6,7月份 cracking ibt essay! 小组写作组mikixiaoci的第14次作业

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Many people do often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves. However, frankly, I don't agree with this way of decision-making. In my opinion, I think it’s not a good idea to let other people make decisions for them. In spite of that, let others making decisions has its own advantages.
The advantages of let others make decisions for them are numerous. The first is that different people have different knowledge, so they may point out something you missed. The second is that it provides a way of decision-making when you can’t make a choice.
Though let others make decisions for them are numerous, there are some even more compelling reasons for them to make decisions themselves. First of all, no one knows them more than themselves, even their parents. They know themselves clearest, such as what their favorite is and what do they can't expose to people. Moreover, people make decisions for their own good, thus sometimes other people help them make a decision, no good for them or even harm to you, in order to make benefits for their own. Thus, only themselves can completely stand by them side. However, making decisions ourselves don't mean that we close our ears to people, it's just we make the decisions at the end of the proposal of each person. Once upon a time I fell in love with a guy when I was preparing a very important exam. He want to make a vacation in the near city so that we can enjoy lovely days with each other, and I was really hard to make a decisions whether stay in school preparing for my exam or go with him. Finally I asked him to make a decision for me, then we certainly go for a holiday and I got a not pretty grades.
From this, I now really think that only they can make the better decisions for them. I do know there are advantages to let others make decisions for them. However, I have come to the conclusion that something different is better.

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1# mikixiaoci

Many people do often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves. However, frankly, I don't agree with this way of decision-making. In my opinion, I think it’s not a good idea to let other people make decisions for them. In spite of that, let others making decisions has its own advantages.


The advantages of let others make decisions for them are numerous. The first is that different people have different knowledge, so they may point out something you missed. The second is that it provides a way of decision-making when you can’t make a choice.$ y8 ^+ U/ G5 v

Though let others make decisions for them are numerous, there are some even more compelling reasons for them to make decisions themselves. First of all, no one knows them more than themselves, even their parents. They know themselves clearest, such as what their favorite is and what do they can't expose to people. Moreover, people make decisions for their own good, thus sometimes other people help them make a decision, no good for them or even harm to you, in order to make benefits for their own. Thus, only themselves can completely stand by them side. However, making decisions ourselves don't mean that we close our ears to people, it's just we make the decisions at the end of the proposal of each person. Once upon a time I fell in love with a guy when I was preparing a very important exam. He want to make a vacation in the near city so that we can enjoy lovely days with each other, and I was really hard to make a decisions whether stay in school preparing for my exam or go with him. Finally I asked him to make a decision for me, then we certainly go for a holiday and I got a not pretty grades.


From this, I now really think that only they can make the better decisions for them. I do know there are advantages to let others make decisions for them. However, I have come to the conclusion that something different is better.

很好！学习中……

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2# lsr91
Many people do often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves. However, frankly, I don't agree with this way of decision-making. In my opinion, I think it’s not a good idea to let other people make decisions for them. In spite of that, let others making decisions has its own advantages.

The advantages of let others make decisions for them are numerous. The first is that different people have different knowledge, so they may point out something you missed. The second is that it provides a way of decision-making when you can’t make a choice.0 y6 h' D4 s3 e) |5 J7 x! Z
Though let others make decisions for them are numerous advantages, there are some even more compelling reasons for them to make decisions themselves(重复). First of all, no one knows them more than themselves, even including their parents. They know themselves clearest, such as what their favorite is and what do they can't expose to people. Moreover, people make decisions for their own good(benefits), thus sometimes other people help them make a decision, no good for them or even harm to you(不应该是you), in order to make benefits for their own.(这个罗列的太生硬了吧，是否可以用compare之类的对比词。 Compare to he/she makes decisions for him/herself, let others make decision for him/her not only is a bad idea, but also lead to harm him/her. 类似这样的句子行不 ) Thus, only themselves can completely stand by them(their) side. However, making decisions by ourselves don't mean that we close our ears to people, it's just we make the decisions at the end of the proposal of each person. Once upon a time I fell in love with a guy when I was preparing a very important exam. He want to make a vacation in the near city so that we can enjoy lovely days with each other, and I was really hard to make a decisions whether stay in school preparing for my exam or go with him. Finally I asked him to make a decision for me, then we certainly go for a holiday and I got a not pretty grades.


