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[活动] 5.6月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组 cocolinkin的 第4次作业 [复制链接]

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发表于 2009-4-30 16:09:51 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
刚加入小组,写了第四次的作业。
发现30分钟写不完,用了40分钟。哎~怎么办捏。
5月16号考试啦。

The environment is the key element for children which could be chosen by parents. Some people believe that countryside can be a natural place to develope children to be a free person when others hold the opinion that bigh cities should be the right place to rise children. It`s seems romantic for a child to live in the countryside. But a closer look ar the society would reveal such an belief is not only prematured but also ultimately not unpractical.


Big cities exist much more opportunies to broden horizon and develope interests in different areas for children than that in countryside.Building interests play an important role for children. Even though there's amount of pleasing thing in the countryside,the chance of building more relationship with people is lacked.Some of my relatives were raised in the countryside. Not ignoring their pure mind,they are not really do well in handling the complex relationships in the big city. What`s more,their eyesight is limited in an small area,which made them hard to communicate with different kind of citizens. What a pity!



More education resourses are provided in the big cities.Countryside,especially in China,is usually not as rih as big city.As a result,The schools of countryside are generally lacked of the teachers and equipments. My relatives from countryside were surprised when I show them around my high school. According to their strange tone, it is really an astonishment to find so many great buildings and morderned computers in a school. I was not only embarrased but also pleased to be raised in the big city.



However, I do not deny the fact that children grown up in the countryside owned more pure memory and satisfaction. But pratically speaking, children would have to faced to the complicated society in the future. Over two thirds of countryside children, according to census in China, would move to big city when they grown up. It is not hard to imagine how difficult the day would be when a grown-up realize the world is not so wonderful as he or she imagined.



  To conclude, big cities provided more chances and condition to develope children's interest. This way,children would be more inteligent when they grown up. Furthermore, the greater information they owned will benificial to thier professional career. All in all, raising children in the big city is a terrific idea and I think the parents should make thier children get used to the city life as soon as possible.
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发表于 2009-4-30 18:15:39 |只看该作者
i even can't finish it in 40 mintues:L

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