楼主你的一楼好伟大!表示我的渣电脑渣网速也打开了好久。。。
T1,T2我觉得理由和例子都蛮好的,尤其是T2很有说服力,向楼主学习!
然后要是问题的话应该都没有什么大的了,不过T2我没有听懂 i'm a sports ?,求指教!还有 it teaches me about life 这里应该是a lot of things about life,不过这些问题都不大。
总之,学习学习~~!
11.29
t1:plenty of beautiful plants这里可以加一些例子扩充细节,比如说?make that huge difference赶脚不太好样,compensate for this difference to some degree?灰常流利,口语基础无比强大!!
t2:信息量好大....过去和现在的例子都有,怎么做到的!!
整体来看楼主口语很有传说中28的水平!!膜拜啊!
T1
1.“...development of my country in the past 20 years”和题干重复的有些多,建议变化下说法
2.is to go to the market---was to go...
3.“...by *** a simple clicks”不好意思***部分没有听清楚,但是听起来好像也有些问题,不是-ing的形式。另外后面是click,去掉a
4.will be deliver---delivered
5....she place the orders---she places the orders
T2
1.“I think children should be required to help with household work as soon as they are old enough to do so”开头和T1还是一样的问题,都是重复题干的部分,这题就更长了,建议LZ一定要转换说法
2.“so that it's essential for them to learn this,how to deal with those ...”去掉this
3.be independently---be independent
4.one of my roommate---roommates
T1
1.“I'm the one who is lack of...”这里的lack用法不对噢,I'm the one who lacks...建议LZ查查lack和lack of的用法
T2
1.“...instinct or impose”---instinct重音在最前面,impose不知是不是我听错啦,LZ想说的是purpose吗?
2.I may feel regret about that---I may feel regretful about that
3.in the lowest price---at the lowest price
和12.4的相比,赶脚进步很多。被动主动以及过去式这些错误都没有,逻辑和一样的十分连贯,并且这次的例子丰富多了。
Good job!