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发表于 2010-9-4 00:37:42 |显示全部楼层
9.2作文,xdjm帮忙多多指正,辛苦啦
大家帮忙指正,使劲拍砖,谢谢xdjm了!~~
The perpetual problem that" Should university students take part-time jobs or not?" constantly confronts us. Different people hold quite different views of it. Some firmly believe that taking part-time jobs is a dispensable part of getting access to a successful career, while others may take it for granted that we students should focus all on the major. Well, as far as I am concerned, this problem is actually based on a case-by-case bias.

First and foremost, for the students who do not possess a glorious and influential background, they have to depend on themselves to seek their fortune and live out their dreams. Taking part time jobs is a rational choice not only for the reason that they can earn some money to make better their life quality, alleviate economical tensions, also that it is a definitely advantageous opportunity for their career preparation. I mean they can obtain skills or experiences, construct good interpersonal relationships and social connections, which may act as an imperative role in their future job hunting process. Of course, this kind of choice is also available to those who are not quite satisfied with their majors or want to change their professions. It can never be denied that taking part time job actually take up a large amount of one's time and distract vigor to some extent despite the advantages it brings.

However, according to situations of various individuals, there certainly exist the population who have a preference towards scientific research. This group of people enjoy the delight while delving into the science problems and want to make a difference in their field.
Considering their cases, taking part-time jobs is not appropriate for them and will certainly have an adverse influence on their study. They have to concentrate on their major which is the cardinal qualification that scholars should possess. Taking my roommate as an example, she make use of her part time to work as a tutor, although she can earn money at an early age that may be jealous by others, she could not spare enough time for major study, especially for us medical students. As a consequence, she cannot do very well as an internship in hospital and finally lose the chance to be promoted as a free-interview graduate. And other students utilize and cherish the chances as an internship in hospital, they consequently gain a lot clinical skills.


Last but not least, as the famous saying goes" Everything has its good and bad sides." We should consider our own conditions and explore the value of taking part-time job or concentrating on study to its fullest extents, as long as it serves the best interest of us.

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