～豆豆～改作文的小屋子(Last Updated: Oct. 17th)

豆豆～UID：2378384

恩^_^努力努力～～～现在就开始讨论11月的了啊。。。晕。。。我觉得gter上11月考的人们还dormant呢。。。

iamaeromouseUID：2330228

打小就觉得英语考试比追女生还难,不由得我兄弟不早点准备阿...
即将变成水贴了,汗....

豆豆～UID：2378384

打住打住。。。不能这样。。。

恩。。。你可以帖几篇essays上来大家交流交流嘛^_^:loveliness:

iamaeromouseUID：2330228

完整的文章还没有开始写,写了后一定送上
对了,想问你作文是怎么提高的,是不是背范文,有没有好的书推荐?..其实我觉得IBT背上一些常用的段子比如朋友,效率阿..就很好写了

豆豆～UID：2378384

我没有背任何东西。。。就是平时读的多，经常碰到一些很好的表达法，就记下来了，也所谓积少成多。

推荐我还是觉得“胡敏高分作文”比较好，里面的东西很地道。

我觉得常用的段子就没必要了，但是常用的理由还是有必要的。”胡敏“那里面都分了好几类，你可以一类看3～4篇，基本就够了。看了以后再每个写1～2篇，让大家改一改，基本就差不多了。

作文这东西，还是靠练。我个人觉得背文章没什么用，毕竟ibt的目的是考察你的语言水平，而不是背书的能力。即使现在通过背好词好句拿了高分，去那边读书以后还是什么都不会写，到那时侯就难受了～

dicmiUID：183392

我想问下如果让步的话，该怎么把握？
A or B，选择A，但B也不是一无是处。
列举了A1，A2，A3三个优点
然后弄个Admittedly，B也有几个优点？
会不会削弱A的优点的论证呢？

厄。说的太抽象~~豆豆看看~~

iamaeromouseUID：2330228

学习了,非常感谢,请问胡敏高分作文是那本绿皮的么?

豆豆～UID：2378384

我一般让步都在第一段让步，就是一开始就说也许有人会认为怎么样，然后一下子转头写自己的观点。

TOEFL作文好像写让步的比较少。。。我其实从来不写。。。呵呵

豆豆～UID：2378384

好像是。不过我的是大的，白皮蓝边的。

绿的好像是老版的:-)应该没多大差别，有了就不用再买了（废话。。。）

popsywinterUID：2120302

DD~~能帮我看看我的作文准备么? 我是27号考试,只有2周了~作文节前集中写了10篇左右~后面就没写了~
现在也不想写整篇,时间也来不及~我想把每篇的开头和提纲都写下,你觉得这样准备有用么?
贴一篇我写的NO.55,麻烦你帮我看看,主要要改进哪些方面~大的风格变动估计也不太可能了~如果能帮我看看哪些容易失分的地方可以避免,就太感谢了~~也祝你考试成功~~

55. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Position: disagree
Reason: 1.No one can understand other’s situation better than himself.
       2. Too much advice could confuse and frustrate people.
       3. One should learn to take responsibility by himself.
When it comes to making an important life decision, some people will ask their families or friends for advice, and the others prefer to leave the issue to themselves. In my opinion, the latter ones are wiser. I will explain my reasons as following:

As we always say, “You cannot judge a person before you walk one mile in his shoe”. There is no one understand the situation we are living in better than ourselves. Even our families or close friends may not know how we feel in certain situation. When giving out advices, people can not help but making judgments from their own perspectives. Even though they are more experienced than us and they had done with the similar problems before, the methods worked on them do not necessarily work on us. Instead of copying other’s experience or simply taking other’s suggestion, it is better that we could consider all the factors matter to us and work out a decision suitable for us.

Furthermore, too many advices from outside can confuse us and interfere our decision making. I still remember a true story my uncle told me that happened on him. He was offered a position from another company, which is more challenging but also more demanding. While he was quite interested, all his families and friends gave many different suggestions. Some advised him not to leave his current job for there are potential risks in the new offering, and some others suggested him to negotiate for a higher salary. My uncle was lost in so many opinions and did not take that opportunity, which could be a great one. What I learned from this story is that one should always listen to his heart and leave himself with no regret.

Finally, while a person makes an important decision all on his own, it’s a wonderful opportunity for his to learn about courage, responsibility and independence. Those are most important lessons in life and on one should miss them. We can not reply on families or friends forever and it’s our jobs to decide which to choose, where to go and what to believe.
  
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豆豆～UID：2378384

已在原帖修改:-) 请查收！

[ 本帖最后由 豆豆～ 于 2007-10-10 16:56 编辑 ]

KrtekUID：2369935

恩...来顶一个~
早就听说豆豆的深厚功力了...
能把帖子整理起来还是蛮好的呢``

破海沧澜UID：2401581

真好，有人来帮别人改作文！！
我也是帮别人改作文的， 小超人， 大家一起努力吧！！！！
我绝对顶！！！！
我顶顶顶！！！！！！:) :handshake

豆豆～UID：2378384

早就看到过你的修改的作文了:-)我还跟别人说你改的好呢:-)呵呵，一起努力！

豆豆～UID：2378384

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