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There is a general trend that people engage in going abroad. However, the opinions about living far away from the birthplace are varied. My question has been (is就好吧)raised:" Is it a blessing for people to go to the outside world in place of staying in their native land?" My answer is basically yes which means that there’s profound influence of living in another place in most cases.

First and foremost, going to outside world will totally broaden our horizon of us(删). Because of the region diversify, abundant information such as customs, unique festivals, language difference will be freshly found to meet our curiosity to the maximum. And then we’ll use the acquired knowledge cement as(加入) the evidence of the saying word （没看懂哈）to leave a brilliant impression of you to the person you are talking with. Adversely, staying in the initial town will definitely lose the merit. You have to search large amount of second-handed information on the references, the internet base, for instance, about other places despite of knowing whether it is true. Honestly, that is time-consuming and will lead to(加入) inefficient memorizing.为什么要查二手资料呢？原因没交代清楚，是指和外地人交谈么？

Furthermore, to go outside will foster us to enhance the ability of individual. I can back up my point with a true story. Wang Cai, one of my closest friend, led a messy life at both school and his family. His mother found that the closer she places the child, the bad habit the child will develop. So that she had decided to sent his-->her child, Wang Cai, to (删)abroad to give him a practice chance-->a chance to live individually. In the first week, he sent plenty of emails to complain about the financial straits and the inconsistency between him and the thorough(如果是thorough是修饰environment,改成thoroughly) new environment. But after complaining for half a month, he gradually diminished the resentment. Several months passed quickly, the message-->messages of his success in terms of his self-actualization take-->took place of complains. He finally got rid of these bad habits thanks to -->owing to, thanks to 不常见于句子中间，his mother’s plan of going abroad这是指他妈妈也出国了的意思 instead of making him burdensome close to his home.

Admittedly, staying in native land might have some advantages. For instance, in some cases, mothers are of great considerate要是用of...结构的话就要接名词，改为consideration. This kind of affection between mothers and children is hard to part with. So with the current nostalgia, those could choose to study and live nearby for going back home to have a family reunite often. However, since I'm the type of person who have a strong aspire-->desire好些 to improve myself rather than miss the family, it’s safe to say that going to outside world is still an advisable choice.

All in all, I deem that going to outside world is superior than staying at home because it can not only broaden our horizon but also give us a precious chance to practice taking care of (加)ourselves. In contrast, living near home may make sense due to the close(加) relationship, but it depends on different cases. That’s why the activity of going abroad hold such a strong appeal for so many people.
总体感觉还好，优点是应用了一些高级词汇（我就不行），但是有些句子不很地道，继续加油，一起努力！

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