Adrian 小豆 2013 口语贴~

Jerry的小鱼宝宝UID：2978223

啊啊啊啊啊，我打了那么多字，就这么不见了......呜呜呜呜呜呜~~~
对不起啊，我这会得出门了，回来再重新给你评...........让我去死一会...............

Jerry的小鱼宝宝UID：2978223

我回来了，重新评起~~
7.2点评
T1 1. student from primary school in the first time? 应该是student that go to primary school for the first time. 吧？2. everyone 发音有点不对 3. painting, dancing, sing a song, or soccer. 我觉得统一一点会比较好。such as, painting, dancing, singing, or playing soccer and so on. P.S. 说sing a song 的时候可以练习一下连读~ 4.最后一句有点模糊，没有听清说什么。 sorry~

T2 1.if we want to “learning” something... we really want to learn some "staffs"...感觉你说的句子里面经常会有一些小的语法错误和有点奇异的用法，要多多注意~2. 说的第一点是不是用让步的说法更好一些，就是虽然我们在教室能学到一些理论，但是我们更需要实践来让理论变得有用。3.the best way is go(having) a trip...同第一条。4.the(a) trip is the best way.同第一条。

对不起评的这么晚，实在抱歉~~

Jerry的小鱼宝宝UID：2978223

7.6 点评  总体来说，语音语调都很好。内容也不错，但是语病有点多。

T1 1. knew the first foreigner 我觉得knew 改成met 会比较好~ 2.book find  one 发音不是很准确。3. in this time，应该是at this time 吧？ 4. 没有there have 的用法，应该是there is on one....and none of them is my friend 比较好一点。5. this is a grateful for me 应该是 this a  grateful thing to me. grateful 是形容词。

T2 1. totally don't like？嗯，有点奇怪的用法，really don't like 自然一点？2.can broke our stomach。 can后面应该接原形，而且brake的话程度有点过吧，吃快餐不至于吃坏掉吧， 我觉得go against our health好一点。3.影响营养吸收之前的理由有点听不太出来啊....4. if we want to eat，I think it's amazing things. 句子很奇怪，我觉得改成I believe that eating is an amazing thing.比较好。5. so I must be try some beautiful classical restaurant. 楼主应该也知道这个句子奇怪在哪啦，我觉得改成 So I would prefer to have my meal at a beautiful and classical restaurant.

Jerry的小鱼宝宝UID：2978223

Jerry的小鱼宝宝 发表于 2013-7-8 17:04
7.6 点评  总体来说，语音语调都很好。内容也不错，但是语病有点多。

T1 1. knew the first foreigner 我 ...

表示我也是小菜一只，挑的问题有点多，见谅见谅哦~