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• 去掉不必要的限定词和修饰词
• 用单词代替短语
• 用词组代替从句
• 避免在句首过度使用expletive
• 多用主动，少用被动
• 避免滥用动词得名词形式，为了避免V都是BE形式
• 改写不必要的不定式短语
• 用直接的表达代替迂回的说法
• 去掉那些解释很明显或过多细节的词
• 去掉重复的词 keep the sentence short

Strategies for Writing a Conclusion

Conclusions are often the most difficult part of an essay to write,（注意结论的重要性！） and many writers feel that they have nothing left to say after having written the paper. A writer needs to keep in mind that the conclusion is often what a reader remembers best. Your conclusion should be the best part of your paper. 好吧，conclusion是最难、最重要、最好的！！！

A conclusion should

• stress the importance of the thesis statement, （重现主题句）
• give the essay a sense of completeness, and （完善全文）
• leave a final impression on the reader.（给读者一个深刻的印象）

Suggestions

• Answer the question "So What?"
  （强调文章的重要性）

new or interesting

So what?

Why should anybody care?

• Synthesize,（综合全面的观点） don't summarize
  • Don't simply repeat things that were in your paper. They have read it. Show them how the points you made and the support and examples you used were not random, but fit together. 如何黏在一起的？

• Redirect your readers
  • Give your reader something to think about, perhaps a way to use your paper in the "real" world. If your introduction went from general to specific, make your conclusion go from specific to general. Think globally. （结尾最后从具体再回到一般）Propose a course of action, a solution to an issue, or questions for further study. This can redirect your reader's thought process and help her to apply your info and ideas to her own life or to see the broader implications.

• Create a new meaning
  • You don't have to give new information to create a new meaning. By demonstrating how your ideas work together, you can create a new picture. Often the sum of the paper is worth more than its parts. 是说组织结构么？
• Point to broader implications.

For example, if your paper examines the Greensboro sit-ins or another event in the Civil Rights Movement, you could point out its impact on the Civil Rights Movement as a whole. A paper about the style of writer Virginia Woolf could point to her influence on other writers or on later feminists.由点到面地延伸

Strategies

• Echoing the introduction: （呼应开头）Echoing your introduction can be a good strategy if it is meant to bring the reader full-circle. If you begin by describing a scenario, you can end with the same scenario as proof that your essay was helpful in creating a new understanding.

Example