8月11日 写argument全文前请好好刷提纲

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今天没有什么新的内容讨论。也不布置新的同主题写作。我只想强调一点，或者很不客气的说，部分同学写的argument还没入门。建议大家写argument之前多刷题库多看我写的提纲。把一个argument的逻辑链梳理清楚，然后通过咬文嚼字把攻击点找到。  

比如 63 The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Parkville Daily newspaper.

Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

（证据1）Throughout the country last year, as more and more children below the age of nine participated in youth-league sports, over 40,000 of these young players suffered injuries.

（证据2）When interviewed for a recent study, youth-league soccer players in several major cities also reported psychological pressure exerted by coaches and parents to win games.

（证据3）Furthermore, education experts say that long practice sessions for these sports take away time that could be used for academic activities.

（结论）Since the disadvantages outweigh any advantages, we in Parkville should discontinue organized athletic competition for children under nine.

结论是youth league sport弊大于利，所以要停止这类针对9岁以下儿童的有组织的比赛

证据1：全国的情况是有超过40000儿童受伤 （你看出什么？）

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证据2：在几个主要城市受访的足球运动员提到心理压力（你看出什么？）

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证据3：专家指出长时间训练会占用学习时间（你看出什么？）

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博客482楼有提纲可以看看


这个帖子的主要目的不是讲这道题，而是想通过这道题请大家思考一下自己在审视argument的逻辑链以及找切入点方面还需要怎样提高。感觉如果这方面做的不好就写全文未免会浪费时间。 建议大家多刷argument题库，自己写提纲再对比我的提纲。写全文应该是在确保切入点正确的前提下进行。