【口语小组】yl499235070的作业贴 （10.18）

yl499235070UID: 3464743

网盘地址，今后就传这里啦~
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGyxozW
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都录在这里导致我的渣电脑打开网页都费劲，所以光棍节新起点，百度网盘走起~
11月11号小伙伴们节日快乐
Task 1  If a foreign friend comes to your country, what kind of food would you recommend and why? Please use past personal experience to support your answer.
Task 2 Some people think that innate talent is important to a sportsman. Others think that working hard is more important. What is your opinion and why? Include details and examples in your explanation.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mqMQo

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新手初来乍到求指教……
……也不知道录音是不是这么发的啊……
考过两次了，中机经23，那段1、2题练得也很有感觉，
第二次没中，练得也少了，20……
好忧伤啊只能重整行装再战……
10月17日
task1
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task2
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TPO14-task3
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TPO14-task4
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TPO14-task5
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TPO14-task6
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练了一下午说到嘴瓢……
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10月18日
今天有点儿累，PH2.5吸多了状态不好……
task1
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task2
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TPO13-task3
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TPO13-task4
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TPO13-task5
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TPO13-task6
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10月19日
昨天录成了TPO12……现在调整了一下……
task1
Choose one of your favorite methods to relax and explain why it is your favorite. Please include specific details in your explanation.
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task2
Some college students prefer to attend classes regularly because they believe that only in the class atmosphere can they focus on the reading. Others, however, believe that the best reading can only be done outside the classroom. Which reading method do you think is better and why?
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TPO12-task3
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TPO12-task4
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TPO12-task5
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TPO12-task6
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10月20日
task1
Describe one important thing you have ever learnt in your childhood. Include reasons and details to support your response.
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task 2
Which do you prefer to do in your sparetime: spend time with your family members or stay alone?
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10月21日
互评小伙伴骚瑞，昨晚录成了22号的
Task 1 Describe a change in your life that might occur in five years . Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
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Task 2 Some people prefer to have classes during the day and do part-time jobs in the evening while others prefer to have classes in the evening and do part-time jobs during the day. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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TPO10-task3
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TPO10-task4
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TPO10-task5
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TPO10-task6
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10月22日
Task 1 Describe a special event or occasion that you haveparticipate with your family or friends. Include reasons and details to support your response.
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Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
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TPO9-task3
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TPO9-task4
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TPO9-task5
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TPO9-task6
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10月23日
Task 1 Describe your first day of school when you were young. Did you like it or not?
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Task 2 Some people think that modern technology has impacted our life negatively, while others think that it has improved our life. Which one do you agree and why?
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10月24日
Task 1 It is known that the teaching quality is very important for a university, there are also some other significant factors, which one would you choose and why? 1. size 2. price 3. Location
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Task 2 Which way do you prefer to spend your spare time? Reading, thinking alone or participating in group activities? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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10月25日
Task 1 Describe your favorite room in your house or somewhere else and explain why.
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Task 2 Some people like to go straight to the destination to see the view while traveling. Other people prefer to enjoy the scenery along the way. Which do you prefer and why?
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10月26日
Task 1 Which place is your favorite place when you were a child? Describe it and explain why you liked to go there.
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Task 2 Compared with science and math, the study of art and literature is not very important. Do you agree or disagree?
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10月27日
Task 1 Describe an art such as a song or a painting that gives you long lasting impression. Please explain reasons for the impression and include specific examples and details in your explanation.
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Task 2 Some people prefer to keep reading a new book until it is finished. Others prefer to stop reading whenever they lose interest. Which method of reading do you think is better and why?
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10月28日
Task 1 Among the following three professions, which do you think makes the biggest contribution to the society? Teachers,farmers, or doctors.
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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following question: In order to stay happy, you must have a job that you love doing.  
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10月29日
Task 1 If you want to choose a place to live, what kind of location would you prefer and why? 1. A place close to school or workplace. 2. A place close to your home. 3. A place close to a transportation hub (airport or bus terminal, etc.).
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Task 2 Some people think the best way to study is attend a lecture. Others think that it's better to read by yourself. Which way do you prefer and why?
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录了两遍都笑场，最后一次好不容易忍住不笑……
对不起互评的小伙伴，忽略室友雄壮的嗓音吧……
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10月30日
Task 1 Your university is planning to provide another type of food to attract more students. which kind of food would you like to suggest the university cafeteria to add? Explain the reasons with examples and details.
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Task 2 Should people be encouraged to visit science, art, or history museums?
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10月31日
Task 1 How to improve the quality of your country's education? Include reasons and details to support your response.
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Task 2 Some people prefer to buy new books. Others prefer to buy used books. Which do you prefer and why?
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11月1日
Task 1 What the advantages and disadvantages of allowing students to eat in class? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
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Task 2 Some people like audible books, some like paper books. Which one do you like and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
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11月2日
Task 1 Many students do volunteer work in schools or communities. If you are a volunteer, what kind of volunteering work are you interested in? Gardening in a community, doing activities with children, or cleaning a place in the city. Explain reasons and using examples to support your response.
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Task 2 Some people like to collect old things, others throw things away after use. What's your preference?
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11月3日
Task 1 Describe a performer, an actor or a musician, etc. that you think is great. Please give specific reasons why you think he/she is a great performer.
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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When students hand in their assignments later than the deadline, teachers should reduce their scores? Please use specific reasons to support your answer.
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11月4日
Task 1 What kind of music do you like the least? Please give specific reasons why you do not like this kind of music.
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ps:我说的是rap music……重放自己感觉有点儿听不清……
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching sports programs on television is not a good use of time. Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
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11月5日
Task 1 Describe a good study habit you have that is different from other students. Explain why this habit can help you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
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Task 2 Is it true that university students today must work harder than before to get a good job? Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
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11月7日
Task 1 Describe a piece of news or a story you concern recently. Explain why it gets your attention. Include reasons and details in your response.
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Task 2 Do you plan your free time or do things spontaneously in your free time? Please give your choice and explain the reasons.
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11月8日
Task 1 Describe an interesting experience in a restaurant or a café. Explain why the experience is memorable to you. Please include reasons and details to support your response.
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Task 2 Some college students like to spend their free time studying another course or doing schoolwork. Others like to join a club or do extracurricular activities. What do you think? Please explain your reasons.
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11月9号
Task 1 Describe the most important development of your country in the past 20 years, and explain its significance. Please include details and examples in your response.
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Task 2 Some students prefer test questions that ask for opinions while others prefer those objective ones that have a correct answer. Which do you prefer?
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11月10号
Task 1 Describe your favorite place to shop for clothes. Explain why you like to go there. Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
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Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should learn to draw or paint. Please use specific reasons to support your answer.
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摘星UID: 3478704

