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发表于 2011-10-14 21:27:32 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

求作文提高，明天开始坚持写~喵！

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发表于 2011-10-15 18:28:18 |只看该作者

10月15独立写作
With the development of economy, people began to raise pet to enrich their lives. As we all know ,raising pet can cost a lot of money. The holder has to buy special food, beautiful clothes, nice home for their lovely pet. What’s more, when the pet got sick, you also need to take him to the hospital to get medical treatment. It is really a huge amount of money for the common family. In my opinion, I agree with that there are better uses for these money.
For one thing, Pets are human good friends. When people feel lonely and get isolated, a pet can accompany you all the time. However, pet is not a necessarity. The high speed of life allenients people from one to another. People are working day and night so that they don’t have enough time to enjoy the time with family. The money spent on pet can be used to pay for the family trip. The whole family can go to some places which has picturesque scenery and foster family love. People can serve the same function of pet if they put their heart into it.
For another thing the world we are living are not wealth in everywhere. There are so many people who got sick , suffer hungry and thirsty and can’t afford education. The money for them is pressing and urgent. With these money, they can live a better life. People can donate their money spend on pet to some charity organizations to offer help.
Last but not the least, raising pet not only cost money, but also will distract people’s attention to other things. The money can be used to buy some interesting books to broaden your horizon, to buy nutritious food to strengthen your body, to save up for urgent uses and so on It is not wise to spend too much money on a pet who can live a very short lifespan compared with people.
To map out everything and to make each penny count, we should never confine ourinterests in only one sphere. Although pets are lovely, you can appreciate it instead of costing much on keeping it because there are really better uses for your money.

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发表于 2011-10-15 18:45:14 |只看该作者

10月15综合写作
The reading passage puts up three pieces of evidence to support that a portrait recently for sale by a member of Jane Austen’s family is of Jane Austen herself when she was a teenager. However, the lecturer believes such evidence is not at all convincing and argues that the painting could not be a portrait of Jane Austen.
Firstly, the lecturer argues that the portrait first appeared 70 years after Jane Austen’s death, suggesting that members of her extended family might have commissioned the portrait without having actually seen her in person. Therefore, the fact that the portrait had been commissioned by her family members does not necessarily prove that it is a portrait of Jane Austen.
Secondly, the lecturer argues that the resemblance between the portrait and an authentic sketch of the adult Jane Austen could be explained by the hypothesis that the portrait is of a relative of Jane Austen when the relative was a teenager. It may be the niece of Jane Austen and the relatives’ chidren.
Finally, the lecturer points out that despite the style of the painting, which links it to the exact period when Jane Austen was a teenager, the stamp on the back of the canvas indicates that the portrait was painted at least 27 years after Jane Austen’s birth, indicating that the portrait was of someone else who was a teenager that much younger than Jane Austen.

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发表于 2011-10-16 02:35:31 |只看该作者

我们是一个组的
改好了

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发表于 2011-10-16 11:48:26 |只看该作者

我们一组改独立，我下下来了，改好传上来，我的下午传上来哈！https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... ghlight=&page=2

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发表于 2011-10-16 20:00:09 |只看该作者

有了开始，LZ坚持下去一定会有很大的进步的
麻烦也帮我改一改，谢谢
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1304734-2-1.html

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发表于 2011-10-17 15:11:01 |只看该作者

10月17日独立写作
Do you think that young people in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past?

For centuries, the relationship between young people and parents has been discussed. Some people put forward that young people in today are more independent than in the past. Yet I hold the totally opposite opinion that young people become more dependent on their parents than ever before.
First, with the declining of world birth rate and the coming of aging society, most family nurture only one child. The fewer the chirdren are, the more treasure parents give. Parents devote all their lives and attention to the only child, therefore , which resulting in a lot of princes and princesses. They can not earn living by themselves let alone to take care of their parents. In addition, when they get in troubles, they immediately call for their parents’ help instead of solving problems alone.
Second, the fierce competition and the immense pressure require young people shoulder more responsibilities than ever before. They have to work day and night to earn money and do not have much time to attribute to the family. Then the burden comes to their parents. We are all familiar with these scenes: parents go to the supermarket to buy and cook food or do the cleaning and washing or pick up their grandchildren after school, etc. Parents have already became a superman with a variety of vocations and what’s surprising is that a lot of parents enjoy themselves in these things.
Third, in today’s age, the society is the society for money. There is a famous proverb says that, money is not everything, but without money you can do nothing. Especially the commodity price always hovers at high levels recently. Young people really need financial support from their parents to get better education and start their own career.
In the end, it is understanding and reasonable for young people to depend on their parents. However, there should be a limit and standard to restrict young people from overly dependent on their parents. There will be a day that young people have to leave the nest finally. Young people should promote the development of intellect and ability to build a nest for their parents.

