zhuyongchaochao的第四次作文 （cracing ibt essay)

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    People diverge with each other When faced with the decision of culturing children in modern city of letting children grow up in countryside , quite a few would deem that it is better for children cultivated in a big city , but others, in contrast, believe that leave young alone in rural urban as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence children’s development in countryside, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason supports my point is that we belong to the nature and should be raised by the mother land. We re the creature of nature , Even  there are fair tales in China that man is made of mud while woman is made of water. So when it comes to culturing children, we should obey the rules of nature. In the countryside there are all kinds of animals and plants around, which provide the children a real nature that they can touch and feel with their heart. Variety of animals, cricket, bugs, birds tell them that there are quite a few creature of nature and they should love life. The beautiful plants, such as tulip, sunflower show them that the world is colorful and vivid. The native environment give the children direct feeling of a beautiful of planet, which will not be sensed from the dull book.

In addition, these reasons are also usable when we consider that character of countryside are more courageous while city child are always controlled by all kinds of rules. So when it comes to some emergening issues, the urban boy makes quicker decision and takes adventure while city young step backward.
   there are some disadvantages in growing in countryside , such as lack of information, low in nutrition , dis-connecting with the morden concept. We can solve these problems by sending them back to downtown when they become teenager, since they can accept new things pretty fast!

In a word, it is better to shape the children in countryside and let the motherland teach them the basic rules of nature.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that it is a smart choice to send the children to countryside feeling the vivid and various world.

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People diverge with each other When faced with the decision of culturing children in modern city of letting children grow up in countryside, quite a few would deem that it is better for children cultivated in a big city, but others, in contrast, believe that leave young alone in rural urban(只有rural吧) as the premier choice and that is also my point.（第一句好赞，好精彩） Among countless factors which influence children’s development in countryside, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason supports my point is that we belong to the nature and should be raised by the mother land. We re the creature of nature, even there are fair tales in China that man is made of mud while woman is made of water. So when it comes to culturing children, we should obey the rules of nature. In the countryside there are all kinds of animals and plants around, which provide the children a real nature that they can touch and feel with their heart. Variety of animals, cricket,
bugs（What？）, birds tell them that there are quite a few creature of nature and they should love life. The beautiful plants, such as tulip, sunflower show them that the world is colorful and vivid. The native environment give the children direct feeling of a beautiful of planet, which will not be sensed from the dull book.(也是很精彩的一段)

In addition, these reasons are also usable when we consider that characters of countryside are more courageous while city（urban） child are always controlled by all kinds of rules. So when it comes to some emergening（这个词有错，不知道想说什么） issues, the urban（rural） boy makes quicker decision and takes adventure while city（urban） young step backward.

However，there are some disadvantages in growing in countryside , such as lack of information, low in nutrition, dis-connecting with the morden（modern好容易错的一个词） concept. We can solve these problems by sending them back to downtown when they become teenager, since they can accept new things pretty fast!

In a word, it is better to shape the children in countryside and let the motherland teaches them the basic rules of nature. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that it is a smart choice to send the children to countryside feeling the vivid and various world.


Smile所有精彩的都到前头去了，显得后面有点逊色，可能时间不够了。还有，smile用的一些模板式的句式，看的觉得不协调。（there are three conspicuous aspects as follows……. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that……）其实可以弄出属于自己独创的模版，那样和自己的文章会更协调吧。呵呵，一家之言。。。。

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