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Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that they've done well

When we are watching an interview of successful people on Television or newspaper, CHALLENGE is likely to be the most frequent words. This group of people are never satisfied with current situation and achievement, but choose to take new things and risks. One of my friends is just this kind of person. Once we talked about “risks of change”, I was deeply impressed and would like to share.

“A real leader should always lead trends, be the FIRST.” He took Steve Jobs and Apple Inc. as an example, which is unquestionable the leader of technical innovation and fashion. At the very beginning when Steve Jobs established Apple Inc., his team came up with the first personal computer. Later, the team led by Steve Jobs keep on promoting new and individualized products. From Powerbook to Macbook Pro, from Mac Mini to iMac, from iphone to iPad, every time it’s products promotion conference can abstract numerous attention because they are always NEW and REVOLUTIONARY. They are discussed by people who love it or not, stimulate the inspiration of people from IT companies and even the fashion circle. Up to now, it has been successful for over two decades, and nobody can shake its position as a leader, the Mr. First.



“If you do not move forward, you will be left by the world.” He took the case of Yange Radio as an example. Yange is a famous Chinese radio band in 80s, 20c. Its high quality radio win a good name for itself at home and abroad. In a quite long period, it was the most popular electronic product among Chinese families. People regarded it as fashion to get one. However, when CD player, VCD player appeared in market, Yange responded slowly who thought those things would not be popular and it might take risk to follow up too quick. Years later, when they decided to follow up the trend and produce these popular things, they found  they could never keep up with the customer’s needs any more. Yange then soon quitted the market and nobody of today’s young generation knew that there was such a famous radio band called Yange.

Additionally, he believes that having no the spirit of taking risk, no failure, practice and experience, success will never come or might vanish soon. “You never know what will come up when you go through a boundless forest. Beast or beauty, both are possible. But when you conquer all kinds of unpredictable difficulties, you gradually become hardy which should be the most cherish-able fortune in your life. You might fail and harvest nothing, even lost all your material fortune. But you also learn to conclude your experience. One day, finally, you will be successful.

I am now the believer of chasing new things and conquering unpredictable difficulties. No matter it is today simply for self-promotion, or one day for the development of my organization, we should have such a spirit that is positively to face challenge and to keep curiosity for new things. With this, our short life can be colorful and you can deliver your spiritual fortune to your grandchildren. And the world can also move forward because of the individuals like us. Our offsprings will be the beneficiaries as well.

闪闪硕硕UID：2825715

改好了，具体内容见附件，感觉你的例子和名言好多啊，佩服，向你学习！！
另外第一次改作文不足之处敬请见谅咯O(∩_∩)O~

SilviaZhoUID：2236948

谢谢闪闪烁烁改的作文，换了个电脑下到了。先把今天的帖开了哈哈

SilviaZhoUID：2236948

Most people prefer others makingdecision for them than making a decision for themselves

When I was growing up, my parentslike to make decisions for me. Once I want to do something that is not directlybenefit my schoolwork, they always persuade me to give up. Most of my friendsare in the same situation. And finally, they get used to letting others makedecisions for themselves. But I never give up, and still believe that peopleshould be the owner of themselves and to make decision independently.

First of all, thinking independentlyis the exclusive quality of human being. “Ego cogito ergo sum. “ -- I think,therefore I am. That’s what Rene Descartes said in hundreds years ago. Andmaking decision for us is the basic thing to practice thinking independently.In the process of making decision for ourselves, we think independently andlearn environment, situation, and ourselves figuring out what is our favoriteand what matches our interests. It is a real fantastic experience that peoplewho are not willing to make decision for them can never feel.

Secondly, it can be less regretfulwhen the decision is made by us. We are the only one that knows our interests, self-conditions,principle and ethical bottom line. When a decision is made, all these factorsare important and cannot be ignored. If the decision is made by others, mostpeople will realize that the decision is wrong and be regretful. On thecontrary, people who made decision for them -- even they finally realize thedecision is wrong -- will consider that as a further inlook at them and make abetter decision, less regretful.

Thirdly, people making decision for themcan win more admiration and help. It is undeniable that people who areindependent is admirable. That some times means that they are confident,resolute and brave. Those kinds of people always know their own directions, academicallyor professionally. Even one day when they fall in confusion, the ones who knowtheir direction would like to point out a new way for them.

In conclusion, making decision for usis unquestionably a must-equipped quality. We lonely come to the world andlonely leave as an individual, only ourselves can led our lives over thelifelong time. We should grasp the ownership bestowed by the God. Live withidentity, with respect.

