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Employment is virtually a long-lasting issue for intense debate since it takes up a major part of most people’s life, though not closely related to retired ones. While some people believe that one should focus more on the vacation time than salary, others, including me, hold a growing body of opinion that salary can overweigh other criteria when evaluating a job.
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For one thing, more and more people gradually combine getting more money with one’s success in society. It has been proved that since the beginning of the Industrial revolution, when market economy became dominant for the first time,(连续用了since和when,不合理) more money(建议去掉more) would be (建议改成完成时,跟since对应)the symbol of the winner in competition. Today, this rule in our society does not disappear but becomes more profound. In our society now, people like to gather together to show off their commodious houses, exhibit their outstanding automobiles, display their high-tech cell phones and enjoy their sumptuous
expeditions. Though
appearing to be accepted, all these seem to me to link them with a great amount of wealth. Sometimes, even a well-paid employee cannot afford such a luxury, let alone a person with an enjoyable work but less salary.
More important, salary is always the first consideration for a man to make a living in a city. Different from the rural ease,(area) urbanized way calls for money on even(去掉) every aspect of the real life. For instance, if young people want to struggle in a metropolitan such as Peking, they have to pay for the rent of the house, bear the skyrocketing price in supermarket every day, get accustomed to numerous parties which usually require a huge amount of money and even keep numb to tremendous cost in hospital. It is impossible to make more than the widest guess at how much money they need, but they have to be hungry creatures facing with the crucial reality. It is really difficult to imagine that under such situations, they can weigh their job by many criteria, such as vacation time, rather than(建议加个only) money.
Finally, besides the basic life requirements, one will pursue to court other excitements in his/her life. Making an investment in stock market is something like three meals a day for a person; accompanied by some disasters, donating become necessary for one to show his/her love(主语不对应前面的accompanied); with the help of airplane and inter-train, a long period of tourism is no longer a dream. Nevertheless, they are (去掉)all need money! For most people, not including a
(去掉)few people who can be a millionaire by lottery, the single source for it is the working salary.
To sum up, in a material-oriented society, except for the jobs with both high salary and more vacation time, which I take leave to doubt, I will have to prefer the employment with more money, not only for the basic living standard but also for a more colorful life. |
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