]【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组 风辰的眼泪 第二十二次作业】

风辰的眼泪UID: 2618183

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to finish a project and then start another than to finish two projects at the same time. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.（06/24/07）
In modern society, people are always demanded to finish two or more projects in a certain time. While some people hold the opinion that it is better to finish a project completely and begin another, some people have a negative attitude. In terms of previous experience, working two or more projects is better.

The main reason for my propensity is that working two or more projects at the same time saves time. When people undertake two or more projects simultaneously, they always keep a uniform speed on each project. In contrast, if people only do one project from beginning to end, they always feel difficult to keep in a stable pace. In that, when people begin with several projects, they can appreciate the experiences from each other project which enhances the efficiency easily. Let me take a simple example. In a factory of automobiles, you can see people product different parts at the same time, it makes the production line abridged effectively which promotes the productivities. In modern life, time is money, saving time is saving life. So why not choose an exact way which you can arrange the corresponding time flexibly?

Another essential reason deserved some words here id that people obtain the chance to regulate themselves when they work two or more projects at the same time. Think about it, if you do the same task for a long time, would you feel boring? Obviously, the answer is affirmatory. Actually, to finish a project is a tedious task which makes people lose passion easily for you always do the same action. However, if you transfer to another project when you feel stodgy on one project, you can get enthusiasm simply because of the sense of refreshing. When working, interesting comes first, interesting helps people to increase efficiency. Working several projects simultaneously makes people keep interesting and the sense of refreshing which regulates the emotion of people effectively.

Despite the fact that working two or more projects at the same time does provide tons of benefits, it surely leads to some negative impacts. Undeniably, the strength of it is overwhelming greater than the corresponding weakness. In this circumstance, why not pay more attention on the merits stated above?

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In modern society, people are always demanded to finish two or more projects in a certain time. While some people hold the opinion that it is better to finish a project completely and begin another, some people have a negative attitude. In terms of previous experience, working two or more projects is better.

(现代社会需要人们同时完成几件事，但是有些人认为应该一心一意比较好，为何后面又有一句some people have a negative attitude)

The main reason for my propensity is that working two or more projects at the same time saves time. When people undertake two or more projects simultaneously, they always keep a uniform speed on each project. In contrast, if people only do one project from beginning to end, they always feel difficult to keep in a stable pace. In that, when people begin with several projects, they can appreciate the experiences from each other project which enhances the efficiency easily. Let me take a simple example. In a factory of automobiles, you can see people product different parts at the same time, it makes the production line abridged effectively which promotes the productivities. In modern life, time is money, saving time is saving life. So why not choose an exact way which you can arrange the corresponding time flexibly?

Another essential reason deserved some words here id（is） that people obtain the chance to regulate themselves when they work two or more projects at the same time. Think about it, if you do the same task for a long time, would you feel boring? Obviously, the answer is affirmatory. Actually, to finish a project is a tedious task which makes people lose passion easily for you always do the same action. However, if you transfer to another project when you feel stodgy on one project, you can get enthusiasm simply because of the sense of refreshing. When working, interesting comes first, interesting helps people to increase efficiency. Working several projects simultaneously makes people keep interesting and the sense of refreshing which regulates the emotion of people effectively.

3 _% u7 l% M7 u: zDespite the fact that working two or more projects at the same time does provide tons of benefits, it surely leads to some negative impacts. (可以适当举出一些缺点，或者写一点做一件事的有点，独立成段，因为你之前只写了两个POINT)Undeniably, the strength of it is overwhelming(overwhelmingly) greater than the corresponding weakness. In this circumstance, why not pay more attention on the merits stated above?（用反问句结尾没问题，但是感觉说的太隐晦，是否把同时做多件事写出来比较好？）

每个POINT展开的不错，但是感觉有些地方有点废话，例如Think about it这种，Obviously, the answer is affirmatory. Actually，一下子这样有些不好吧？
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风辰的眼泪UID: 2618183

谢谢，受教了哈，下次会记得改正的，不过这个两个论点是老师交的，老师说一般作文要想拿高分都是两个论点的，所以我才这么写，而且我三个论点确实是不太想得出来。。。

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In modern society, people are always demanded to finish two or more projects in a certain time. While some people hold the opinion that it is better to finish a project completely and begin another, (把while放在这里来比较好)some people have a negative attitude. In terms of previous experience, working two or more projects is better.(最好加个主语)
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' G0 b7 }/ m2 FThe main reason for my propensity is that working (+on)two or more projects at the same time saves time. When people undertake two or more projects simultaneously, they always keep a uniform speed on each project. In contrast, if people only do one project from beginning to end, they always feel difficult to keep in a stable pace. In that, when people begin with several projects, they can appreciate the experiences from each other project which(that) enhances the efficiency easily. Let me take a simple example. In a factory of automobiles, you can see people product different parts at the same time, it makes the production line abridged effectively which promotes the productivities. In modern life, time is money, saving time is saving life. So why not choose an exact way (+in)which you can arrange the corresponding time flexibly?(这个例子是说很多人在做不同的事,其实每一个人还是只做一件事..例子不是很合理)5 l4 `($ n! J1 o3 {
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Another essential reason deserved some words here id(is) that people obtain the chance to regulate themselves when they work two or more projects at the same time. Think about it, if you do the same task for a long time, would you feel boring? Obviously, the answer is affirmatory. Actually, to finish a project is a tedious task which makes people lose passion easily for you always do the same action. However, if you transfer to another project when you feel stodgy on one project, you can get enthusiasm simply because of the sense of refreshing. When working, interesting comes first, interesting helps people to increase efficiency. Working several projects simultaneously makes people keep interesting and the sense of refreshing which regulates the emotion of people effectively., O: v& K" s( R

4 a/ F' n9 W& L, [+ H1 p$ Y8 C6 Z( DDespite the fact that working two or more projects at the same time does provide tons of benefits, it surely leads to some negative impacts. Undeniably, the strength of it is overwhelming greater than the corresponding weakness. In this circumstance, why not pay more attention on the merits stated above?(最好还是不要这样说,因为等于在冲销自己的理由主见,表现出观点不明确,仅是个人意见)

还不错,就是句型比较单一..
共同进步..