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Frankly speaking,I don't quite agree with the author.The evidence provided seems not cogent enough to make me believe.
Anyway,i really  envy the author for his ability to express his view clearly and acurately.SO let's get down to business then:)

Pay more attention to your diction and vocabulary used.It will bring  you to a brand new level.To be specific,some words you used are not expressive enough as you may think.try to think about the difference between those synonyms,they can be of great difference.Use an english-english dictionary may help you better understand  and use the words.