Issue16:Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals."
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1. standpoint: I would like to opposite to the statement above
2.Hardly can luxuries and conveniences prevent people from being truly strong and independent, on the contrary, too often, they contribute to build positive and necessary characters by enhancing efficiency and satisfying social expectations.
3.Luxuries and convenience is irrelevant with strength and independence.
4.What is the definition of being strong and independent? There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eye, so is the character.
5.What we should do is make full use of the luxuries and convenience in the modern and accelerating-developing society, and finally improve our own.
The speaker asserts that in the contemporary society, luxuries and convenience considered helpful to individuals, negatively affect the development of strength and independence in characters. After pondering it upon many occasions, I would like to oppose to the statement above for obvious reasons.
Hardly can luxuries and conveniences prevent people from being truly strong and independent, on the contrary, too often, they contribute to build positive and necessary characters by enhancing efficiency and satisfying social expectations. Consider shopping online, for example. Nowadays, many people shop online rather than visit the shopping mall because it is comparatively convenient and interesting to individuals, especially the youth. Shopping-online serves customers a wide variety of products while saving time and enhancing purchase and work efficiency enormously and powerfully. Without spending plenty of time on market shopping, much of which is unnecessary and meaningless, people are expected to be efficient and devote themselves into work and ability practice. Gradually, they become strong and independent.
Luxuries and convenience is irrelevant with strength and independence. This can be illustrated by considering people who suffers from poverty and starvation, and are not able to make use of facility and convenience. A century ago, convenience and facilities were considerably less than that of today, people seemed to boast much leisure time for the sake of being more easily satisfied with social expectation. However, being isolate from luxuries and convenience, they still fail to built the character of strength and independence. In all, significant is to consider the relevance between pleasure and character built dialectically.
What is the definition of being strong and independent? There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eye, so is the character. Take automobiles for example, which is considered the symbol of contemporary society convenience. Quite a few probably argue that it is unnecessary to take the automobiles when in a picnic or climbing to the epoch of mountain. Travel and climbing on foot shows great power and independence. However, others would like to take the opposite view and consider it a waste of time and strength.
Granted, in some cases, individuals actually lose the target of life and the characters of strength and independence because of luxuries and convenience. Fortunately, we can control it. What we should do is make full use of the luxuries and convenience in the modern and accelerating-developing society, and finally improve our own.
The speaker asserts that in the contemporary society, luxuries and convenience considered helpful to individuals, negatively affect the development of strength and independence in characters. After pondering it upon many occasions, I would like to oppose to the statement abovfor obvious reasons. (对于这个句子,楼主是不是在哪见过这样的例句,还是自己写出来的句子,总感觉句法不对。建议多参照例句,一般自创的复杂句都是先天不足)
Hardly can luxuries and conveniences prevent people from being truly strong and independent, on the contrary, too often, they contribute to build positive and necessary characters by enhancing efficiency and satisfying social expectations(有这种搭配吗 一般说live up to 或者meet expectation ). Consider shopping online, for example. Nowadays, many people shop online rather than visiting the shopping mall because it is comparatively convenient and interesting to individuals, especially the youth. Shopping-online serves customers a wide variety of products while(at the same time) saving time and enhancing purchase and work efficiency enormously and powerfully. Without spending plenty of time on market shopping, much of which (指代不明啊按就近原则,这个which应该指market吧)is unnecessary and meaningless, people are expected to be efficient and devote themselves into work and ability practice. Gradually, they become strong and independent.
Luxuries and convenience is irrelevant with strength and independence. This can be illustrated by considering people who suffers from poverty and starvation, and are not able to make use of facility and convenience. A century ago, convenience and facilities were considerably less than that of today, people seemed to boast much leisure time for the sake of being more easily satisfied with social expectation. (主干是什么 那个是主谓宾 是不是应该在 a century ago 后面加 during which time)However, being isolate from luxuries and convenience, they still fail to built(build) the character of strength and independence. In all(in all 是as a total 总共 总计的意思 ;”总的来说” 应该是 all in all), what is significant is to consider the relevance between pleasure and character built dialectically.
What is the definition of being strong and independent? There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people’s eye, so is the character. Take automobiles for example, which is considered to be the symbol of contemporary society convenience. Quite a few probably argue that it is unnecessary to take the automobiles when in a picnic or climbing to the epoch(?) of the mountain. Travel and climbing on foot shows great power and independence. However, others would like to take the opposite view and consider it a waste of time and strength.
Granted(啥意思啊,我不明白唉 ), in some cases, individuals actually lose the target of life and the characters of strength and independence because of luxuries and convenience. Fortunately, we can control it. What we should do is to make full use of the luxuries and convenience in the modern and accelerating-developing society, and finally improve our own.