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1# bixueer111
It’s well known that human like to hear secrets and scandals, which are human nature and no one want to be cheated.(我觉得这里的非限制性定语从句不好。 定语从句的which 只能指代前面的名词,不是前面的句子;比如你这里就不能指代人们喜欢听丑闻听隐私) So that's why there are so many reporters or journalists dig the real things which are hidden deeply by some people. When it comes to the ways to get the realities whether from newspaper or TV, people have different opinions and perspectives because of distinct backgrounds and experiences. For me, I have to admit that speed from newspapers fails to conquer the TV, however, the realities from the newspaper are more reliable.
7 e: d, G" ]$ Z) E2 Z& vFirstly, as the numerous number of newspapers, explored information could be grasped by reporters from any department easily and directly, so which for us(这个短语是干吗用的?什么成分,没看明白) ,it is a wonderful chance to obtain the real news. in contrast, although TV ,even the living TV, would show some suddenly break-up accidents, ordinary people would not understand the hidden lines or relationships. So people want comments from others who know well about the problems like reason, result, and process. Like the Watergate, although TV show the scene about the accidents but it is the newspaper that indicates the whole comments from negative aspects and positive aspects regardless of the pressure from government.
& ?0 B- j- w0 e( QOn the other hands, newspapers are under the relaxed rules by the government, not like the TV, even more some private newspapers are legal which lead to the related talking-free level.
9 i- ]) V$ \$ y, Q' q/ H% y$ yMoreover, in terms of function, TV could broadcast some show games, movies, news, talking show, competition, and so forth, on the contrary, newspapers only focus on the news or some advertisements for interests. So it seems too simplistic to compare the weigh ??of telling truth between newspapers and TV as the only things staff in newspaper companies cared about are truth, reality, and some hidden secrets. 4
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In all, only the newspaper could bring the truth for the public rather than the TV which always has perfect covers absorbing people's attention.
改迟了 非常抱歉.
我觉得论证段还写的比较抽象,好象ETS喜欢看详细的阐明一个论证;还是集中把一个论证写好;如果泛泛的写论述的话,我们这种英文水平的人就很容易乱写句子.这个也是我自己最常犯的毛病,因为我发现描述一个故事的时候反正比泛泛论证犯的错误少.
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