or her unique background, the video camera could only show what the person looks like, such as the figure, the facial feature and the behaviour. Conversely, the writers are able to apply their writing skills and overall perspectives to present the inherent characters of the reputable person precisely according to what the person did during his or her lifetime. Thus, the written records are probably to create a sympathize with our readers, which brings a shock to our heart and spirit, and enable us to get encouragement and hope from that. Though due to today's technology advancement that various video documents spring out, the written method is still dominating when people come to describe the affairs, the stories or even the history.例子很合适 However, nowadays there are more and more circumstances need both of them to record something. It is easy to see that on a ceremony, at a accident site, on a press conference, or during a sports match are all need video and written records. Only in that way can we get the information about the conditions of the scene and the details of the whole events. Furthermore, it has become a fashion for us to open a blog on the internet concludes our own diaries, thoughts, and pictures as well, which is regarded as an efficient way to memorize our daily life. So, it will be meaningless if only to use one of the record methods, what we prefer is to see the pictures with its accompanying words, which makes us to learn penetratingly from what we have read. According to what I have said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that both of them are equal improtant and it is necessary for us to connect the video documents with the written words when doing records. Only reach the goal of making good use of the two means together can we provide an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life to whoever read it. 最后两段的总结不错，而且加了适当升华 我觉得作者用词语句都很不错，不过开头我提的那个should的问题可以考虑一下。个人观点，请多指教