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作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-5-30 06:39:59 标题: 【口语小组】byj1991作业贴(7.7)

本帖最后由 byj1991 于 2014-10-20 23:33 编辑

时隔n久，继续踏上托福征程，fighting!
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10.20 全套
Task 1: Talk about a style of clothing you like the most. Explain in details why you like wearing it.
Task 2: Some teachers like to give class assignments in person, others like to give assignments by email. Which do you think is better? Why?
Task 3-6 TPO 17

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqh6KS0
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10.19全套
Task 1: Your friend has been offered a job that's far away from his hometown. Do you think he should take it or not? Give specific reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2: Do you agree or disagree that teachers should encourage students to have class discussions during class? Give specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 3-6 TPO 18

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntA2Kv3
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10.18 全套
Task 1: If the school received a large amount of money, what do you wish it will be spent on? A sports gym, a laboratory or a scientific research facility?
Task 2: Some people believe that it is important for young people to have a part-time job as a working experience, while others think they should spend more time on their studies. What is your opinion and why?
Task 3-6 TPO 19

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQDyQv4

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10.17 全套
Task 1: Talk about the one thing government can do to improve the educational system in your country. Give details and examples in your answer.
Task 2 : Some people prefer to own cars, others prefer to mainly use public transportation. Which do you agree with? Explain why.
Task 3-6 TPO 20

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1m2CAM

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10.16 全套
Task 1: Talk about a positive experience you recently had working with another person. Explain why this experience was important to you.
Task 2 : Some people prefer to plan what to do in their free time ahead of time, others prefer to not having such plans. Which do you prefer? Explain why.
Task 3-6 TPO 21

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgwX8e8
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10.15 全套

Task 1: Which of following study methods do you think is the most effective? Having discussions, repeating class materials or taking a lot of notes. Give specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 : Some people prefer to sit in the front of a classroom during a lecture, others prefer to sit in the back during a lecture. Which do to think is better? Explain your response in details and examples
Task 3-6 TPO 22

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqlAwU4
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10.8 T1&T2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqzhwv6
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10.5 T1&T2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQIOrg2
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9.1
Task 1 Describe a job or career that you admire but do not want to take. Include specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Some people think that students should study during weekends, but others think that they should relax and to socialize during weekends. What is your opinion on this issue?

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjJMUcP
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8.31
Task 1 Describe the steps, through which you once learned a new subject and explain how you learned it.  Please include details and examples in your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to read or watch news every day, others prefer to read or watch news regularly, which do you prefer?

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ8v8BT
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8.28

Task 1 In your opinion, why is it hard for university students to manage their time effectively?
Task 2 Some people think students in the future will have classes on the Internet, but others think students will still have classes in buildings. What is your opinion on this issue?

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQovewi
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8.27

Task 1 Describe the most unforgettable success in your life. Explain why this success is unforgettable to you.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is never too late for an old person to  receive higher education and get a university degree.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1vUKNG
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8.26
Task 1 Many people have pets, like cats and dogs. Do you think that raising pets is good, why? Please include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Some students prefer to choose a career before getting into college. Other students prefer to choose a career after taking some university courses. Which one do you prefer and why?  Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6LoLaM
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8.22

Task 1 What advice would you give to a friend who just got a job. Explain what the suggestion is and its importance. Please include specific details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: children should have their own cellphones. Give specific reasons and details to support your response.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDcRGSL

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8.19

Task 1 What time of a year do you like most? Please give specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Having a relaxed or unhurried lifestyle is the most important for a person.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gd3RZ2r

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8.17

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJ6t2Uf
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8.14
Task 1 Where is your favorite place to exercise outdoors?Give specific details in your answer.
task 2  Some people like to take a break or get a job during summer vacation. Others think it's better to take classes. Which do you prefer and why?

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sj0PAwt

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8.11
Task 1 In order to save time and effort, human beings are using robots to do a lot of tasks. What is your opinion on this issue?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Bosses should require their employees to wear formal clothes instead of casual clothes.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1VJNw
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8.10
Task 1 Which characteristic do your friends like in you the most: cheerfulness, kindness or intelligence? Explain with reasons and details.
Task 2 Which kind of class would you choose just for fun: an art class or a science class?
Task 3-6 tpo 21

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6NWmSy
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8.9
Task 1 What type of movie do you think is not enjoyable to watch: action, romance or or science fiction? Give details and reasons in your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should do a part part-time job before attending college.
Task 3-6 TPO 22

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDvOqBn
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8.8

Task 1 Describe the most important development of your country in the past 20 years. Explain why this development is so important.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? Students nowadays are working harder in their studies than those the past.
Task 3-6 TPO 23

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c08H58s
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8.7 Task1&2
Task 1 Among the following types of books – mystery, science fiction and biography, which type do you like the least and why?
Task 2 Do you like to travel alone or with your family members? Explain with specific reasons and details.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dDw4jDn
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8.6 Task1&2
Task 1 What suggestions will you give to your foreign if he or she comes to your for studies?
Task 2 Do you prefer to be friends with the people who share the same opinion as you do or the people who hold different opinions?

