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131"The arts (painting, music, literature, etc.) reveal the otherwise hidden ideas and impulses of a society."


The assertion points out the function of art to reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society.I hold the positive
opinion even though some may argue the creation of art is limited to a minority of artists,which leads the art works to
constrain by the artists' own thought.Actually most inspiration of art works arises from life,and the idea behind the work
unavoidably connects with that of the society,which fits any form of art such as movie,literature,painting,etc.

Turning first to the creation of art,great art works especially literature always need the adequate experience of life and
understanding of the thought during that time.For example,it is believed the outstanding stories Pride and
Prejudice,Sense and Sensibility created by Jane Austen could based on the beautiful love story she had as young.All her
novels are witty, warm and ironic portraits of the privileged classes of 18th- and 19th-century England.When it comes to
painting,conscientious observation is important for painters in order to perfect their creation.The impressing Judas in
"Final Dinner" is the result of several days Leonardo da Vinci spent with thieves and burglars. "Final Dinner" stands out
among the same-period paintings which is about religion and humanistic spirit.

What's more,artists always figure out the essence of life and make it more distinct for the public by using some
skills,such as exaggeration and comparison,in their art works."Cry" Edvard Munch seems to make no sense people at
the first glance,however,it is the abstract that makes the feeling,about life,love,death,it is conveying ten times
stronger.On balance,art could embody the hidden ideas of a society.

In addition,some art works which contains a kind of impulse could inspire people to move forward though all the
difficulties.Take the movie "Sea biscuit" based on a real story for example,it tells a miracle that a lame and semi-blind
jockey with his thin horse,whose four legs are bent, surprisingly won the competition.The spirit manifested by the movie
excites everyone.Besides,the real story that the movie based on happended in 1938 and consequentially served as a
very significant inspiration for American people to get through the Great Depression.

All in all,art is such a good carrier that we can be informed of the hidden ideas of the society and excited by the hidden
implusions of a society.Art and life always runs along hand in hand.Appreciate a building,read a novel,admire a
painting,and you can know life more.

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The assertion points out the function of art to reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society.I hold the positive
opinion even though some may argue the creation of art is limited to a minority of artists,which leads the art works to
constrain by the artists' own thought.Actually most inspiration of art works arises from life,and the idea behind the work
unavoidably connects with that of the society,which fits any form of art such as movie,literature,painting,etc.

Turning first to the creation of art,great art works especially literature always need the adequate experience of life and
understanding of the thought during that time.(不是很切中主题)For example,it is believed the outstanding stories Pride and
Prejudice,Sense and Sensibility created by Jane Austen could based on the beautiful love story she had as young.All her
novels are witty, warm and ironic portraits of the privileged classes of 18th- and 19th-century England.When it comes to
painting,conscientious observation is important for painters in order to perfect their creation.The impressing Judas in
"Final Dinner" is the result of several days Leonardo da Vinci spent with thieves and burglars. "Final Dinner" stands out
among the same-period paintings which is about religion and humanistic spirit.

(这段讲述比较空泛，大意是说艺术体现生活。但是我们仍然有许多方面体现生活，新闻报道，科学文章，日常交流；要体现艺术的unique(这我是从我从otherwise推的)应该从艺术的深度或者广度)

What's more,artists always figure out the essence of life and make it more distinct for the public by using some
skills,such as exaggeration and comparison,in their art works."Cry" Edvard Munch seems to make no sense people at
the first glance,however,it is the abstract that makes the feeling,about life,love,death,it is conveying ten times
stronger.On balance,art could embody the hidden ideas of a society.

(这一段从深度入手，但是展开不够，论证不够细致)

In addition,some art works which contains a kind of impulse could inspire people to move forward though all the
difficulties.Take the movie "Sea biscuit" based on a real story for example,it tells a miracle that a lame and semi-blind
jockey with his thin horse,whose four legs are bent, surprisingly won the competition.The spirit manifested by the movie
excites everyone.Besides,the real story that the movie based on happended in 1938 and consequentially served as a
very significant inspiration for American people to get through the Great Depression.

(最后一段展开很origin，思想很不错)

All in all,art is such a good carrier that we can be informed of the hidden ideas of the society and excited by the hidden
implusions of a society.Art and life always runs along hand in hand.Appreciate a building,read a novel,admire a
painting,and you can know life more.

merit:文字一如既往的优秀，拜
drawbacks:
1.文章展开没有抓住otherwise，可能有点偏题
2.不知道是不是在论坛排版的问题，每个标点之后没有空格

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The assertion points out the function of art to reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society.I hold the positive opinion even though some may argue the creation of art is limited to a minority of artists,which leads the art works to constrain by the artists' own thought.Actually most inspiration of art works arises from life,and the idea behind the work unavoidably connects with that of the society,which fits any form of art such as movie,literature,painting,etc.

