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发表于 2006-2-1 18:02:23 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Issue178:
It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people’s behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people’s hearts and minds.

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1 Agree with the author. To control or place limits on people's behavior is possible, but human nature is determined by many factors, human's hearts and minds won't be changed by one piece of law.
2 It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people’s behavior, this is right. Examples..
3 But legislation cannot reform human nature, because human nature is determined by many factors.
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4 laws cannot change what is in people’s hearts and minds
Is right… examples….

We create laws, pass them, act them, all of these are for the benefits of human beings. Laws, defined as rules to limit people's behavior, to keep the society safe and wealthy, are certainly able to control us, but can laws and regulations reform or change human nature?  I agree with the author, after all, human nature is determined by many complicated factors.

First of all, being in a civilized society, laws play a virtue role in our daily life: We can not set fire at our neighbors’ houses; we can not kill the salesman just because he didn't server me last night; we can not damage the lamp beside the road. Those behaviors are partly because of our common sense, but laws are the primary reason, undoubtedly, since we are afraid of been punished by the government, we obey them.  As the matter of fact, laws and regulations limit most of the unacceptable things, which means, laws are fundamentally important, and there's no doubt that people’s behavior is controlled by them.

Admittly, laws changed our behaviors, but did them also change our nature? Apparently, human nature, no matter what color, what race, what age you are, is the same. We are curious, we are greedy, ECT. But if we consider it more detailed, different people has different nature, this kind of nature means your personality, the real one inside of you. It won't be changed just for one piece of law. For instance, if your father is a thief, he taught you how to steal since you were a little boy, after you grow up, will you care a new law that forbid people from the taxi? Meanwhile, as we know, China has forbidden to set up fireworks in cities in the purpose of protecting environment till this year, for a well-educated conservation scientist, will he do that?  That is to say, laws cannot reform human's nature. It is determined by many factors, such as, inherit, the background of family, society, education, ECT. Our nature is stable, and unchangeable.

Beside, as the author asserts, what is in people’s hearts and minds, for instance their beliefs, faith and love, won't be changed by laws. It is obvious; to change people's minds is not the purpose of laws. We create laws just to make the world more effective, and provide ourselves a better life, avoid the chances of crime resulted from the negative facet of human nature. Anyway, our nature and minds are so complex and uneasy to change. In my view, if we are willing to change people's bad habits or anti-society thoughts, the best way is not to formula more laws, but to increase the moral lever by education.

In general, laws are really effective in controlling people's behavior, but they are of little usage in changing people's nature and mind, which will be effected by the environment and personal experience.


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发表于 2006-2-1 21:22:38 |只看该作者
We create laws, pass them, act them, all of these are for the benefits of human beings. Laws, defined as rules to limit people's behavior, to keep the society safe and wealthy, are certainly able to control us, but can laws and regulations reform or change human nature?  I agree with the author, after all, human nature is determined by many complicated factors.

First of all, being in a civilized society, laws play a virtue role in our daily life: We can not set fire at our neighbors’ houses; we can not kill the salesman just because he didn't server me last night; we can not damage the lamp beside the road. Those behaviors are partly because of our common sense, but laws are the primary reason, undoubtedly, since we are afraid of been(being) punished by the government(政府不是惩罚的实施者,应该是被法律惩罚制裁), we obey them.  As the matter of fact, laws and regulations limit most of the unacceptable things, which means, laws are fundamentally important, and there's no doubt that people’s behavior is controlled by them.

Admittly(Admittedly), laws changed our behaviors, but did them also change our nature? (感觉这里不必再提问了,直接提出自己的观点更简洁明了些)Apparently, human nature, no matter what color, what race, what age you are, is the same. We are curious, we are greedy, ECT. (etc.)But if we consider it more detailed, different people has(have) different nature, this kind of nature means your personality, the real one inside of you. It won't be changed just for one piece of law. For instance, if your father is a thief, he taught you how to steal since you were a little boy, after you grow up, will you care a new law that forbid people from the taxi( taxi和steal??不明白这个例子呀)? Meanwhile, as we know, China has forbidden to set up fireworks in cities in the purpose of protecting environment till this year, for a well-educated conservation scientist, will he do that?  That is to say, laws cannot reform human's nature. It is determined by many factors, such as, inherit, the background of family, society, education, ECT. Our nature is stable, and unchangeable(Therefore, human nature, which embodies multifold factors, cannot be changed easily just by laws .).
Beside(Besides), as the author asserts, what is in people’s hearts and minds, for instance their beliefs, faith and love, won't be changed by laws. It is obvious; to change people's minds is not the purpose of laws. We create laws just to make the world more effective, and provide ourselves a better life, avoid the chances of crime resulted from the negative facet of human nature.(这句话还是删了好,着重从人性的复杂来说明人性不易被法律所改变) Anyway, our nature and minds are so complex and uneasy to change. In my view(In my opinion), if we are willing to change people's bad habits or anti-society thoughts, the best way is not to formula(legislate) more laws, but to increase the moral lever by education.

In general, laws are really effective in controlling people's behavior, but they are of little usage(use) in changing people's nature and mind, which will be effected by the environment and personal experience.

