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[主题活动] Argument写作入门-开头段第二步:根据题目要求写主旨句 [复制链接]

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谢谢!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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发表于 2015-8-18 22:12:23 |只看该作者
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发表于 2015-8-19 09:12:45 |只看该作者
thanks a  lot ~~~~~~~~~~~

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发表于 2015-8-19 10:10:20 |只看该作者
写argument似乎有时候难以找到很具体的形象的例子……目前发现的比较难客服的地方

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发表于 2015-8-19 11:04:14 |只看该作者
argu入门第一篇回帖传送门:
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"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted."

结论:
Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior.If you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty.
论据:
1.        Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time.
2.        Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000.
3.        Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month.
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According to the letter from the homeowner to his/her friend,Adams Realty is superior to Fitch Realty since the latter has less real estate agents including part-time enployees, Adam has higher revenue and better sales,and the ability to sell home faster.There’re absolutely some assumotions such as more full-time employee could guarantee a higher efficiency,homeowners could get a higher price from the real esteem possessing higher revenue and better sales,and real esteem didn’t change exquisitely from ten years ago to last year. To evaluate the homeowner’s argument,assumptions should be evaluated.

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发表于 2015-8-19 12:10:51 |只看该作者
thx~~~~~~~~~~

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发表于 2015-8-19 13:34:34 |只看该作者
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发表于 2015-8-20 11:07:03 |只看该作者
谢谢老师!

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非常感谢老师

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RE: Argument写作入门-开头段第二步:根据题目要求写主旨句 [修改]
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