Turning first to the fact that the creation of art is based on real life, great art works especially literature always need the adequate experience of life and understanding of the thought during that time.For example,it is believed the outstanding stories Pride and Prejudice,Sense and Sensibility created by Jane Austen could based on the beautiful love story she had as young.All her novels are witty, warm and ironic portraits of the privileged classes of 18th- and 19th-century England.When it comes to painting,conscientious observation is important for painters in order to perfect their creation.The impressing Judas in "Final Dinner" is the result of several days Leonardo da Vinci spent with thieves and burglars. "Final Dinner" stands out among the same-period paintings which is about religion and humanistic spirit.On balance the art works arose from the real life and then evidently presented the idea during that time more or less.

What's more,artists always figure out the essence of life and make it more distinct for the public by using some skills,such as exaggeration and comparison,in their art works."Cry" Edvard Munch seems to make no sense to people at the first glance,however,it is the abstract that makes the feeling,about life,love,death,it is conveying ten times stronger.It is the artists who concentrate on the things behind what the world is to the public.It is the artists who represent the abstruse hidden truth in a way which is accessible to the public. Lu Xun, chineses revolutionary and literati, who devoted all his passion to write in order to alert all Chinese people the necessity of revolution is a convincing case.

In addition,some art works which contains a kind of impulse could inspire people to move forward though all the difficulties.Take the movie "Sea biscuit" based on a real story for example,it tells a miracle that a lame and semi-blind jockey with his thin horse,whose four legs are bent, surprisingly won the competition.The spirit manifested by the movie excites everyone.Besides,the real story that the movie based on happended in 1938 and consequentially served as a very significant inspiration for American people to get through the Great Depression.

All in all,art is such a good carrier that we can be informed of the hidden ideas of the society and excited by the hidden implusions of a society.Art and life always runs along hand in hand.Appreciate a building,read a novel,admire a painting,and you can know life more.

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The assertion points out the function of art to reveal the hidden ideas and impulses of a society. I hold the positive opinion even though some may argue the creation of art is limited to a minority of artists, which leads the art works to constrain by the artists' own thought. Actually most inspiration of art works arises from life, and the idea behind the work unavoidably connects with that of the society, which fits any form of art such as movie, literature, painting, etc.

Turning first to the fact that the creation of art is based on real life, great art works especially literature always need the adequate experience of life and understanding of the thought during that time. For example, it is believed the outstanding stories Pride and Prejudice, Sense and Sensibility created by Jane Austen could based on the beautiful love story she had as young. All her novels are witty, warm and ironic portraits of the privileged classes of 18th- and 19th-century England. When it comes to painting, conscientious observation is important for painters in order to perfect their creation. The impressing Judas in "Final Dinner" is the result of several days Leonardo da Vinci spent with thieves and burglars. "Final Dinner" stands out among the same-period paintings which is about religion and humanistic spirit. On balance the art works arose from the real life and then evidently presented the idea during that time more or less.

What's more, artists always figure out the essence of life and make it more distinct for the public by using some skills (用techniques比较好), such as exaggeration and comparison, in their art works. "Cry" Edvard Munch seems to make no sense to people at the first glance, however, It is the abstract (作名词用的时候是摘要的意思) that makes the feeling, about life, love, death, it is conveying ten times stronger. (这句话有点怪) It is the artists who concentrate on the things behind what the world is to the public. It is the artists who represent the abstruse hidden truth in a way which is accessible to the public. Lu Xun, chineses revolutionary and literati, who devoted all his passion to write in order to alert all Chinese people the necessity of revolution is a convincing case.

In addition, some art works which contains a kind of impulse could inspire people to move forward though all the difficulties. Take the movie "Sea biscuit" based on a real story for example, it tells a miracle that a lame and semi-blind jockey with his thin horse, whose four legs are bent, surprisingly won the competition. The spirit manifested by the movie excites everyone. Besides, the real story that the movie based on happended in 1938 and consequentially served as a very significant inspiration for American people to get through the Great Depression.

All in all, art is such a good carrier that we can be informed of the hidden ideas of the society and excited by the hidden implusions of a society. Art and life always runs along hand in hand. Appreciate a building, read a novel, admire a painting, and you can know life more.

基本没怎么改，除了个别地方
我觉得ha提出的关于otherwise的问题，我们有必要探讨一下。