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJAwQ7p

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6.8
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bny8SGn
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6.5
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o68vPoQ
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6.4
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjjTdxF
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6.3

换成网盘啦亲们~
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqKJklY

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6.2

Task1:

Task2:

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6.1

Task1:

Task2:

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5.31
Task1:

Task2:

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5.30
Task1:

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Task2:

作者: 若雨挂念太多 时间: 2014-6-2 08:58:10

5.31
哈哈，沙发~首先，楼主要控制时间呢，前两题应该是45‘啦
task1 思路跟语音都很好了啦，但是语音方面还有可以改善的地方，可以带点感情，夸张一点
task2 嗯嗯，很流利，and出现的次数稍微有点多，可以适当换两个词，例如，moreover。还有，所有事情change了之后没有说清楚到底是朝好的方面，还是朝不好的方面变呢，说清楚一点比较好。
PS：虽然楼主已经是老人了，嘿嘿，但是还是建议用手机录下来放到网盘里，这样可以断点听呢，最后，一起加油罗~:loveliness:

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-6-2 09:07:04

若雨挂念太多发表于 2014-6-2 08:58
5.31
哈哈，沙发~首先，楼主要控制时间呢，前两题应该是45‘啦
task1 思路跟语音都很好了啦，但是语音方面 ...

好的~ 我一直以为是60s，建议很有用哈~ 我多试试~ 这个老人叫得我有点瘆的慌哈哈~

作者: rainbow0206 时间: 2014-6-3 08:37:04

hi你好，5.30:

t1:
there 前是不是加了 in
内容很好，语速稍微慢了一点，整体不错
t1,2都是45s，lz现在应该知道了

t2:
纯说理了，建议用例子来说

lz整体很好，加油~

作者: SYSU-Mindy 时间: 2014-6-4 00:24:49

我来批改6.1的哈：

task1
1 楼主语音语调挺好的，感觉表达的也很自如。但是要控制时间啊！:lol
2 what's will be the end?这是虾米表达，那个is 多余的吧
3 I saw , guessed, 是不是应该用过去式，后面同理
4 楼主的内容很好，论证蛮生动。不过伤到了爱言情的女同胞比如我，哈哈哈

task2
1 I definitely agree就好啦，为啥还要个will呢
2 感觉楼主很喜欢罗列啊，就像task1一样，我的建议还是挑一点详细说。

PS：推荐楼主用百度网盘吧，你可以上传到网盘留个链接载着，批改的人下载了听比较方面。这个自带的录音没办法调整时间，也没办法设置循环播放。

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-6-4 07:57:45

SYSU-Mindy 发表于 2014-6-4 00:24
我来批改6.1的哈：

task1

谢谢点评啦~ 今天我就改成百度网盘~你的我也已经评价啦~

作者: つ戲ツ 时间: 2014-6-5 22:57:49

我来评 6.2号哈
LZ有讲细节的东西，不错，但要注意把握时间，好像都有点超了哈，我的做法就是先讲理由，然后重点将细节，其他地方能省的都省了，时间是能控制下来，但也不知道对不对哈。。
T1
1... is definitely the most subject ...这里的the 听起来有点像“is”
2....so many computer programming homework to do ... ,homework是不可数的，所以这里应该是so much 哈
T2:
1...learn a lot of thing,thing 在这里应该是可数的吧
2..when i was graduated,... 我觉得这里用 when i graduated 比较好，表示一个瞬时的动作
3.你后面举例子的时候好像用的是现代时，我觉得最好用过去式哈
4.and i have talk to a lot of people,这里应该是完成时态吧。。

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-6-5 23:06:34

つ戲ツ发表于 2014-6-5 22:57
我来评 6.2号哈
LZ有讲细节的东西，不错，但要注意把握时间，好像都有点超了哈，我的做法就是先讲理由，然 ...

好的~ 很多细节我没注意谢谢了哈~

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-6-5 23:07:01

つ戲ツ发表于 2014-6-5 22:57
我来评 6.2号哈
LZ有讲细节的东西，不错，但要注意把握时间，好像都有点超了哈，我的做法就是先讲理由，然 ...