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发表于 2011-10-17 21:14:19 |只看该作者

不好意思才传上来！https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1309620-3-1.html

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发表于 2011-10-17 21:18:44 |只看该作者

这是你的哈！

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发表于 2011-10-18 09:00:23 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 liang0603 于 2011-10-18 09:12 编辑

乔布斯：“记住你即将死去”。

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发表于 2011-10-18 09:03:30 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 liang0603 于 2011-10-18 09:06 编辑

10月17日独立
Do you think that young people in today are less dependent on their parents than in the past?
For centuries, the relationship between young people and parents has been discussed. Some people put forward that young people in today are more independent than in the past. Yet I hold the totally opposite opinion that young people become more dependent on their parents than ever before.
First, with the declining of world birth rate and the coming of aging society, most family families nurture only one child. The fewer the
chirdren are, the more treasure parents give. Parents devote all their lives and attention to the only child, therefore ,which resulting results in a lot of princes and princesses. They can not earn living by themselves letting alone to take care of their parents. In addition, when they get in troubles, they immediately call for their parents’ help instead of solving problems alone.4 N:
Second, the fierce competition and the immense pressure require young people to shoulder more responsibilities than ever before. They have to work day and night to earn money and do not have much time to attribute to the family families. Then the burden comes to their parents. We are all familiar with these scenes: parents go to the supermarket to buy and cook food, or do the cleaning and washing, or even pick up their grandchildren after school, etc. Parents have already became a superman with a variety of vocations and what’s surprising is that a lot of parents enjoy themselves in these things.
Third, in today’s age(?), the society is the society for money(?the society is full of the worship of money). There is a famous proverb says that, money is not everything, but without money you can do nothing. Especially the commodity price always hovers at high levels recently (the inflation of prices), young people really need financial support from their parents to get better education and to start their own career.
In the end, it is understanding and reasonable for young people to depend on their parents. However, there should be a limit and standard to restrict young people from overly dependent on their parents. There will be a day that young people have to leave the nest finally. Young people should promote the development of intellect and ability to build a nest for their parents.
楼主语言不错，但是可能和我一样要注意语法和句子的使用了。

乔布斯：“记住你即将死去”。

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发表于 2011-10-18 20:13:31 |只看该作者

10月18独立
Do you agree that the government should support the scientific research even there’s no practical use?

Government has served a lot of responsibilities and obligations in social life. With the fierce competition and intensified pressure all over the world, the debate on how the government optimize the distribution of resources on what is widely dicussed. I hold the opinion in line with that government should support scientific research even there’s no practical use.
First, the government which undevelop scientific research is short-sighted. The government expenditure on scientific research will finally well paid in some extent even it may not become available immediately. Take submarine for example, the inventor of the modern submarine hasn’t received anything like the kind of recognition given to say the Wright brothers. After all, the submarine is primarily a weapon of war. Compared to the airplane, it is a technology touches relatively few of us. In the movie Forrest Gump, Gump’s mother has told Gump that life was like a box of chocolate, you never know what you're gonna get. People will never imagine what role submarine has played in the World War 2 and other arms race.
Second, the government support on the scientific research is a gateway to inspire innovations and encourage talents. Many people are full of great ideas and abilities. What they need is a platform and stage to exhibit themselves. With the help of government, they can put some creative ideas into practice and fulfill their potentials. These talents has found their niche and acquire the sense of achievement. Therefore, it will eventually become the national and humanity wealth.
Finally, I’m confused with the definition of scientific research whether has practical use. It is difficult to set up a standard for judging it. As we all know , there are basic sciences and applied sciences in education sphere. Can we say that the applies sciences is more important and available than basic sciences? So we should only pay our attention on applied sciences. Of course not, they all contribute to social well-being. The example is also applies to the government should or not support the scientific research even there’s no practical use.
To sum up, I reach a conclution that the government should support the scientific research even there’s no practical use. The famous physical expert Stephen Hawking has once said that the world has changed far more in the past 100 years than in any other century in history. The reason is not political or economic but technological----technologies that flowed directly from advances in science. A democratic and progressive government will never obstruct the development and investment on scientific research.

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发表于 2011-10-18 23:52:22 |只看该作者

10月17日独立哈

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发表于 2011-10-19 16:40:07 |只看该作者

10月19日独立
Politeness is the first lesson I have learned since I was a child. When I saw my neighbors, family members, classmates and teachers, I said hello to them. When I got stuck in troubles , I was polite to ask someone for a favor and then thank you for them. Therefore, I agree with that we should never be impolite to another person. Even through some people are less concerned with the huge impact and function of being polite to another person.
First of all, politeness is the symptom of a well-rounded society and culture. In thousands years ago in China, the rites of Zhou has dominated Feudal Society and became the regulation idea of governors. It guaranteed and maintained the existence of nation. In addition, It regulated the connections and socializations between people. Untill today, politeness is a traditional virtue of China.
Second, politeness is an important part of people’s behavior and morality. People should bear in mind that a man who impolite to other people will never get the respect and polite as feedback. Individuals all live in groups and connected with other people. If you are polite to everyone whatever his background, age, status, rich or poor, in some near future , you will get paid off. What’s more, behaving polite to other people will make yourself a good mood and enjoyment.
Third, politeness is the gold key to peaceful coexistence of human. Even seemingly unrelated things are actually interrelated in the age of sweeping globalization. Some not big deal things can explode with some fights in oral speaking. Take diplomacy for example, in the big world stage, diplomacy activities can show the image of a country and the attitudes it towards other countries. If the country diplomats cannot handle with the diplomacy stuff and rude to other countries .It will definitely affect the harmony of world and damage the relationships with other countries.
To sum up, I draw a conclusion that we should never be impolite to other people. Politeness is an essential characteristic people should have. Being polite to other people will bring you a wealth of advantages for your entire life.

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