【Dark_Tournament TOEFL-ibt作文小组gaofei323第二十八次作业】

gaofei323UID: 2588256

第二十八次作业发布如下：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Getting advice from older friends is more valuable than getting advice from friends at your age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.（08/17/07）

Do you used to get advice from your parents or grandparents when meeting some dilemmas? Or do you prefer to achieve help from the classmates? Facing this kind of options, I have to admit that the older people can provide valuable ideas as well, but I still incline to ask someone who is as old as me for suggestions.

In the first place, similar life circumstance facilitates my same-age friends to bring me some advices fitting my situation. Living with the resembled surrounds, we probably meet the same difficulties so that constructive suggestions could be provided by them. For instance, my young friends could instruct me how to use the computer to deal with my school work such as edifying my paper or searching information on the Internet. Additionally, they can carry me advices in leisure life like recommending clothes to attend a party and what kind of music is the most popular one, jazz, pop, or rock? Therefore, the same-age friends are acquainted with what I need in my life.

What is also worthy noticing is that people among similar age are easier to communicate with for each other. As psychologist approved, when people need to consult some questions from elder people, ordinarily they are all tend to be more timid and shy which lead communication less effective. That is true at least in my life. When spending time with my classmates I would never concern whether my behavior is appropriately or my works is polite enough. But in front of my parents or some more unfamiliar elders, tension would occupy my mind in that I have to worried about something such as if dressed indecent. Correspondingly, the same age people could bring less pressure to talk with in order that you problem could be easily represented.

Admittedly, elder people’s suggestion also has its own worth which should not be denied. Never will you figure not how many events they have underwent, and the ample life experience enables them to tell which direction is right in most crosses. For example, before I entered university, I don’t know how to choose my major which would dramatically influence my most part of life. At that time, my father, as an experienced engineer, represented me plenty of information on this career in terms of income, welfare, prospective, challenges and so on. Thanks to his advice, I think I made the correct major choice.

  
To sum up, in certain cases to ask older people for advice could effectively solve our problems on account of their abundant experience; however, if take a more comprehensive consideration, I would hold the belief that the advices provided by our same-age friends are more valuable since they not only have same life with us, and also easy to talk with.

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Do you used to get(Are you used to getting) advice from your parents or grandparents when meeting some dilemmas? Or do you prefer to achieve help from the classmates? Facing this kind of options, I have to admit that the older people can provide valuable ideas as well(delete), but I still incline (am inclined )to ask someone who is as old as me for suggestions.

In the first place, similar life circumstance facilitates my same-age friends to bring me some advices fitting my situation. Living with the resembled surrounds, we probably meet the same difficulties so that constructive suggestions could be provided by them. For instance, my young friends could instruct me how to use the computer to deal with my school work such as edifying my paper or searching information on the Internet. Additionally, they can carry me advices in leisure life like recommending clothes to attend a party and what kind of music is the most popular one, jazz, pop, or rock? Therefore, the same-age friends are acquainted with what I need in my life. & K9 v( ^  y) u; a
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What is also worthy noticing is that people among similar age are easier to communicate with for each other. As psychologist approved, when people need to consult some questions from elder people, ordinarily they are all tend to be more timid and shy which lead communication less effective. That is true at least in my life. When spending time with my classmates I would never concern whether my behavior is appropriately or my works is polite enough. But in front of my parents or some more unfamiliar elders, tension would occupy my mind in that I have to worried about something such as if dressed indecent. Correspondingly, the same age people could bring less pressure to talk with in order that you problem could be easily represented.# H* ?1 O/ Q' t6 \

Admittedly, elder people’s suggestion also has its own worth which should not be denied. Never will you figure not how many events they have underwent, and the ample life experience enables them to tell which direction is right in most crosses. For example, before I entered university, I don’t know how to choose my major which would dramatically influence my most part of life. At that time, my father, as an experienced engineer, represented me plenty of information on this career in terms of income, welfare, prospective, challenges and so on. Thanks to his advice, I think I made the correct major choice.2 N- y- W* M6 P5 `  [

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To sum up, in certain cases to ask older people for advice could effectively solve our problems on account of their abundant experience; however, if take a more comprehensive consideration, I would hold the belief that the advices provided by our same-age friends are more valuable since they not only have same life with us, and also easy to talk with.

意见同上一篇，写完后可以自己先检查一下，不少词汇错误。

lulufriendUID: 2612617

Do you used to get(Are you used to getting) advice from your parents or grandparents when meeting some dilemmas? Or do you prefer to achieve help from the classmates? Facing this kind of options, I have to admit that the older people can provide valuable ideas (as well), but I still incline to ask someone who is as old as me for suggestions.

In the first place, similar life circumstance facilitates my same-age friends to bring me some advices fitting my situation. Living with the resembled surrounds, we probably meet the same difficulties so that constructive suggestions could be provided by them. For instance, my young friends could instruct me how to use the computer to deal with my school work such as edifying my paper or searching information on the Internet. Additionally, they can carry me advices in leisure life like recommending clothes to attend a party and what kind of music is the most popular one, jazz, pop, or rock? Therefore, the same-age friends are acquainted with what I need in my life.(例子很好啊~)  

What is also worthy noticing is that people among similar age are easier to communicate with (for each other). As psychologist approved, when people need to consult some questions from elder people, ordinarily they are all tend to be more timid and shy which lead communication less effective. That is true at least in my life. When spending time with my classmates I would never concern whether my behavior is appropriately or my works is polite enough. But in front of my parents or some more unfamiliar elders, tension would occupy my mind in that I have to worried(worry) about something such as if dressed indecent. Correspondingly, the same age people could bring less pressure to talk with in order that you(r) problem could be easily represented.

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Admittedly, elder people’s suggestion also has its own worth which should not be denied. Never will you figure not(out) how many events they have underwent(undergone), and the ample life experience enables them to tell which direction is right in most crosses. For example, before I entered university, I don’t(didn't) know how to choose my major which would dramatically influence my most part of life. At that time, my father, as an experienced engineer, represented me plenty of information on this career in terms of income, welfare, prospective, challenges and so on. Thanks to his advice, I think I made the correct major choice.

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To sum up, in certain cases to ask older people for advice could effectively solve our problems on account of their abundant experience; however, if take a more comprehensive consideration, I would hold the belief that the advice(s不可数~) provided by our same-age friends are(is) more valuable since they not only have same life with us, and(but) also are easy to talk with.

个人认为写得还是不错的~例子上很具体~句型也较多变~~一起努力把！！