issue144 老题高频ＪＪ_艺术类_艺术家和评论家谁重要_偶最怕写艺术了，这个还好点

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The speaker asserts that it is the artist, not the critic, who gives society something of lasting value. However, I do not support this claim. The artist is important as well as the critic.(eclectic point) They both play a irreplaceable(不错 学习ing) part in the process of creating and evaluating the essence of the art, which is considering the something within the lasting value.(how to understand wat does the "which" substitude??)


从lasting value 说明二者同样重要！！
First of all, what is the lasting value?(teminology) From my point of view, the lasting value of art is the pursuit of the beauty, the display of the beauty and the discovery of the beauty.平行句厉害哦 Undoubtedly, the display of the beauty is important, as it creates a lot of excellent artworks. Meanwhile, the discovery of the beauty is also significant, without that, we cannot taste the essence of the immortal artworks. The great France sculptor Rodin said that：" The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out." Truly it is. And that is reason why Van Gogh's outstanding works had little recognition when he was living. Hardly any admired his excellent works until some critics discover the lasting value within his paintings. Therefore, both the aesthetic values, which created by artists and the perspectives of discoverer, that showed by critics are in the same positions in the lasting values.



Admittedly, the artists create the aesthetic value within the artworks themselves. From The Renaissance up to now, there are numerous excellent even immortal masterpieces showing to us, which are all showing the indescribable and forever beauty.（定语从句的逗号用法） Eternal and mysterious smile of Da Vinci's Mona Lisa, exquisite and scared The Creation from Michelangelo, vivid and realistic Night Watch by Rembrandt, dramatic and colorful Liberty Leading the People by Delacroix, changing light and color of Impression, Sunrise from Monet, lifelike and museful The Thinker sculpted by Rodin, raging and abstract Guernica by Picassco. And all those immortal masterpieces let us feel easy and comfortable, make us enjoy the essence of arts, which are all owing to the beauty and the aesthetic value within them.

At the same time, the critics provide the public with a special perspective to taste the beauty. Without the particular perspectives from critics, definitely, we may miss a lot of greatest artists and their immortal works. There is no better illustration than Vinect Van Gogh. This gifted impressionistic artist sold only one painting before he suicided at merely 37 years old. Few people recognized his paintings, and he did not received the respect on his living（during his life）However, when the critics noticed his artworks and the public took attention on those excellent paintings, the lasting value inside all his works were showed to us. And one of his paintings--Portrait of Doctor Gachet has auctioned for the highest price--82.5 million U.S. dollars up to now. From this, we can see how important role the critics are playing to the artists and their artworks.

Therefore, to a certain degree, artists are significant as well as critics. The former create the beauty, and the latter discover the beauty, which are two important and irreplaceable factors within the lasting value of the art, besides the two are twisting each other and becoming a whole organism that cannot be broken up. As Rodin said" The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out ", undeniably, the world need outstanding artists who can create immortal masterpieces for our human beings. Moreover, we especially call for the critics who can find out the talents and discover the beauty inside their works. Otherwise, the world will lose no less than one hundred Van Gogh.

In brief, both artist and critic are important to the beauty. The artist create the aesthetic value within the artworks, meanwhile, the critic discover and show it to the public in a special perspective way. Thus, the artist and the critic both give（ remarkably contribute to ） the lasting value of art to society.  这段和上段有些重复哦～～

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The world is full of the beauty unless we have a pair eyes to find it out "

这句话对嘛？？
我这么觉得逻辑有问题啊