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发表于 2005-7-31 00:15:29 |显示全部楼层 |倒序浏览

小组终于成立了!

以后大家的链接就发到这里吧!

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发表于 2005-7-31 19:45:06 |显示全部楼层

回复Superkidd的issue87

In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important discoveries.
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Is the beginner more likely than the expert to make important discoveries in any field of discoveries><inquiry? I disagree this assertion according to at least three aspects. First of all, an expert owns more knowledge and abilities, which is of significance to important discoveries, than is多余 a rookie. Secondly, long-term research of the expert will give rise to some marked experiences in the field he or she studies. Consider, for example, an experiment on a plant material about how to raise it more fast and efficient, how to use plant hormone and how to control the living condition for this kind of plant need a long time research.这个例子跑题了,题目是调查咨询领域而非工程领域 Finally, an expert is more likely to have a good改成more effective比较好 communication and connection with his or her companies doing the same research. In another><other words, message transmission is fast. Therefore, I hold the point of view that whoever studies an area deeply is likely to get><make || some改成more,因为你的论点是觉得老手更… tremendous and creative discoveries.

As we know, different from intelligent quotient (IQ), knowledge and abilities about a special field are not born with. On the contrary, they need a lot of time and energy to be accumulated. What lends the credence to me is the truth that a high intellectual elementary school student or even a pupil can not be called a expert no matter how much more he or she knows than his peers. This is due to the common sense that knowledge, which are necessary to your success, are not a talent but accumulation.

Secondly, how much experience you gain in the field you are studying is another important criterion to measure your percent of chance to success. Put it to the most general, a political candidate needs to know how to advocate his audience in a speech, a scientist needs to know how to control the proportions of different experimental conditions. Moreover, an experienced player understands how to use the weakness of his competitor, and a experienced business man can make money in different commercial environment, even suffered great economical agony. Thus, experience is useful in every area people engaging in.

Finally, with the increasingly advance of communication and connection between people even in long distance, message transmission is another condition you will depend on. Consider, for example, the electronic mails and telephone can inform you the latest advances in nowadays world in your field. At this condition, having a great number of compa0nies who can help you with your research is especially important. An expert can build up his or her message net through different meeting, dating, negotiations, etc. And a long time working on the same field and the fame as an expert will give you these chances.

Admittedly, rookie, a newer in an area, has some advantages which cannot be substituted. On one hand, rookie's passion will trigger a person's potential power inside him. On the other hand, a rookie can avoid lots of interrupts comes from your past outstanding work, just like a expert. For example, you have no endless invitations meetings, dating or even advertisings at all. These time can be used for your own business and it will lead to you success.

In conclusion, although some advantages exist among learners such as the passion and lots of time, experts will be more likely to be successor to find some important discoveries due to the abilities, knowledge, experience and the message net built up by themselves.

例子几乎都离题了.
刚开始写都容易这样. (我也是的… :p)
下次先好好审题吧.

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发表于 2005-7-31 20:00:28 |显示全部楼层

声明一下在这里发帖的规矩~

队友们请不要把原文贴在这里,
因为这样回复会比较混乱难找.

请把作业贴到大坛子里,链接贴在这里就好了

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发表于 2005-7-31 20:03:50 |显示全部楼层

我的同主题作业 issue 83

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发表于 2005-7-31 20:23:51 |显示全部楼层

回复Monkeydry的issue103

Where should the current historians focus on the history of human being? Some persons hold the view that the study has value only to the extent that it is relevant to people's daily lives. For me, I partly agree this opinion on this issue because the可以省掉吧? daily lives is important to history research. However, we should also find that the study of history on some other fields is also一句话里用了两个also会不会…? the essential part in the research of this knowledge.

First of all, it is admitted that studying our daily lives plays an important part in the process of history research. The famous Chinese historians Hushi once pointed out: “The history of a country is consisted with the lives of its residents." This logion reveals obviously that the daily lives which seem to be unconsidered in the serious history study actually give the historians numerous vivid pictures and detailed information to study their objects. Take the greatest work in Chinese pictures----Qingmingshanghe picture for example, this artwork which describes the daily lives in early Song Dynasty has been studied by the Sinologist for thousands of years, because through studying the daily lives presented on this work, observing the life condition of the common people,and recording the numbers of people and various tools the researchers can deduce the level of economics><economy, politics, and military power in that era, which are the essential factor in history study. In short, the daily lives of common inhabitants in the history leave the current people an enormous database to study their lives.

However, though in the study of history it is important to emphasize the daily lives, the importance of the fields which seem to be not much relevant to the daily lives should not be ignored. In the tradition of history study, studying the politics is also an important method to recover the veil of history. The activities of politics is the most top and mysterious activities in a country. Through studying the aim or reason of a police decision, such as why Hitler chose to attack Russia instead of continuing to ally with that country, which can only be solved in the politics studying, many of the relevant history events brought by the police will also be resolved resolve events吗?有点怪. With the deeper study on this field progressing, more and more confused><confusing questions in history will be solved in a most rapid way.

What is more, the study on the military history also provides useful value for our current lives. For instance, many Japanese companies invite the professors in history to give lectures on the military><military affairs to their managers. There is an old saying in Chinese culture that the business field is like battlefield. Many principles in military are also available in business activities. The fruit of military history is welcomed among the business circles. This example illustrates that various division in history help people to去掉 meet the society这个搭配有点不适合吧? more reasoningly.

Consequently, upon the critical analysis advocated and examples presented, we can arrive at the conclusion that both the history relevant to our daily lives and the one which is not attached to our lives so significantly, such as politics or military, provide><providing the important guide in this time. In order to avoid our ancients' mistakes and live more safely and cozily, we should regard all of them.

文章脉络清晰
有些表达和语法还需注意

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