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7. "The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."

摄像机可以通过如此精确而有力的记录手段来再现当代生活，因此它已经代替书面记录成为了一种更重要的记录手段。



The video camera provides impressive records while written records are the most common, both of them play vital roles in the documentation.

The video camera makes people easy to record and review things. With the development of modern technology, people just need to pick up the video camera and press the "record" button, and then they can record all the things they want. Since some video cameras are small, people can put it in the bag when they are going to travel. The most significant function of the video camera is that images and sounds can be recorded. That means records are visible and audible, all the things people need to do is insert the tape into the video player and turn on the television. Also the video camera makes it possible that people can see celebrities who have already left the world, we can see Martin Luther King's speech of "I have a dream", rock show of Elvis and so on. The video camera is one of the most important inventions in the twenty century.

Even though the video camera can provide well records, it can not take the place of written books, since writing is still one of the most common and essential form of documentation. People can investigate history through studying the written records of ancient times. Many significant events are recorded by our ancestors in the form of writing, because it is the only way to record. If there are no written records, we can not appreciate Mozart's symphony, Anderson's tales, Shakespeare's opera and the forth. It is impossible for people to records events just by using cameras, since there are numerous significant events taking place in the world, how can people record all events or how can people choose which to record? But for writers or editors, they can choose the way of recording. For more important events, they can write down accurate procedures of it while a few sentences are enough for less essential things.

Two forms of documentation are important and people can not lose one of them. The video camera provides imitate records and it can be used to record some things which need images and sounds, such as Olympic Games. Written records are choice and include humans' thoughts, so important events in the world can be recorded by writing. History will be well-recorded by means of the video camera and written records.

To sum up, the video camera should coexist with written records in a long time instead of replacing it.

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希望可以抛砖引玉，共同探讨提高。你的思路是先肯定video camera的作用，然后再说written records不可少。

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The video camera makes people easy to record and review things. With the development of modern technology, people just need to pick up the video camera and press the "record" button, and then they can record all the things they want. Since some video cameras are small, people can put it in the bag when they are going to travel. The most significant function of the video camera is that images and sounds can be recorded. That means records are visible and audible, 这里应该用句号断开好些吧？all the things people need to do is are,主语是复数。是否加个to表目的比较好呢 insert the tape into the video player and turn on the television. Also the video camera makes it possible that 这几个词有点多余people can see celebrities who have already left the world, we can see Martin Luther King's speech of "I have a dream", rock show of Elvis and so on. The video camera is one of the most important inventions in the twenty century.
Even though the video camera can provide well records, it can not take the place of written books, 句号since writing is still one of the most common and essential form of documentation. People can investigate history through studying the written records of ancient times. Many significant events are recorded by our ancestors in the form of writing, because it is the only way to record. If there are no written records, we can not appreciate Mozart's symphony, Anderson's tales, Shakespeare's opera and the forth. It is impossible for people to records events just by using cameras, since there are numerous significant events taking place in the world, how can people record all events or用and how can people choose which to record? But for writers or editors, they can choose the way of recording. For more important events, they can write down accurate procedures of it while a few sentences are enough for less essential things.

Two forms of documentation are important and people can not lose one 改any of them. The video camera provides imitate records and it can be used to record some things which need images and sounds, such as Olympic Games. Written records are choice ?? and include humans' thoughts, so important events in the world can be recorded by writing. History will be well-recorded by means of the video camera and written records.

To sum up, the video camera should coexist with written records in a long time instead of replacing it.