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issue196 sally 小组 2 月20的作业
题目:ISSUE 196 - "Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life."
字数:578 用时:0:45:00 日期:2006-2-22
Nowadays is an era occupied by rapid scientific development and dramatic technology changes, which may serve good or evil. Someone claims that it helps solves (solving) amounts of problems, providing people with a convenient and comfortable life (that) cannot be imagined by their ancestors. While someone insists that technology exacerbates the quality of human's life by generating more problems although it solves lots of problems. In my opinion, whether technology does good or evil does not determined (are not determined) by technology itself but by how human apply it.(开头写的观点明确,有心意)
As everybody enjoys and experiences everyday, technology largely improves human's life in all aspects compared to our ancestors. Eating is not just a sustain activity but a enjoyment or even an art when we take delicious food; meeting friend or relatives in the opposite of the earth conveniently has become a reality rather than a fantastic legend; flying around the earth in only one day with the help of plane makes you feel like a bird soaring in the sky; reading a beautiful novel while listening to some classic music is quite an relax way to pass the weekend's evening; maybe some day in the nearby future, the moon would be the most popular place for touring(tour). Is it like a fairy tale, maybe to human centuries also it really is, however to us, it just a normal thing. Thanks to the technology, we can lead so comfortable a life.(例子举得很好,而且行文也不错)
On the one hand, technology truly solves lots of problems then improves our life, however, on the other hand, no one can deny the truth that while technology solves a problem, it may create one even more problems that are more serious than the former. Atom, which is discovered for the purpose of medicine use, is now apply(applied) for the military function for it stimulates the invention of nucleus power now being the most threatening weapon in human history. Gene engineering, which is also be found for the medical use and to rescue the extinct animals, may be utilized to create clone human that would brought severely chaos to the society. And the process of industrialization, which creates the most powerful productivity and accumulates large fortune to benefit human's life, catastrophically destroy the environment and kills innumerable numbers of wild animals. Facing the fact mentioned above, human should be woken up from the dream in which they take technology for granted that it is an omnipotent method to all problems.(这段写的也不错,三个设计原子、基因工程、工业化的例子举得都非常好,结尾总结的也不错,赞!)
Although technology seems like a two-edge sword, whether it can benefit the quality of human's life or in the opposite exacerbate it is mainly determined by our human beings. We cannot blame technology for itself for it is invited(invented) by human beings to solve human's problem at the beginning. It is human's ferocity and voracity that turn such an angle to the Satan(这句话说的不错,值得学习). To satisfy our unsatisfiable desire, we utilize it in an improper way, to achieve our purpose we take no consideration of others and harms it will be to others. In a word, it is our human beings, who create technology as an assistant to us, that deal with problems while at the same time, generating more.(此外,我觉得这段如果把科技带来的副效应的解决办法也加进去,会使分析更全面)
Therefore, the hot debate that whether technology serves good or evil is not so significant as it seems to be because it is not the problem of technology but a problem of utilizing technology by humans. After we realize it, we should rationally apply the technology so as to ultimately improve the well-being of human. |
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