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It's not rare to see weus going to school to learn knowledge, such as math, English, Chinese, the ability that get along with classmateclassmates. So, I largely agree that improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country, but not absolutely.

Admittedly, improving schools is a vital factor; however, the experience is as important as the improving school. 经验和发展学校一样重要？总觉得怪怪的，发展学校 可以和发展经济 或者保护环境相互比较 和经验很怪

Schools are a convenience in our life which provides us with the basic knowledge. The
knowledge from schools allows us to be a pillar in the society这个是不是中式的想法啊fundation of the society . So, if the quality of schools
is improved, the knowledge will be more useful for our students. For example, I receive the formal education from my elementary school, secondary school, and university. With this plenty of knowledge, I find a job in a company, which makes me to sale some product to public, but, I don’t improve the development of my country. With the reform of education, I go back to university to gain advanced degree, then I finally get the master degree which give me chance to run a company of my own, in addition, this company not only become my wealth, but also a measure for my country, because, my company pay the tax to government, give the technology to government construction at the same time. My company, indeed, develop the society.

School is a factor in the successful development of a country, but the experience that absorbing from others is also a factor when it comes to the great decision of country.% Q5 s; k8 b5 n  d. z* A4 w! @; s% p4 w
For instance, when government make a construction decision, they will look through the document from other province, such as how to build the street, how to prevent the unexpected
factor, how to maintain the street ,and etc. Experience is vital for us, when we decide to do anything, it endows us with the ability to solve problems and enlarge our experience.

In a word, improving school and experience plays aan important role in our life.