王小刁 发表于 2014-8-3 11:12
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0803 a person in history
1、流畅度:
好,但感觉不够自然。
2、词汇:
不错,用了很多高级词汇。
3、语法:
"She was extreme beautiful.”应为“She was extremely beautiful.” 不过如果为了突出她的美,我会说She was a woman of extraordinary beauty.
“I first knew her on my history class.”应为"I first knew her in my history class.”
在录音的后半部分,she和he混用了,例如“Because he is very crucial on Chinese history, nearly everybody in China knows her.”,整句話建議改為“Because she was a significant figure in Chinese history, nearly everybody in China knows her.”
reply:0802 红字rick
流畅度:再连贯一点就更好了
词汇:不错,再使用高级一点的词汇就更好了
语法:请保持一直使用过去时态,开始那句我听到的是you may told of it,应该是be told,
The people there is very friendly,应该是were,
a instrument,应该是an instrument
语音:west是/e/,不是/ei/,destination是/e/不是/I/
3、语法:有部分表达不够到位。
Buddhist cultures
He is/ has more secret than anyone else.
突然转时态变成They did/do this
磕头应该系:kowtow而不是nod their head/heads =点头
关于导游的话应该改回过去时啦。
或者我觉得,你时态不要一直换了。因为是过去的经历,可以全部用过去时。不然说着说着自己都懵了。