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NO one will be fortten

What should the study of history place his emphasis on? Individuals or groups of people.The statement raises a
variety of issues about revolution,administrative,conscience, the concept of personal heroism. On balance,however,I
fundamentally agree with the notion that history need to understand the group desicion-making,even to learn that the
group is how to promote the process of history by individuals.
All I see it,for the purpose of changing history ,the power of a person alone too weak to push the history.For
example, when India attaioned inndenpdence on 15th August 1947,Mahatma Gandhi was beslowed the title of FAther of the nation.Ordinary people called him Bapu,which means father.The supreme efforts of Mahatma Gandhi in the
attainment of freedom can never be estimated.Yet,achievement of freedom would have been impossible without the
sacrifices of the martyrs who adhereed to Mahatma Gandhi's principles of satyagraha and non-violence.These brave
people rare get their share of credit.Thus,history is always full of stories about the glorious deeds of a few
individuals.They should have been unable to succeed in their daring endeavors without the support and active
participation of their fellow members.Hence,the most famous events and trends in history were possible because of
group effort.
However,Get along with people is a complex matter,group will form a political group, the contest evolved into a
political game.Then our eyes focused onthe leaders of these groups .We watched them to use their personal political
views and decision-making to drive the wheel of history.That may explain why Hollywood blockbuster is always full of
thoughts and feelings of personal heroism,The legend of Zorroand Braveheart.We awalys fand these Heroic figure shape the history.Most of the famous individuals are widely mentioned in history because of their superb leadership
skills.Leaders always get a huge share of the limelight.They give speeches and command rapt attention.Thus,they
deserve to be immortalized by history.Hence,the emphasis is indivduals are due to the fact that these indivaduals
had superior leadership skills which enabled them to lead the populace while continuously staying in the limelight.
"History teaching by example" is one phrase that describes this use of a study of the past—a study not only of
certifiable heroes, the great men and women of history who successfully worked through moral dilemmas, but also of
more ordinary people who provide lessons in courage, diligence, or constructive protest.That is the history value.
Today it behooves us to continue drawing inspiration from "the famous few",and to continue understanding history
cheifly in terms of their influence
In sum ,the speaker's claim overstates the importance of groups of people,at least to some extent.When it comes
to politics and science and some famous matter ,it was the group effort that made the difference.Yet,there are some
cases where the indiidual reigned supreme.They helped us better understand the groups, a clearer history.History is
a fair,no one will be fortten.

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What should the study of history place his emphasis on? Individuals or groups of people.The statement raises a variety of issues about revolution,administrative,conscience, the concept of personal heroism. On balance,however,I fundamentally agree with the notion that history need to understand the group desicion-making,even to learn that the group is how to promote the process of history by individuals.(最后半句没看懂)
All I see it,for the purpose of changing history ,the power of a person alone(is) too weak to push the history. For example, when India attaioned inndenpdence(attained independence) on 15th August 1947,Mahatma Gandhi was beslowed the title of FAther of the nation.Ordinary people called him Bapu,which means father.The supreme efforts of Mahatma Gandhi in the attainment of freedom can never be estimated.Yet,achievement of freedom would have been impossible without the sacrifices of the martyrs who adhereed to Mahatma Gandhi's principles of satyagraha and non-violence.These brave people rare get their share of credit.Thus,history is always full of stories about the glorious deeds of a few individuals.They should have been unable to succeed in their daring endeavors without the support and active participation of their fellow members.Hence,the most famous events and trends in history were possible because of group effort.
However,Get along with people is a complex matter,group will form a political group, the contest(will evolve) evolved into a political game.Then our eyes focused on the leaders of these groups .We watched them to use their personal political views and decision-making to drive the wheel of history.That may explain why Hollywood blockbuster is always full of thoughts and feelings of personal heroism,The legend of Zorroand Braveheart.We awalys fand(find) these Heroic figures shape the history.Most of the famous individuals are widely mentioned in history because of their superb leadership skills.Leaders always get a huge share of the limelight.They give speeches and command rapt attention.Thus,they deserve to be immortalized by history.Hence,the emphasis is(on) indivduals are due to the fact that these indivaduals had superior leadership skills which enabled them to lead the populace while continuously staying in the limelight.这一段比较凌乱建议先把topic sentence 定下来在围绕它写实在想不出句子来可以先看看范文吧其实我也是憋不出来~同病相怜！
"History teaching by example" is one phrase that describes this use of a study of the past—a study not only of certifiable heroes, the great men and women of history who successfully worked through moral dilemmas, but also of more ordinary people who provide lessons in courage, diligence, or constructive protest.That is the history value.Today it behooves us to continue drawing inspiration from "the famous few",and to continue understanding history cheifly in terms of their influence 这一段和上一段的关系不是很明确可以加入一些其他观点：例如历史的真正意义是知道人们解决现实问题，所以不管是个人还是人民只要我们能从他们的历史事迹中受益就有研究的价值而不必emphasize谁进而呼应No one will be forgotten
In sum ,the speaker's claim overstates the importance of groups of people,at least to some extent.When it comes to politics and science and some famous matter ,it was the group effort that made the difference.Yet,there are some cases where the indiidual reigned supreme.They helped us better understand the groups, a clearer history.History is a fair,no one will be fortten.
联系时不必在乎时间，我想首先是把清晰地思路建立起来，然后在写前先借鉴下别人的习作和范文中的语言和例子，最后平心静气地写
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