标题: Daily Writing 作业 by cherry_xi [打印本页] 作者: cherry_xi 时间: 2011-2-11 20:54:35 标题: Daily Writing 作业 by cherry_xi
2011年2月11号
独立作文
25. It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Recently, there is an announcement sticking by our community which wrote a large shopping center willl be built in our neighborhood. Some people worry about a rising price of the articles for the daily life during the modern building established. Some people support this plan. As for me, I definitely pleased this announcement for several reasons.
The first reason is that there is a much wider choice of options available coming with the shopping center. There are more jobs to choose from, different kinds of companies and types of work such as trade assistant, manager and salesman. The job opportunities will appeal to young people live here marraging, having a child which need a well education situation. All those will promote the neighorhood enviroment more ripening.
The second reason I agree the center coming will provide convenience to our neighbors. Normally, neighbor doing need to make a long drive into the city. If the shopping center established, the everyday trifle will done in a short time. It is really convenient to the elder people and workers.
Granted the consumption level will rise, but the shopping center will bring us many benefits. Furthermore,the Chinese inflation is increasing in 3% each year. There is no doubt that the price of articles will go up.
In summary, a well planned and complete facilities shopping center supplies a convenience and service to the people who live there, increases the economic vibrancy. So, building a shopping center is beneficial to the neighbors.
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实在憋不出来了= =作者: 内牛满面 时间: 2011-2-12 11:17:18
Recently, there is an announcement sticking(stuck) by our community which wrote(read) a large shopping center will be built in our neighborhood. Some people worry about a rising price(price rising) of the articles for the daily life(daily supplies) during(?) the modern building established. Some people support this plan. As for me, I definitely pleased(welcome) this announcement for several reasons.
The first reason is that there is(will be) a much wider choice of options(much more options) available coming with the shopping center. There are(will be) more jobs to choose from, different kinds of companies and types of work such as trade(sale) assistant, manager and salesman. The job opportunities will appeal to young people live(living) here marriaging(getting marriage), having a child which need a well education situation. All those(of these) will promote the neighorhood environment(surrounding) more ripening.
The second reason(is that) I agree the center coming(coming of the center) will provide convenience to our neighbors. Normally, neighbor doing need to make a long drive into the city(neighbors need to make a drive into the city for shopping.). If the shopping center established, the everyday(daily) trifle will done in a short time. It is really convenient to the elder people and workers.
Granted the consumption level will rise, but the shopping center will bring us many benefits. Furthermore,the Chinese inflation is increasing in 3% each year. There is no doubt that the price of articles will go up.(这一段实在让人摸不到头脑……我理解是想凑字数……)
In summary, a well-planned and complete facilities shopping center supplies a(去掉) convenience and service to the people who live there, increases the economic vibrancy. So, building a shopping center is beneficial to the neighbors.作者: 内牛满面 时间: 2011-2-12 11:22:58