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ARG 48
Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire, because it has spectacular natural beauty and a consistent climate. Another advantage is that housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Moreover, Clearview's mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. And best of all, retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of physicians in the area is far greater than the national average."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author claims Clearview as a top choicefor anyone seeking a place for retirement and lists several charming reasons.But his claims are based on some suspicious assumptions, making it not thatpersuasive as it seems.
Firstly, we have no evidence that housingcosts or taxes are truly low in Clearview. The author ambiguously uses thewords "fallen significantly" or "lower", without mentioningthe actual amount. We have every reason to doubt that the housing costs are infact rather intimidating and still at a high level despite the fact that it hasfallen significantly all these years. So does the taxes. Though "lowerthan those in neighboring towns", taxes can still be higher than theaverage of the country.
Secondly, the author mentions the promisingnew programs to improve school, streets, and public services. As a top choicefor retirement, the improvement of schools and streets is fairly unnecessary,since the major citizen there could be seniors, most of whom lacking youngkids. Still, any construction would inevitably produce pollution – solidwastes, gases or noises, which would in turn affect the serenity of Clearviewand make it not so agreeable any more.
Lastly, the boasted high quality of healthcare remains doubtful. In the first place, the author merely mentions about thenumber of physicians. Faced with various kinds of common illnesses of retirees,physicians, without surgeons, may not handle everything. Besides, the greatnumber of doctors is not equivalent to the great quality of health care. Thecondition of local health care is heavily dependent on the quality of medicalworkers and supporting medical facilities as well.
Overall, the argument is so weak that itneeds more bolstering evidences. The author should provide more clues on taxesand housing costs, and more details on health care. Also, the benefit of newprogram must be fully evaluated. Without all those evidences, the argument canbe easily rejected out of hand. |
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