而且时态确实没把握好

作者: carborn 时间: 2014-6-6 15:02:02

t1. 首先感觉没有论证好，我听着好像你一直在说the house 没讲你为什么会选择就顺带了一句interesting
然后就是发音的问题，感觉发音的时候嘴巴没有张大那种感觉建议多模范练习一下
t2. 感觉论证得都不错，发音还是老问题

作者: lightlala 时间: 2014-6-9 22:22:15

6.5
挺好的
T1 能把挺复杂的过程解释清楚
T2 理由也说清楚了
语速也正好

作者: Bella-L 时间: 2014-6-10 21:05:52

6.8
task1
楼主例子都挺好的点赞~
就是。。。。楼主啊。。。。。。说得太慢了。。。。。。听得有点想哭。。。。我要急的跳脚了都。。。

task2
我觉得楼主用自己的话再复述一下题目会比较好
再者就是若是说两个理由的话，感觉不是很充分。建议说一个理由再加一个身边的例子，如果时间还有多再继续说第二个理由
最后楼主一定要加快速度诶~

作者: akaka111 时间: 2014-6-13 21:51:55

hello，byj, 我是跟你6-11互评的小伙伴，你的作业上传后告诉我哦，最近真的非常有可能上网不方便，但是我上网了就会给你评的，希望你快快上传呀！~

我的6-11作业在这里：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1690799-1-1.html

作者: Avaliet 时间: 2014-8-12 18:17:19

810
t1
内容很好，有详细的例子，阐述的也很清楚，语速很淡定。。。个人觉得可能稍稍快一点会更好
t2
内容上清楚，也有details，没什么问题。但这道题我跟楼主的回答角度不太一样，我会再看看其他同学怎么说

语速稍快一些的话连贯性会更好哒，加油~

作者: 墨幽浅 时间: 2014-8-12 20:36:21

大哥，快交出你8月11日的口语作业

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-8-13 20:45:47

墨幽浅发表于 2014-8-12 20:36
大哥，快交出你8月11日的口语作业

嗯嗯好的～一会10点上传然后把你的听了哈～昨天有点忙

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-8-14 07:46:56

本帖最后由 byj1991 于 2014-8-14 07:59 编辑

墨幽浅发表于 2014-8-12 20:36
大哥，快交出你8月11日的口语作业

亲～作业已经上传了～你的我也评了不好意思啊～我这两天去入职本来昨晚就想传上去结果趴桌子睡着了。。

作者: 墨幽浅 时间: 2014-8-14 09:20:51

8.11
task 1:第一个语速慢了，而且单词发音比较奇怪，导致说的内容很少；举得例子是富士康和苹果是很不错的。
task 2:第二个比第一个发挥的好多了。各种语音语调也都有了；你真是百度的软件工程师？肃然起敬啊

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-8-14 20:09:00

墨幽浅发表于 2014-8-14 09:20
8.11
task 1:第一个语速慢了，而且单词发音比较奇怪，导致说的内容很少；举得例子是富士康和苹果是很不错 ...

恩恩是啊昨天就忙着入职了～

作者: 大圣爱吃甲鱼 时间: 2014-8-15 23:18:52

8-14
task1:感觉语速稍微有点慢？语调挺标准的，就是感觉中间有个mountain 's name is xxx有些不自然。
task2:听了这个觉得楼主要是念文章的话发音肯定很好，就是一到想不起来的时候容易慌然后语调啊发音啊就变了，内容不错

作者: 橙子cassie 时间: 2014-8-22 10:57:25

8.19 总体来讲LZ的语音语调还有连读都不错啊，可能现在把重点多放在重音上面更好些
T1第一句，as far as I'm concerned,读的就不是很地道啦，应该是上面提过的重音问题。举例子后应用过去是，LZ好像没用。came、sat、talked
T2 disagree后面读得太快了，好像不是连读的效果，感觉仓促。（个人感觉，只请LZ关注下，如果我说的不对，就请见谅啦）这个的语调好棒啊，听起来很舒服。不过在内容结构方面好像需要再调整，听起来有点空，举的例子也不算是真正的例子。我理解起来，这道题本身是问的you agree or disagree,因此直接从自身出发可能比较好。
PS：LZ用的什么设备录音啊，质量好好。

作者: bemalto 时间: 2014-8-23 07:19:46

8.22

楼主我觉得你说的挺好的语音语调内容结构都不错
一些语法小细节稍稍注意一下就行

T1
刚刚开始 advice is 后面要用动词ing形式
how much money you can got from this job
再来些具体的例子支持你的argument就好啦

T2
the children is so young
He always plays the games and do not want to listen the courses
最后better, bad用的有点多可以尝试其他词语比如fancy, harmful

加油O(∩_∩)O！

作者: bemalto 时间: 2014-8-24 14:07:02

8.22的小伙伴你别忘了给我改作业呦~~
链接在这https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1760340-1-2.html

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-8-25 07:39:49

bemalto 发表于 2014-8-24 14:07
8.22的小伙伴你别忘了给我改作业呦~~
链接在这https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1760340-1-2.html

好的亲～我苦逼工作党时间不太规律现在给你改了～

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-8-25 07:59:19

橙子cassie 发表于 2014-8-22 10:57
8.19 总体来讲LZ的语音语调还有连读都不错啊，可能现在把重点多放在重音上面更好些
T1第一句，as far as I ...