T12
发音很标准！希望能够找一些小例子，然后展开更多的细节，more vivid details
T3
think出现了好多次，可不可以做一些替换，或者用一些连接词替代。
T4
很好
T5
和新室友的时间可能冲突好像没说到
T6
说的好全，值得我学习。。。

永远的乌托邦UID: 3412995

10.18
T1: 建议开门见山地讲出让我感到惊讶的事情，更快地点题。
T2:注意provide中v的发音。我觉得两个理由间最好有个连接词，层次更分明。
T3: 注意第三人称单数：The girl don’t(doesn’t) think......
T4:内容不错，结尾最好能加一句把阅读和听力联系起来。
T5:建议的内容感觉有点空，最好再加一点理由。
T6:听了你的录音我才觉得自己概括的内容有偏差，赞一个~
总的来说，发音很好，比较连贯，嗓子是不是有点哑了？加油！

yl499235070UID: 3464743

永远的乌托邦 发表于 2013-10-20 00:06
10.18
T1: 建议开门见山地讲出让我感到惊讶的事情，更快地点题。
T2:注意provide中v的发音。我觉得两个理 ...

确实哑了……谢谢啦~这些问题我会多注意的！

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.19
楼主语音语调很棒！
T1：表述还是很全面的，是两个理由在支撑topic sentence嘛？后面那个理由还可以强调下跟barbecue的关系哈。最后个词没听懂的说。。
T2: supporting sentence的语法就错了。classroom has the best atmosphere to focus on my reading.写出来就很明显啦，别的都挺好的~
T3: expanding the range. more students. will be used to. 小细节的问题，内容很全面了。
T4: 表述转换很好！少了一个例子与term之间的关系的表述。
T5：整体还是很好的，前面都很流利，就是到自己的第二个理由的时候貌似没话说啦~~
T6：挺好的，没有什么问题~

queo1993UID: 3397710

10.20
T1
注意时态一致。前面my mother used to,I shared(还是share the food？不清楚)，后面应该是my classmate were very happy,后面几个同理。(made,brought,would)。

T2
stay myself ?没听清楚中间有没有介词，还是用stay alone吧
so应该是多余的吧，感觉没有因果关系。
好像没有说完,可以加一点点。
It is for our duty not just for our own preference（ to spend time with our family members.）

我才刚开始练speaking，不很清楚到底该怎么批改，有不对的地方请指正。

yl499235070UID: 3464743

queo1993 发表于 2013-10-21 12:56
10.20
T1
注意时态一致。前面my mother used to,I shared(还是share the food？不清楚)，后面应该是my cl ...