远远在笑UID：2742022

见附件。

KeeeeenWUID：2592937

不好意思，修改晚了。昨天我登录的时候看见你还没有上传作文，只有等到今天这个时候来改了。

SilviaZhoUID：2236948

哇咔咔，谢谢远远和Kneeeeenw，以前上学的时候被老师逼的20分钟5段体300词，还是手写。。。辛苦大家辛苦修改我的八股了:loveliness:

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7.6

It is more important to reserve land for human beings than for endangered animals.

Modern society characterized with speedy industrial growth, benefit-oriented rules and apathy. People who are stakeholders only care about how much it immediately deserves in cash if the project is put into action. Nothing is necessary to worry about If the aftermath is catastrophic for common people whose interest might be damaged, not mention those endangered animals. However, people sooner or later can be regretful for their behavior.

First of all, we need a diversity world. Since human being entered the age of industry, especially in the resent one hundred years, species has been disappearing at the speed of 1 species per hour. Finally one day, there is no other sounds from pure mother nature, but only apathetic statistics in all human’s conversation; no clear expression in eyes of lovely creatures, but only avarice for gold and cash. People is the only creature on the earth and nobody can identify beautiful and ugly any more.  

Secondly, mutual respect is the core conduct code of the nature. Every species is equally created by the God. In order to let all the species including animals harmoniously live on the earth who are born with the birth of the earth, God decides rules as well. Mutual respect is one of them. When people destroyed the rules and endanger other animals, they can find that they are endangered as well. When people killed the animals who are born enemy of another kind of animal which likes attacking human being, nowhere there is for people to escape.

Therefore, if people insist to the idea that reserving land for human beings is more important than for endangered animals, they will be regretful at length. There might be a lot of ways to achieve balance in terms of political, economic or other fields, but in natural circle, the way is single. Live and let live. We all can benefit from the rule.

cocojamesUID：2797094

Modern society characterized with （is charaterized by 不加is 好像没有谓语动词哦) speedy industrial growth, benefit-oriented rules and apathy. People who are stakeholders only care about how much it immediately deserves in cash if the project is put into action. Nothing is necessary to worry about If the aftermath is catastrophic for common people whose interest might be damaged, not（no） mention those endangered animals. However, people sooner or later would be regretful for their behavior. 6 J/ I3 S5 T& H/ ~4 G2 q( u" _

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First of all, we need a diversity world. Since human being entered the age of industry, especially in the resent（recent） one hundred years, species has been disappearing at the speed of 1 species per hour. Finally one day, there is no other sounds from pure mother nature, but only apathetic statistics in all human’s conversation; no clear expression in eyes of lovely creatures, but only avarice for gold and cash. People is the only creature on the earth and nobody can identify beautiful and ugly any more.  

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Secondly, mutual respect is the core conduct code of the nature. Every species is equally created by the God. In order to let all the species including animals harmoniously live on the earth who are born with the birth of the earth, God decides rules as well. Mutual respect is one of them. When people destroyed（destory） the rules and endanger other animals, they can find that they are endangered as well. When people killed the animals who are born enemy of another kind of animal which likes attacking human being, nowhere there is for people to escape.

Therefore, if people insist to（insist on or stick to） the idea that reserving land for human beings is more important than for endangered animals, they will be regretful at length. There might be a lot of ways to achieve balance in terms of political, economic or other fields, but in natural circle, the way is single. Live and let live. We all can benefit from the rule.

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zenglingyuanUID：2773905

写的很好啊 学到不少东西 2个小小的建议
there is no other sounds from pure mother nature, but only apathetic statistics in all human’s conversation; no clear expression in eyes of lovely creatures, but only avarice for gold and cash. 最好2个句子都用there be开头 然后在加个句子组成排比就完美了

In order to let all the species including animals harmoniously live on the earth who are born with the birth of the earth 你确定？最早生命的出现估计是距今大约38亿年以前。
而地球起码要45亿了 不是我鸡蛋挑骨头 你知道老外的自然科学都很厉害 这种常识性错误就会很刺眼 总的来说很不错 长线关注

SilviaZhoUID：2236948

哇咔咔，谢谢笑笑和coco的建议。这几天太忙了。。没顾得上给你们俩改作文。。。自打屁屁10下。。下不为例！

贴今天作文：


7.8
Students would receive a better, effective education if they were required to attend classes for 11 months of a year

Argument among educators that if students should attend classes for 11 months of a year is heat in recent years. Someone advocating to popularize eleven-month curriculum believe that this arrangement is good for students to receive a better and effective education, while the others disagree. And I do disagree with the tight time arrangement as well.

First of all, effectiveness can not be achieved simply by the way of increasing course hours, but by the balance between quantity and quality. Once we have to sacrifice quality for quantity, effectiveness is impossible to be achieved. To guarantee teaching quality, students need time to digest what they have learned. If eleven-month curriculum is popularized, students’ self-study hours is unavoidably to be occupied. They have no more time to dive in knowledge delivered in teacher’s lecture, not mention to find out their weakness and problems which will hinder students’ pursuit of effectiveness.