谢谢亲这么详细的点评啦～ as far as I'm concerned我确实不知道重音放哪里～语法脑残党我会好好注意的。
Task2 的内容也比较空泛，当时没有好好想一些例子～你说的从自身出发是指举例子还是说考虑这个问题的角度？
P.S. 用的Imac自带的阵列式麦克风录的，现在这些设备都有阵列式麦克风吧一般～然后用的Adobe Audition这个软件保存出来是无损的可能跟这个有关系

作者: iotapril 时间: 2014-8-28 21:49:39

827
整体语音挺好的就是语调起伏不是很大
T1 时间稍微长了一点而且后面几s没太听清
After i had……to berkeley 省略号部分没太听清是been to吗？ my will of the world不太明白意思
their thinking changed my thinking这个句子感觉可以Polish up一下
many of my classmates having their……这个地方也有点不太清楚
其他都挺好的
T2
很流畅例子也举得挺好
个人建议主题句可以再扩充一下除了study is an endless thing以外还可以具体联系elder person的特点说一下为什么感觉这样更有力~

作者: 克里奥的守门人 时间: 2014-9-1 00:21:15

大哥作业呢？0831的。。。。

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-9-1 07:59:21

克里奥的守门人发表于 2014-9-1 00:21
大哥作业呢？0831的。。。。

已经更新啦～谢啦～你的我今晚下班就评好～

作者: 克里奥的守门人 时间: 2014-9-1 11:28:07

0831作业

T1：我的思路和你不同，所以我觉得用学GRE这种事情可以吗？毕竟是subject啊。。。

T2：停顿太多，声音大小不同。没啥问题。

作者: lxixi0815 时间: 2014-9-2 22:37:03

0901
T1
我觉着小伙伴的节奏有点慢~
后面感觉有点重复吧可以找点内容来说~
比如说你做过一起翻译工作然后忘词了就很尴尬之类的什么什么
T2
觉得LZ的内容有点少吧~不知道怎么的感觉后面都空出来了
concentrate美 [ˈkɑ:nsntreɪt]

作者: CharlesZhuoChen 时间: 2014-9-6 20:49:23

Hi，我是9.4互评的同学，楼主上传作业后回复我一下吧～

作者: 东方欲晓bnu 时间: 2014-10-11 12:16:18

T1
发音可以尝试的再饱满些，录音环境好一些就更好了。
内容很丰富，可以尝试抓住其中一点，深入的说。
T2
representation
发音清楚，内容也不错。
改晚了，不好意思，加油！

作者: 依诺 时间: 2014-10-18 22:20:34

楼主，10.16我们三个互评的我要评的哪位没有上传链接，要不我们互评一下吧，你看怎样~？

作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-10-18 22:51:57

依诺发表于 2014-10-18 22:20
楼主，10.16我们三个互评的我要评的哪位没有上传链接，要不我们互评一下吧，你看怎样~？

好的

作者: Sunset_z 时间: 2014-10-22 07:32:41

10.17
不好意思来晚了=。=
task 1 我觉得你偏题了。。如果你是想说，政府不那么关注学生的分数是一件有益的事，那至少你要说一句这对于教育是有益的，点下题。不然有偏题之嫌。
task 2 这个还不错，

语音语调、流畅度都不错、就是注意点下题。
只录了task1、2？

作者: Sunset_z 时间: 2014-10-22 07:47:39

本帖最后由 Sunset_z 于 2014-10-22 07:54 编辑

10.18
两弹连发
task 1 最后超时一点儿。还不错~
task 2 28s but the money wery less--but the money is little.最后一句那个点逻辑有些奇怪哈。but you still can do the part-time job。这句其实没啥用。不如改成because I spent more time on studies and learned a lot.
task 3 阅读部分用的时间太长了，重点是在后面的听力部分的。不过后面说的非常简洁，基本的点都说到了。希望能阅读部分节省些时间，听力部分说的更详细~
task 4 bigger gril-older girl，中间稍微有些不连贯，后面稍微有些超时
task 5 前面要更简洁一些，后面说自己的建议时的时间太短了·
task 6 点说的很全。最后超时5秒，不过最后一句可以不说

没什么大问题~

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作者: byj1991 时间: 2014-10-22 19:53:30

Sunset_z 发表于 2014-10-22 07:47
10.18
两弹连发
task 1 最后超时一点儿。还不错~

谢谢~ 好的~ 10.17的忘了上传剩下的了。我现在就改你的~

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