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Roma is not build in one day.

Just as the above says, printed books are not come into being in just several years, and it has be accepted by human for thousands years. It is not easy to find a new thing to replace its vital status, if will, in a short time.

What comes first must be the education, which mostly relies on printed books. Nowadays, high-tech products, something like computers, almost have spread worldwide. But it is impossible, at least in the current days, for every school to purchase enough instruments to satisfy each student. Furthermore, if they have the ability to do this, they may use the fund to fulfill something of more significance, for there are millions children cannot get access to be instructed. So, owing to the relatively cheap books, which even can be reused for several times, I do not think they will not disappear in twenty years.

Secondly, printed books have become a type of entertainment in our life. I like reading, especially read books, and I believe that each man who love books have the similar feelings with me. In the sunshine, after lunch, get a book and wander in the beautiful book world, you can learn a lot that can never be taught in the school. Holy Bible teaches us the old history of Hebrew. The Divine Comedy instructs us how to be a man. We lost ourselves in Shakespeare and we learn philosophy from the ancient Greece… If it is not books, where can we gain so much fun in the world?

Moreover, the books play an important role to carry history. Printed books can last for a long time, which affords human a good method to do study history by them. Besides, we use them can also contribute to the offspring. Therefore, we cannot easily abandon the printed books.

Everyone knows that books are the stepping stones to human process. How can people make progress if there are not any stepping stones?

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Roma is not build in one day.
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Just as the above says, printed books are not come into being in just several years, and they have been accepted by human for thousands years. It is not easy to find a new thing to replace its vital status, if will, in a short time.! @+ G3 q1 T: H8 ~1 V: l（）（）


What comes first must be the education, which mostly relies on printed books. Nowadays, high-tech products, something like computers, almost have spread worldwide. But it is impossible, at least in the current days(不确定这种表述对不对，), for every school to purchase enough instruments to satisfy each student. Furthermore, if they have the ability to do this, they may use the fund to fulfill something of more significance, for there are millions
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children cannot get access to be instructed. So, owing to the relatively cheap books, which even can be reused for several times, I do not think they will  disappear in twenty years.+ A! }9 k7 @2 Y8 I; ?; P
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Secondly, printed books have become a type of entertainment in our life. I like reading, especially read books, and I believe that each man who loves books have the similar feelings with me. In the sunshine, after lunch, get a book and wander in the beautiful book world, you can learn a lot that can never be taught in the school. Holy Bible teaches us the old history of Hebrew.The Divine Comedy instructs us how to be a man. We lost ourselves in Shakespeare and we learn philosophy from the ancient Greece… If it is not books, where can we gain so much fun in the world?   这段论点是写书籍重要性？但是我觉得这个论点和题目有脱题的嫌疑

Moreover, the books play an important role to carry history. Printed books can last for a long time, which affords human a good method to study history . Besides, we use them can also contribute to the offspring. Therefore, we cannot easily abandon the printed books.; a) L3 B* C2 ?4 ^6 i" H
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Everyone knows that books are the stepping stones to human process. How can people make progress if there are not any stepping stones?

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        Roma is not build in one day.7 h* A; S( A8 w) l$ Y! U: ]& Q9 I
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       Just as the above says(just as the above saying goes), printed books do not come into being in just several years, and they(books是复数） has be accepted by human for thousands of years. It is not easy to find a new thing to replace their vital status, if will, in a short time.
     What comes first must be the education, which mostly relies on printed books. Nowadays, high-tech products, something like computers, almost have spread worldwide. But it is impossible, at least in the current days, for every school to purchase enough instruments to satisfy each student. Furthermore, if they have the ability to do this, they may use the fund to fulfill something of more significance, for there are millions of children cannot get access to be instructed. So, owing to the relatively cheap books, which even can be reused for several times, I do not think they will not(删去not) disappear in twenty years. % L% U/ Y! @  J; W' Q" l

     Secondly, printed books have become a type of entertainment in our life. I like reading, especially read books, and I believe that each man who loves books have the similar feelings with me. In the sunshine, after lunch, get a book and wander in the beautiful book world, you can learn a lot that can never be taught in the school. Holy Bible teaches us the old history of Hebrew. The Divine Comedy instructs us how to be a man. We lose ourselves in Shakespeare's poem and we learn philosophy from the ancient Greece… If there are not books, where can we gain so much fun in the world?1 c: m9 z! O5 N- ?6 K2 V8 o

      Moreover, the printed books play an important role to carry history. Printed books can last for a long time, which affords human a good method to study history by them. Besides, we use them can also contribute to the offspring(不通？）. Therefore, we cannot easily abandon the printed books.
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       Everyone knows that books are the stepping stones to human progress. How can people make progress if there are not any stepping stones?