托福暑期备考集结号作文作业2

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Outline:
1.health
2.economy, tourism
3.people feel better
4.environmental friendly, animal and plants, lower pollution,...

In the past years, striking development of economical have taken place in China, and people in our country tend to accumulate more wealth and can get more commodities which make life easier, like car, air conditioner and computer. According to some survey, there are dissatisfaction in people's life for some reasons. Among them, one key factor is the bad environment condition including dirty air and hotter summer and so on. From the data, I strongly agree with the statement that government should focus more on preserving nature environment, but I don't have the same idea that less attention should be paid to economic development.

If the goverment focus more on preserving nature environment, then human will become more friendly to environment which will result in protecting animals and plants, making the quality of the air in human's living place more freshing and other positive effects. In Beijing, we can find such examples. As government in Beijing pay more attention to the improving the water quality in rivers and lakes, an increasing number of wild ducks lived in Beijing recent years. Other animals which was disappeared for some years come back this years. So we can see that the focus from government make people more friendly to animals.

Many advantages which help improve economy of the area result from the behavior of preserving nature environment. Our city is abound with such examples, such as the Ba Daling Wild Animal Park and the National Forest Park in the south of my city. The government spent money on preserving the wild environment in the place, which attracts some precious or lovely animals. The animals there reversely attract people willing to touch the nature. Tourists from all over the country come to my city to see the animals in a cage specially designed for human preventing them from disturbing the animals which contributes more on the tax . Thus the government gain much more money from the tourism, which enable the goverment to pay more attention on the economic development there. The success of our cities animal park strongly support the idea that focus on preservation of the nature from the government will bring a large amount of profits to the local economic development.
Last but not least, people in the area will live a joyful life, therefore their lifespan may be longer if the government pay no attention to the nature. About ten years ago the government of our city doen't pay much attention to the air condition in our city. In winter every family use coal to keep warm. At that time, the government doesn't stop the use of the coal with lots of smoke, so many people got cough and some other lung deseases. 5 or 6 years ago, the administration suggest that we use coal without smoke, henceforth, the number of people who got deseases reduce to a low level. The progress in the air condition also lead to comfortable life for the senior citizens, before the ban, few older citizens exercise outside in the window, but now you can see them do morning exercises in many places like park or school, or some other places.

From the above examples and analysis, we can see that the investment in the environment protection doesn't much good to human's life, and may influence the economic development positively. So I can safely conclude that more attention should be paid on preserving the nature, and government should adopt the methods which preserving the environment as well as spur the economy.

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