【Daily Writing作文特训小组】陶太郎的作业帖

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2月8日
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or a new country because they will lose their friends.

Moving to a new place is a common event to human beings. Our ancestors moved from place to place depending on the natural environment and they had to adapt to the nature in order to build their home (感觉用survive更好些). Nowadays, most people don’t have to move for the reason of the nature, but they move for better jobs, higher salary, more opportunities, etc. With the achievement moving brings, people have to accept disadvantages at the same time like losing their friends. When considering this dilemma, in my opinion, although people may lose their friends by moving to a new town or a new country, if they know exactly what they really want, moving is not a bad thing.

It is the(a) fact that moving to a new town or a new country may cause some negative effects, among which losing friends seems to be the biggest challenge. Although moving to a new place does not mean that people will farewell the former environment completely, at least it is not as convenient as before to keep contact with their friends. People can never (no longer) maintain the friendship by playing sports, shopping during the discount season or chatting face to face with their friends. Things seem to be worse for those whose friendship is a critical part of their jobs. Take a businessman as an example, moving to another city may influences the connection between he and his cooperators and maybe he has to suffer a lot from a moving.

On the contrary, moving also brings more chances for life at the same time. People move for various reasons, however (however直接连接两个句子，
应该换成but,或者将前面的逗号改成分号), they all have the same purpose that some of their wants need to be satisfied. In many countries all around the world, children leave their homes and move to another city (other cities) for better education and students may even come (go) to other countries just for the same reason. What they have to leave is not only their friends, but also their families. What is more, because of the highly developing (developed) transportation technology, it is more convenient for people to move from where they live to other places. Choosing freely where they want to live depends on what they want to achieve. If people want to earn money, they can choose big cities. If people want to enjoy a quiet and relaxed time, they can choose the seaside towns or countryside.

On the other hand, many people do not have to worry about losing their former friends since the advanced scientific technologies help people get in touch with others wherever and whenever they want. With updating technologies based on either computers or mobile phones, scientists offer people more and more opportunities to keep in touch with other people, which is beyond their imagination. Despite the fact that people live far away from each other, they can hear other’s voices and even talk with each other face to face, which makes them forget the distance between them. It is said that the future technology may even transport the smell and taste. Thus people do not have to think that losing friends will be the barrier for them to move.

Based on the above reasons, although losing friends may be a big challenge for people when they consider moving to a new town or a new country, there are chances and benefits at the same time. In order to pursue the aim of their life, people have to give up some things. After all, the developing technologies help a lot for people to keep their friendship. In a word, I don’t agree that moving to a new place is a bad thing.

总体结构：
1、  1、开头
2、  2、让步：搬家失去朋友会造成损失
3、  3、反驳：搬家为了更多机会
4、  4、再反驳：搬家不一定会失去朋友
5、  5、结尾

感觉3和4换一下会更好
1、  1、开头
2、  2、让步：搬家失去朋友会造成损失
3、  3、反驳：科技发展降低了因搬家造成的朋友损失
4、  4、再反驳：搬家为了更多机会
5、  5、结尾
个人观点仅供参考~