很感谢啦~我从来不知道注意时态……

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.21
T1:为什么楼主可以说到这么从容淡定，毫无磕磕巴巴感？点赞！语感超级好。
T2:after a whole day（'s）另外都OK！supporting sentence那里很不错！
T3:开头说reading里的建议的时候绕进去了。。girl意见的第二点没有很充分的样子。别的都很好。
T4:少了17s耶！daughter的例子没有说完吧？He loved action hero very much as well as his friends.病句？as well as放在he的后面吧。
T5:最后讲个人理由的时候用“I”真的好吗？然后其实是两个理由了吧？混在一起了。
T6: played the tape of baby('s) crying怪怪的。最后那个第二部分实验的总结句不是很到位吧。

yl499235070UID: 3464743

baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-22 20:47
10.21
T1:为什么楼主可以说到这么从容淡定，毫无磕磕巴巴感？点赞！语感超级好。
T2:after a whole day（ ...

！！！居然少了17s……下午网有问题传了N多遍……这个失误，学校的网太愁人
嗯……task1因为没有绕嘴的词汇，而且唠的家常嗑所以比较顺。硬编例子也很卡
额……as well as his friends基情四射了……
谢谢建议啦~

ノ淘气の小叶UID: 3335741

10.22
整体语音语调点赞~我一紧张说的跟个白板似的，悲剧。
T1：例子可以再说细一点，都聊了些什么之类的。
T2：我觉得前一个原因和后面的例子要是能结合一下说会好一点。分开的话感觉2个都时间讲细节一样。
T3：可以把阅读部分说的时间剪短一点，然后把听力部分细节说全一点。每个理由里面的关键细节要说。比如最后为什么女孩认为职位没有那么多的那个论点要说出来。
T4：时态，前面是过去时，后面变成了现在时。不是before the movie start ，是在一开始的画面。 可以在最后加一句总结。例子和概念的关系。
T5：感觉在后面的原因里面转换有点突然。可以互相take care之后又说学习可以去图书馆。前后有点跳跃。中间的那个住一起的缺点可以不用明确的说出来，直接说后面more people means，把缺点变优点就可以了。
T6：整体都说出来了。时间上把握一下，把后面一个例子的总结时间留出来。

yl499235070UID: 3464743

ノ淘气の小叶 发表于 2013-10-24 00:43
10.22
整体语音语调点赞~我一紧张说的跟个白板似的，悲剧。
T1：例子可以再说细一点，都聊了些什么之类的 ...

谢啦~我会注意的~

newswenerUID: 3372409

10.23
T1听上去觉得苍白了点儿，是一个故事，但是没什么具体的事情点。其实我觉得这题目出得就很奇怪，因为the first day of school when you were young. 什么school都没说清，kindergarten, primary school或者middle school都可以。建议楼主先把school说清，再把故事捋顺了。
语音方面觉得不够饱满，所有a的发音都要注意，大嘴巴小嘴巴ae分不清楚，然后说的时候可以自信点儿。
T2 work harder 比较级要说清楚 can't发音不清，建议分不清can和can't的话直接说cannot会比较好。
最后的收尾可以再简练点儿，尽量控制时间哈。

Catherine_zzUID: 3477457

我晚一点来给你评啊，我们学校的网络有点问题听不了音频，看不了视频。。==

Catherine_zzUID: 3477457

10.26
T1 发音很好，讲的很详细
T2 有逻辑，有细节，可以稍微注意下时间

loving_skyUID: 3424446

25日补改：
第一题：
1、注意时态的问题。was,is
2、前面的摆设和后面relax给人的感觉跨度有点大；
屋子的摆设为什么让你觉得relax.换言之，为什么要提屋子的摆设？
第二题：
第一个理由让人比较认同
但是第二个理由。直接去destination其实也是可以earn friendship的