【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组mimica的 第28次作业】

mimicaUID: 2457275

While some people would like to ask for suggestions from their older friends, others may prefer to get advice from friends of their age. From my point of view, although older friends usually have much wider horizon as well as valuable life experience than ourselves, I still hold the view that it is better to accept advice from the ones at our age.

To start with, we can not deny the fact that rich life experience is indispensable in giving suggestions, however, older friends usually can not keep up with the times as close as the younger generation do. For example, if we want to ask for some advice in clothing, or consult notes in traveling abroad, or even collect information about stock market, older friends usually know them very little, not to mention giving advice. In brief, older friends may provide general life experience, but may fail in special and realistic issues.

Besides, it is the friends at our age that have similar life and study experience as us, who can give practical suggestions rather than outdated ones for us. For instance, when it comes to the topic how should I prepare for the TOEFL ibt, older experience seems not so useful since the testing standard has already been changed and improved as time goes by. Who we should turn to for help are the ones who participated the test just one or two years before, or the ones who are preparing for it. In a word, only having similar experience can friends give wise proposals.

Moreover, instead of listening to lessons, we can communicate with friends of our age in a more equal atmosphere. The more relaxed we feel, the deeper feeling and more honest suggestions we share with our friends.

In conclusion, although some older friends can provide us precious life experience, I still argue that it is wiser to get suggestions from friends at our age. Only similar growing experience can blossom referential advice.

gaofei323UID: 2588256

While some people would like to ask for suggestions from their older friends, others may prefer to get advice from friends of their age. From my point of view, although older friends usually have much wider horizon as well as more valuable life experience than ourselves do, I still hold the view that it is better to accept advice from the ones at our age.6 ?2 x1 L( f7 |0 L2 c2 i9 g
start with, we can not deny the fact that rich life experience is indispensable in giving suggestions, however, older friends usually can not keep up with the times as close as the younger generation do. For example, if we want to ask for some advices in clothing, or consult notes in traveling abroad, or even collect information about stock market, older friends usually know them very little, not to mention giving advice. In brief, older friends may provide general life experience, but may fail in special and realistic issues.(这句很棒~)7 z# {. B; V3 g: L$ c! u& w4 i

Besides, it is the friends at our age that have similar life and study experience as us, who can give practical suggestions rather than outdated ones for us. For instance, when it comes to the topic how should I prepare for the TOEFL ibt, older experience seems not so useful since the testing standard has already been changed and improved as time goes by. Who we should turn to for help are the ones who participated the test just one or two years before, or the ones who are preparing for it. In a word, only having similar experience can friends give wise proposals.' R: U! O; {8 W; J8 f1 m% m
Moreover, instead of listening to lessons, we can communicate with friends of our age in a more equal atmosphere. The more relaxed we feel, the deeper feeling and more honest suggestions we share with our friends.+ w8 i& h' }4 F) _
In conclusion, although some older friends can provide us precious life experience, I still argue that it is wiser to get suggestions from friends at our age. Only similar growing experience can blossom referential advice.

水平有限，对这篇佳作实在想不出好的建议~
Lz第三个论点段总会很短，不知道托福可不可以这样详略得当，
继续努力！good luck!

lulufriendUID: 2612617

While some people would like to ask for suggestions from their older friends, others may prefer to get advice from friends of their age. From my point of view, although older friends usually have much wider horizon as well as valuable life experience than ourselves, I still hold the view that it is better to accept advice from the ones at our age.6 z3 D- O- S6 P7 x) D3 f. W To start with, we can not deny the fact that rich life experience is indispensable in giving suggestions, however, older friends usually can not keep up with the times as close as the younger generation(s) do. For example, if we want to ask for some advice in clothing, or consult notes in traveling abroad, or even collect information about stock market, older friends usually know them very little, not to mention giving advice. In brief, older friends may provide general life experience, but may fail in special and realistic issues.(个人觉得例子似乎不够具体，并未很好地体现出同龄人的好处) X# U0 b8 r Besides, it is the friends at our age that have similar life and study experience as us, who can give practical suggestions rather than outdated ones for us. For instance, when it comes to the topic how should I prepare for the TOEFL ibt, older experience seems not so useful since the testing standard has already been changed and improved as time goes by. Who we should turn to for help are the ones who participated the test just one or two years before, or the ones who are preparing for it. In a word, only having similar experience can friends give wise proposals.(觉得这段比上段精彩) " j" w! J  E0 Q# e! f Moreover, instead of listening to lessons, we can communicate with friends of our age in a more equal atmosphere. The more relaxed we feel, the deeper feeling and more honest suggestions we share with our friends.) s4 y8 g! q, u" @4 P% h+ Z* P ) _6 K, Y; S, k In conclusion, although some older friends can provide us with precious life experience, I still argue that it is wiser to get suggestions from friends at our age. Only similar growing experience can blossom referential advice. 例子上似乎还可以在加上一些~~一起加油吧 ！

gaofei323UID: 2588256

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.（08/17/07）

People seldom agree with others even in such trivial issues as preference to handle with a problem between taking advice from aged friends and other peers. When facing with an obstacle or a dilemma, people expect to get suggestions from older friends’ experience or take a relief due to peers’ comfort. As far as I am concerned, it would be a little bit haste to say that older friends’ advice is better, or vice versa.

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On the one hand, older friends’ experience is an abundant fortune for all of us. Thanks to their early trials, we can easily and directly get dos and dons on the certain problem instead of blind zigzag. A particular case to this point is that when I was 7, learning English, I had trouble in my pronunciation. I failed to read an article smoothly because of my bad control of vows. I was so depressed that I turned to my older sister for help. Then a miracle happened. I overcame my problem owing to her few words which was taken by her own experiences. It is older friends’ advice that helps me out of my study problem.1 J+ a% f/ P7 T( k. |* M, O# @% c
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On the other hand, it is also valuable to accept suggestions from friends at our own ages. We share similar feelings with our peer friends. They can fully understand us without any gaps or hesitations because we are thinking by the same way. So it would be far easier for them to allay our confusions and pains. Just imagine that we go shopping with our classmate friends. Owing to our same taste, we can buy our desired goods in a happy and harmony atmosphere getting rid of evitable quarrels.（这个例子感觉没有上一个详细，多一点细节会更好）
In conclusion, it is a wise choice to receive advice from both older friends and peer fellows according to different situations. Sometimes we need the older one’s experience to enrich our mind also broaden our horizon for the sake of getting across our difficulties. Sometimes friends at our own age can advice us and share happiness at the same time. Definitely these two kinds of suggestions are helpful and useful. Hence we should balance them and take the full use of these valuable fortunes.

长见识了，这篇佳作结构，语言，例子，都没的说。
我看了好多遍，真找不到什么可以给建议的地方，水平有限，只好祝LZ考试顺利！