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作者: xomae    时间: 2008-7-28 22:12:45     标题: 【challenge yourself小组】第四次作业布置贴

【challenge yourself小组】第四次作业布置贴
ISSUE208(Politics,  Leadership   )  (最新JJ排3位)
The way people look, dress, and act reveals their attitudes and interests. You can tell much about a society's ideas and values by observing the appearance and behavior of its people."

ARGUMENT 137(最新JJ排13位)
- The following appeared in an editorial in the Mason City newspaper.
"At present, Mason City residents seldom use the nearby Mason River for any kind of recreational activity, even though surveys of the region's residents consistently rank water sports (swimming, fishing, and boating) as a favorite form of recreation. Since there have been complaints about the quality of the water in the river, residents must be avoiding the river because they think that it is not clean enough. But that situation is about to change: the agency responsible for rivers in our region has announced plans to clean up Mason River. Therefore, recreational use of the river is likely to increase, so the Mason City council will need to increase its budget for improvements to the publicly owned lands along the Mason River."


作业截止日期2008年7月30日晚24时

重点说一下,如果你从来没有帮别人批改过,先请看一下这个帖子https://bbs.gter.net/thread-670640-1-1.html

再啰嗦一句,交作业的时候请在作文开头附上你的中文提纲,这样有助于自己和批改的人理清逻辑思路~



作者: qillura    时间: 2008-7-29 22:35:10

顶呀顶呀丁页口牙~
作者: sabrinabaobao    时间: 2008-7-30 14:16:04     标题: 交作业

issue208:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... e%3D1#pid1771937131
限时了,:vomit: 但是写得惨不忍睹,辛苦修改者啦
argu137: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=864079&extra=page%3D2

[ 本帖最后由 sabrinabaobao 于 2008-7-31 10:55 编辑 ]
作者: qillura    时间: 2008-7-30 15:12:13

交作业。。。
issue:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=863767&extra=page%3D2
argu:
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=863773&extra=page%3D2

[ 本帖最后由 qillura 于 2008-7-30 15:22 编辑 ]
作者: infant~    时间: 2008-7-30 15:12:56

交作业。。
Argument137
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-863770-1-1.html
Issue208
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-863769-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 infant~ 于 2008-7-29 20:20 编辑 ]
作者: 抹茶抹茶    时间: 2008-7-30 16:12:28

先占个楼,一会来PO~~

ISSUE 208: https://bbs.gter.net/thread-864197-1-1.html

一会再PO ARGU,网速实在太慢了!

[ 本帖最后由 抹茶抹茶 于 2008-7-31 17:14 编辑 ]
作者: xomae    时间: 2008-7-30 18:37:28

Argu:  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=863834&page=1&extra=page%3D1#pid1771937625

今天把思路整理了很久,求狂拍,先发一片哈,谢谢

[ 本帖最后由 xomae 于 2008-7-30 19:53 编辑 ]
作者: rainegold    时间: 2008-7-30 19:27:07

我也先占个  马上写 不过 还没有准备 Arg  只写issue吧
作者: zhangrongxinxln    时间: 2008-7-30 20:29:34

argument137 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=863865&extra=page%3D1
issue208 https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=864074&extra=page%3D1
希望楼上楼下的猛拍啊~
谢谢~~~

[ 本帖最后由 zhangrongxinxln 于 2008-7-31 15:12 编辑 ]
作者: springelf    时间: 2008-7-30 22:46:24     标题: 第四次作业

A https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=863937&extra=page%3D1

先交一篇A,I我慢慢琢磨~~~~
作者: superjiang001    时间: 2008-7-30 23:01:32

交作业,楼上楼下的哥们使劲打击我,千万别含糊啊,呜呜
issue:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=863947&extra=page%3D2
argu: https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=863949&extra=page%3D2
谢谢了:handshake
作者: 小火龙33    时间: 2008-7-30 23:28:40

Argument137  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-863958-1-1.html
Issue208        https://bbs.gter.net/thread-863959-1-1.html
作者: wanghugigi    时间: 2008-7-30 23:51:00

argument
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-863477-1-1.html
issue
http://bbs.gter.ce.cn/bbs/thread-864740-1-1.html

[ 本帖最后由 wanghugigi 于 2008-8-1 23:30 编辑 ]
作者: duheng0570    时间: 2008-7-30 23:55:14

可以申请加组吗?~
作者: Tracycxt    时间: 2008-7-31 01:48:45

argument  https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
issue:https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D2
谢谢大家..
作者: linyunf    时间: 2008-7-31 01:53:46

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=864003&extra=page%3D2
argument

https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=864173&extra=page%3D2
issue

多谢评改啊。:handshake

[ 本帖最后由 linyunf 于 2008-7-31 15:52 编辑 ]




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