From this, I now really think that only they can make the better decisions for them. I do know there are advantages to let others make decisions for them. However, I have come to the conclusion that something different is better.

我觉得最大的问题就是they和them的指代问题，在第二和第三段，我明白你要说的是“他们”，但根据语法，这个they和them之前应该有要指代的全称吧，比如你想说的people或he/she或public等等。我看托福阅读中不是很多考they的指代题吗，they前面作者都会有所解释。9 Y

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Many people do often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves. However, frankly (speaking), I don't agree with this way of decision-making. In my opinion, I think it’s not a good idea to let other people make decisions for them. In spite of that, let others making decisions has its own advantages. (I think it is better like this “In my opinion, although let others make decisions has its own advantages, I think, it is better to make their own decisions.” So, the second segment well follows.)

The advantages of let others make decisions for them are numerous. The first (one) is that different people have different knowledge (“experience” may be better than “knowledge”. Personal opinion), so they may point out something you missed. The second (one) is that it provides a way of decision-making when you can’t make a choice.
4 k9 {4 d7 ~# L- v- w1 KThough let others make decisions for them are numerous, there are some even more compelling reasons for them to make decisions themselves. (to make their own decisions) First of all, no one knows them more than themselves, even their parents. They know themselves clearest, such as what their favorite is and what do (“do” cancel) they can't expose to people. Moreover, people make decisions for their own good, thus sometimes other people help them make a decision, is no good for them or even harm to you, in order to make benefits for their own. Thus, only themselves can completely stand by them side. However, making decisions ourselves don't (does not) mean that we close our ears to people, it's just we make the decisions at the end of the proposal of each person. Once upon a time I fell in love with a guy when I was preparing a very important exam. He wanted to make a vacation in the near city so that we can enjoy lovely days with each other, and I was really hard to make a decisions (decision) whether stay in school preparing for my exam or go with him. Finally I asked him to make a decision for me, then we certainly go (WENT) for a holiday and I got a not pretty grades.
  L& {9 C1 y- l; JFrom this, I now really think that only they can make the better decisions for themselves. I do know there are advantages to let others make decisions for them. However, I have come to the conclusion that something different is better.
Only personal opinion, some mistakes may exist.

三十UID: 2423325

Many people do often let others make decisions for them rather than make decisions by themselves. However, frankly (speaking), I don't agree with this way of decision-making. In my opinion, I think it’s not a good idea to let other people make decisions for them. In spite of that, let others making decisions has its own advantages. (I think it is better like this “In my opinion, although let others make decisions has its own advantages, I think, it is better to make their own decisions.” So, the second segment well follows.)
The advantages of let others make decisions for them are numerous. The first (one) is that different people have different knowledge (“experience” may be better than “knowledge”. Personal opinion), so they may point out something you missed. The second (one) is that it provides a way of decision-making when you can’t make a choice.
Though let others make decisions for them are numerous, there are some even more compelling reasons for them to make decisions themselves. (to make their own decisions) First of all, no one knows them more than themselves, even their parents. They know themselves clearest, such as what their favorite is and what do (“do” cancel) they can't expose to people. Moreover, people make decisions for their own good, thus sometimes other people help them make a decision, is no good for them or even harm to you, in order to make benefits for their own. Thus, only themselves can completely stand by them side. However, making decisions ourselves don't (does not) mean that we close our ears to people, it's just we make the decisions at the end of the proposal of each person. Once upon a time I fell in love with a guy when I was preparing a very important exam. He wanted to make a vacation in the near city so that we can enjoy lovely days with each other, and I was really hard to make a decisions (decision) whether stay in school preparing for my exam or go with him. Finally I asked him to make a decision for me, then we certainly go (WENT) for a holiday and I got a not pretty grades.
From this, I now really think that only they can make the better decisions for themselves. I do know there are advantages to let others make decisions for them. However, I have come to the conclusion that something different is better.
Only personal opinion, some mistakes may exist.