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We create laws, pass them, act them, all of these are for the benefits of human beings. Laws, defined as rules to limit people's behavior, to keep the society safe and wealthy(by penalty?是不是应该提一下法律的威慑性, 不然下文的certainly就不对了), are certainly able to control us, but can laws and regulations reform or change human nature?  I agree with the author, after all, human nature is determined by many complicated factors.(观点鲜明)

First of all, being in a civilized society, laws play a virtue role in our daily life: We can not set fire at our neighbors’ houses; we can not kill the salesman just because he didn't server me last night; we can not damage the lamp beside the road. Those behaviors are partly because of our common sense, but laws are the primary reason, undoubtedly, since we are afraid of been punished by the government, we obey them. As the matter of fact, laws and regulations limit most of the unacceptable things, which means, laws are fundamentally important, and there's no doubt that people’s behavior is controlled by them. (这段看了你的提纲才明白,不过我觉得法律好多不是common sense,这样写有点窄)

Admittly(admittedly), laws changed our behaviors, but did them also change our nature? (为什么用过去时?)Apparently, human nature, no matter what color, what race, what age you are, is the same. We are curious, we are greedy, ECT. But if we consider it more detailed, different people has different nature, this kind of nature means your personality, the real one inside of you. It won't be changed just for one piece of law. For instance, if your father is a thief, he taught you how to steal since you were a little boy, after you grow up, will you care a new law that forbid people from the taxi(没看懂)? Meanwhile, as we know, China has forbidden to set up fireworks in cities in the purpose of protecting environment till this year, for a well-educated conservation scientist, will he do that? (放烟花与nature有关?再解释一下吧) That is to say, laws cannot reform human's nature. It is determined by many factors, such as, inherit, the background of family, society, education, ECT. Our nature is stable, and unchangeable(楼上改的好).

Beside(besides above?), as the author asserts, what is in people’s hearts and minds, for instance their beliefs, faith and love, won't be changed by laws. It is obvious(obviously), to change people's minds is not the purpose of laws. We create laws just to make the world more effective, and provide ourselves a better life, avoid the chances of crime resulted from the negative facet of human nature. Anyway, our nature and minds are so complex and uneasy to change.举例说明一下 In my view, if we are willing to change people's bad habits or anti-society thoughts, the best way is not to formula more laws, but to increase the moral lever by education.

In general, laws are really effective in controlling people's behavior, but they are of little usage(很少使用?little use) in changing people's nature and mind, which will be effected by the environment and personal experience.

层次挺清楚的,观点很明确。我理解力比较差,几个例子不是很明白,详细说一下可能会好些。我这是第一次砸砖头,说不定砸的不是地方,呵呵。。。

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汗。我的电脑出问题了。。哇呀呀我来晚了呀。。先踩个脚印。一会回来

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抱歉。我的电脑出问题了。到现在。变色也没有打的开

Issue178:
It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people’s behavior, but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in people’s hearts and minds.

Outline
1 Agree with the author. To control or place limits on people's behavior is possible, but human nature is determined by many factors, human's hearts and minds won't be changed by one piece of law.
2 It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people’s behavior, this is right. Examples..
3 But legislation cannot reform human nature, because human nature is determined by many factors.
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4 laws cannot change what is in people’s hearts and minds
Is right… examples….

We create laws, pass them, act them, all of these are for the benefits of human beings. [漂亮]Laws, defined as rules to limit people's behavior, to keep the society safe and wealthy, are certainly able to control us[这个词太宽了吧], but can laws and regulations reform or change human nature?  I agree with the author, after all, human nature is determined by many complicated factors.[观点很明确]

First of all, being in a civilized society, laws play a virtue role in our daily life: We can not set fire at our neighbors’ houses; we can not kill the salesman just because he didn't server me last night; we can not damage the lamp beside the road. [排比我喜欢]Those behaviors are partly because of our common sense, but laws are the primary reason, undoubtedly, since we are afraid of been punished by the government, we obey them.  As the matter of fact, laws and regulations limit most of the unacceptable things, which means, laws are fundamentally important, and there's no doubt that people’s behavior is controlled by them.[这段说法律的作用更多的是从人的角度写了,是否可以从客观角度说点呢]

Admittly,[拼写] laws changed our behaviors, but did them also change our nature? Apparently, human nature, no matter what color, what race, what age you are, is the same. We are curious, we are greedy, ECT. But if we consider it more detailed, different people has different nature, this kind of nature means your personality, the real one inside of you. It won't be changed just for one piece of law. For instance, if your father is a thief, he taught you how to steal since you were a little boy, after you grow up, will you care a new law that forbid people from the taxi?[这个有点绝对了吧] Meanwhile, as we know, China has forbidden to set up fireworks in cities in the purpose of protecting environment till this year, for a well-educated conservation scientist, will he do that? [这个例子貌似没有很好的为你的观点服务,或者说没有说到位] That is to say, laws cannot reform human's nature. It is determined by many factors, such as, inherit, the background of family, society, education, ECT. Our nature is stable, and unchangeable.

Beside, as the author asserts, what is in people’s hearts and minds, for instance their beliefs, faith and love, won't be changed by laws. It is obvious; to change people's minds is not the purpose of laws. We create laws just to make the world more effective, and provide ourselves a better life, avoid the chances of crime resulted from the negative facet of human nature. Anyway, our nature and minds are so complex and uneasy to change.[单一个复杂,不足以为你的观点服务吧。要展开 In my view, if we are willing to change people's bad habits or anti-society thoughts, the best way is not to formula more laws, but to increase the moral lever by education.[关键的地方没有展开  ]

In general, laws are really effective in controlling people's behavior, but they are of little usage in changing people's nature and mind, which will be effected by the environment and personal experience.

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原帖由 qingwan 于 2006-2-1 21:47 发表
请教一下怎么标成红色的呢?

不是有颜色的下拉菜单吗
你的链接怎么打不开啊

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