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发表于 2009-6-18 16:58:09 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 wanghugigi 于 2009-6-20 16:57 编辑

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发表于 2009-6-18 22:05:29 |只看该作者
104# chineselady
Extended family played a significant role in the past decades. At that time, people living together and took care of each other more conveniently; especially the economic system and transportation were not available for those to work outside. The distinct aspect of facilities made people lived in a large family, but in modern society, the tendency of extended family is not as important as before. This passage will discuss it with more details.

The developed areas with advanced economy could attract more people from their families. At present, many young people prefer to move out of their towns to chase for dreams. There are several reasons: better working conditions, serious competition and gain different culture and life. Thus, to live with parents and grandparents may become history. Even some people might go abroad for higher education or doing research. For instance, one of my friends who came from a deep(can also use “remote”) mountain area studied in metropolitan areas. After receiving a degree, he got a good-pay job in a famous company in city. So he geographically separated from his relatives. His family due to living in small town longer time would not have desire to move out. Even though they did, culture shock may occur under the distinctive habits.

On the other hand, it is hard to make the same agreement in extended families nowadays. Grandparents with their hobbies and minds from past decades have scarcely followed the social tendency. Grandchildren may prefer to go shopping from online store but the senior will not think it is safe enough. And young people would like to wear bizarre dress to show their characteristics. Get several ear-piercing, tattoo and hip-pop style could be welcomed among next generations. The different information from different decades cannot make people think and do in the similar way. In this case, extended family will not be important and their opinion will not be adopted in the future, the reason is they may not like each other’s life style. That will not result in harmony for any families.2 a3 W, ]! V0 [) d' P3 f* @% i
In conclusion, with those details and example, living together with relatives will not exist gradually. Under the advanced economy and developed society, people would choose to live in a new way instead of extended family.

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本帖最后由 Rainbowtea 于 2009-6-19 15:11 编辑

105# honey67
As we all know that the human is the most intelligent socialized animal in the world, no one can live by himself in this close-knit globe. However, due to many reasons some people may think that our extended families are not important as they used to be. As far as I am concerned, the relationship depends on many factors and reasons,which would affect  the relationship between us in return.% D+ N$ c" u# j" N# ^0 Y

In the first place, the extended families pay attention to their own good will absorb their limited attentions and carefulness as years pass by.  One of my uncles is a convictive evidence I will say. He is the one who taught me how to dance , he is the one who bought me the first ethnic cap and he is the one who took me to his date.But they all happened when I was a little girl, which means more than ten years ago. However, after he started to work, got married and got his own children, I can not see that kindness and sweetness any more.Maybe he has to spend more time in taking care of his children and I am not a little girl anymore. But honestly speaking , I can not feel the relationship that I used to .
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In the second place, we are getting older and having much higher requirements than we had before. When we were kids, a simple smile, a sweet candy, even a tender touch would show how much they care about us. However, it will never show the magic now. I am sure none of us would be satisfied if they just gave us a simple smile .

In the third place, every one of us are busy with our own lives. Life is difficult to us. Due to many reasons and dreams we might choose to live far from our families. It seems we are not that intimate and unable to contact frequently with each other as we did. Now I am here in U.S.,but I could only get chance to talk with my uncles and aunts once a while.
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In a word, the relationship is keep changing as we are playing the key role in this multi direction game.However, I know the most inner part of our heart , there is always a place we have stored all the beautiful and sweet memories with anyone of the extended family.

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本帖最后由 lovevic 于 2009-6-24 22:05 编辑

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本帖最后由 Chelsea_CC 于 2009-6-24 17:21 编辑

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本帖最后由 goback211 于 2009-6-24 20:48 编辑

刚报名:
第18次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-973781-1-1.html
补交第17次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-973839-1-1.html
补交第16次作业:https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/thread-975370-1-1.html
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本帖最后由 sjtupeeler 于 2009-6-23 10:15 编辑

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本帖最后由 wdmwdl 于 2009-6-22 18:54 编辑

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第十九次作业https://bbs.gter.net/bbs/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1772888170欢迎指教!!!

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发表于 2009-6-23 13:14:58 |只看该作者
3# zhuyongchaochao
请问楼主是根据什么分小组?我第二次的作业按时交了, 但是为什么没有看到我的组员名单?

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本帖最后由 duoluoqishi8 于 2009-6-24 18:29 编辑

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