Secondly, eleven-month courses might cause students’ resistance to school education. When students are under huge pressure that they have to progressively study for 11 months without enough break, it’s easy for them to feel bored and give up. In this case, better education is such an idealized goal.

Most of all, good education should be gained through the awareness of life-long study, and effectiveness actually depends on the ability of self-improvement. Knowledge acquired today is actually easy to be forgotten years later if they are not related to students’ lives or everyday work. If students want to keep up with excellence to show their good education background even after graduation, they have to update their self knowledge base by the capability of self study. Therefore, the ability of self study become very important. Meanwhile, excellent self-study skills can help students master essence of every class. Achievement of effectiveness in this way will be a natural result.

In conclusion, we should never expect to receive better and effective education through squeezing entertainment hours and attending various classes. Quality sometimes important than quantity. Once we master good methodology for study, both of effective and excellent education can be gained. And most importantly, we don’t have to give up our lovely games as well.


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有word可以贴上来吗？ 12# SilviaZho

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7.8 修改作文
Students would receive a better, effective education if they were required to attend classes for 11 months of a year7 O0 ^( ]3 M.
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Argument among educators that if (去if, 后面么主句啊) students should attend classes for 11 months of a year is heat in recent years. Someone advocating to popularize（popularizing） eleven-month curriculum believe that this arrangement is good for students to receive a better and effective education, while the others disagree. And I do disagree with the tight time arrangement as well.


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First of all, effectiveness can not be achieved simply by the way of increasing course hours, but by the balance between quantity and quality. Once we have to sacrifice quality for quantity, effectiveness is impossible to be achieved. To guarantee teaching quality, students need time to digest what they have learned. If eleven-month curriculum is popularized, students’ self-study hours is (are) unavoidably to be occupied. They have no more time to dive in knowledge delivered in teacher’s lecture, not mention to find out their weakness and problems which will hinder students’ pursuit of effectiveness.

Secondly, eleven-month courses might cause students’ resistance to school education. When students are under huge pressure that they have to progressively study for 11 months without enough break, it’s easy for them to feel bored and give up. In this case, better education is such an idealized goal.这段可以再论述一些啊
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Most of all, good education should be gained through the awareness of life-long study, and effectiveness actually depends on the ability of self-improvement. Knowledge acquired today is actually easy to be forgotten years later if they are not related to students’ lives or everyday work. If students want to keep up with excellence to show their good education background even after graduation, they have to update their self knowledge base by the capability of self study. Therefore, the ability of self study becomes very important. Meanwhile, excellent self-study skills can help students master essence of every class. Achievement of effectiveness in this way will be a natural result.! G! {" T$ p. n; p

In conclusion, we should never expect to receive better and effective education through squeezing entertainment hours and attending various classes. Quality sometimes (is) important than quantity. Once we master good methodology for study, both of effective and excellent education can be gained. And most importantly, we don’t have to give up our lovely games as well./ [. v# l" B2 |, j# g



思路挺清楚的，蛮好的，加油~

SilviaZhoUID：2236948

7.10

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

People always argue if teachers should assign homework to students everyday. Someone believe that students should have enough free time to arrange their own time after class which might be good for stimulating their interest in a certain field and developing potential, while others insist that students should do homework everyday. And I am the supporter of the latter opinion.

First of all, most students actually tend to simply spend their free time on various entertainment. Video games, soap TV dramas, and even Karaoke and shopping, any of these activities is preference of most students, rather than music, sports game, or reading. Generally speaking, it is impossible for them to dig out a certain field and develop their potential for long-term development.

On the contrary, although daily homework might occupy most of the free time of students which might hinder the development of students’ own interest to some degrees, knowledge learned everyday can be timely review and stabilize. Meanwhile, problems might be discovered and addressed on time as well, which is definitely good for students to master knowledge. Unquestionably, if students want to step farther in their future professional career, fundamental knowledge is vital. Without that, they might be even unable to express or understand accurately.

Besides, assignment of daily homework is also good for teachers to guarantee teaching quality. Since teacher can timely discover students’ problems and difficulties reflected in homework, better teaching solutions can be designed afterwards. In this way, all the students can be finally benefitted from the daily homework.

Therefore, we need daily homework. Everyone, nowadays, is responsible for the growth of students, especially teachers. No matter from which aspects, to give free space for developing students’ talents and potential, or to guarantee their academic merits, the original purpose is to give them a brilliant future. Considering this, helping students better master fundamental knowledge should always be placed as the first choice.