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119. When research priorities are being set for science, education, or any other area, the most important question to consider is: How many people's lives will be improves if the results are successful?
In this technologically advanced era, much emphasis is put on researches in science, education or other area. And there are millions of researches in the world, therefore, there comes an increasingly hot debate on how the research priorities should be set? (这两句感觉连贯性不够强,而且很生硬)The speaker's recommendation is that the most important question to consider is the benefit people may gain from the results of the researches. However, in my opinion, giving the beneficial researches the priorities is infeasible and unnecessary, and it would even do more harm than good to both to(去掉这个to) the society and the researching fields. All the researches should be given equal priorities.(researches本身就是一个负数名词吧?如果没有几错的话 )
First of all, if we strictly follow the speaker's suggestion, who would decide which areas of research are more worthwhile than others? Researchers cannot be left to decide. Given a choice, they will pursue their own special areas of interest, and most of them tend to think that what themselves researches on are certainly the most useful and significant. Therefore, it is highly unlikely that all researchers could reach a fully consensus as to what areas are most likely to help the most people.(这句语法错误) Nor can this decision be left to legislators and regulators. Lacking the professional knowledge and recognition of the researches in question, the regulators or legislators are likely to make totally wrong prediction of how the results and their impacts would be, hence their decisions would be absurd or fantastic, which may hinder not only the progress of the researching fields but also the improvement of people's lives. Similarly, the decision made by the citizens may also be worthless. In short, it is a tricky problem to ascertain which areas should be the most significant and worthwhile ones.(老是用researching 很单调,换换其他的词)看着看着觉得很面熟,好象是老外280里的,或者在哪里见过.这样不好哦,一定要有自己的看法,而且会引起懒惰的.我建议,就当成是中文写,想到什么就写什么,再润色
Secondly, it is difficult to predict which research avenues will ultimately lead to the greatest contributions to society. Many of the research results may have little practical significance, but they may turn out to be the greatest discovery in years or decades. A telling example involves Newton's classical dynamics. In the time when this theory came into being, people just regarded it to be a great talent's achievement, which seemed to be useless in one's daily life. However, nowadays, astronomer’s designs of satellites and rockets are based on this great theory. (两个例子之间最好有点过度,而且牛顿这个例子优点牵强,可以举些理论性的例子更充分地说明这个分论点)When roentgen ray was firstly discovered no one, the discoverer himself include, would imagine that this magical ray could be used in diagnosis. Therefore, because of the unpredictable influence the research result may put on the human being, to give priorities only to those researches having immediate benefits would be unadvisable.
However, it should be admitted that the result of researches should be harmless to the society and people. The ultimate aim of any researches in all the fields should be sever(笔误) human being, which should be regarded to be the guidance of all the researches(研究和研究人员没写对,上面也有类似错误). Although it may be difficult to determine the effect of the research result, the researchers should stop the research immediately when the discovery the result would be no good for the world. (这个转折有点怪,你想表达什么呢?)And the government should legislate to prohibit any harmful researches, which may threaten the peace, security and health of people in the world. For example, the researches on biochemical and nuclear weapon are totally forbidden by most countries.(这个狸子太简短了吧,刚开始就结束了,作为一段,例子应该充分一些才饱满)
To sum up, it is unlikely and unadvisable to set priorities only for these researches whose results would be useful and significant, for it is difficult not only to find arbiters to make decision, but also for they to predict the effect in advance. All the researches, which is harmless to the people and society, should be give equal opportunities to gain the priorities
总的来说,模仿的痕迹挺重的,不过挺结构清晰,不错,加上自己的观点会更好. |
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